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Corruption of Champions: Reanimation Edition Anonymous 10/04/2019 (Fri) 02:01:40 No.1364
This is the Corruption of Champions mod being developed by OtherCoCAnon and the denizens of /hgg/.
Corruption of Champions is a text-based flash game overhauled with new dungeons, new mechanics, new characters, and a lot of lolis.
The mod is open to content submissions, anons can and are writing new content to be implemented all the time.

Downloads
Latest Version (1.4.15.1)
https://mega.nz/#F!St0HiaTC!oNQs48SWTDvmDBLHWZuHHA

Use a standalone flash player (projector), this shit is no longer supported by any web browser.
Remember to save to file to prevent save loss.
https://www.adobe.com/support/flashplayer/debug_downloads.html

Information
>Game Related
Source Code: https://gitgud.io/BelshazzarII/CoCAnon_mod
Changelog: https://pastebin.com/CDU8byhd

>Thread Related
Previous thread: >>1
Thread Archives: https://gitgud.io/Blank/CoCAnon_mod/raw/OPT/Archives
OP Template: https://pastebin.com/raw/q38Ccy3n

>Writing Related
Content Submissions (Chronicles): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iuDsLw3PxshvL8yYUkOeiJr6DSJ7zpjaeGvumF65l_I
Submission & Misc. Archive: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1LGK4sPuWH69iEZ9ZmX2fnfDRrhj7h4hQ
Writing Guide: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PGysInt0S0VHYvPv0b__4xpHqrfbE-zikQiRonsnUsU
Bounty Board: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZUtah0gtbBQzB5kM7wElYlcNAwU8-QOgNkovO0_7WUI
>>1268
Sorry for the delay, I have excuses:
>//Lower bog temple encounter chance while she's working?
Very easy for me to do, if you were wondering.
>Howsoever unfirmamented the fantasy may be that carves the fashion of a new gown, engyved are it and I by... what little this realm beteems us.
I should have gotten you into a home long before this happened.
>wis of note and, ah, workable,
The lack of parallelism combined with the interruption make this a bit awkward, but not so much I'll hound you for it.
>so if you have any ideas or found something on your travels
I'll continue my vain protest that combining "have" with other verbs like this sounds horrible.
>you could ask the seamstress about it.
What does this "it" refer to?
>[TBD]
You might ask Koraeli about the plans for Akbal's pelt. Seems like a good fit. I'm struggling to come up with anything else.
>//No paragraph break
But it was more fun to imagine I gave you one of my strokes.
>It culminates in her finally half-canting towards you.
A tad archaic for narration, but it's pretty parsable from context, so I dunno.
>Perhaps disillusioned, but sufficiently allayed, she nudges her spectacles and goes back to her observation.
Why "disillutioned"?
>Nothing, right now.
The most inane complaint ever, but I don't like that comma.
>a quiet \"<i>Hmm</i>\" as Marielle
I believe that should be lowercase, as it's just a single word. The general standard is that you only capitalize if you're also going with commas, from what I remember.

More to come soon. Thank you once again for doing all this for me.
>>1365
We weren't even close to the bump limit.
>The lack of parallelism combined with the interruption make this a bit awkward
One of the things I meant with "rough around the edges". I'll try to come up with something more elegant. Or maybe just move the filler.
>I'm struggling to come up with anything else.
There's the spider silk, but the dress specifically mentions imbued magic, which she isn't capable of. Could have her make you just the underwear, but that looks a little odd.
>But it was more fun to imagine I gave you one of my strokes.
I would never plagiarise you in such a blatant way.
>A tad archaic for narration
What makes it archaic, the "canting"?
>Why "disillutioned"?
It's supposed to be implying her deflating a little, the "perhaps" making it a guess as to why that could be. Too strong a word? Too strange a guess?
>I don't like that comma
OK.
>The general standard is that you only capitalize if you're also going with commas, from what I remember
I actually don't know, and I've never read anything definitive about such cases. So far, I've been consistently capitalising those, no matter what. I generally treat them as dialogue, and only leave out the commas for the sake of aesthetics, since it would look too busy otherwise.
>>1367
>We weren't even close to the bump limit.
I don't think you're paying attention.
>What makes it archaic, the "canting"?
Yeah, I know the narration is inconsistent, but I think that's a step too far. It's a bit up to taste, though.
>Too strong a word?
I'd say so.
>I actually don't know, and I've never read anything definitive about such cases.
Looking it up, I'm able to find more weak evidence, though not much. The reasoning is that since it's not being treated as a sentence, there's no reason to capitalize it. I won't pester you about it.
>>1368
>I don't think you're paying attention.
The thread wasn't getting bumped but post limit is 800 and I doubt anything on this board is going to get deleted withing next year
ok, i'm planning on writing some. in accordance with the suggested procedure i'll do one of the scenes from the bounty board. which of the standalone scenes would be most appreciated?
>>1372
The Bazaar is being worked on so the missing tooltips would be helpful.
>>1372
Do you write like you post?
>>1374
unfortunately
>>1375
Please capitalize shit that should be capitalized in the actual story you write.
Shorter one today:
>A dress, for your own wardrobe.
I might recommend a proper sentence, though in game it might not feel as weird as it does to me here.
>She quickly catches herself though, and steers that with a light hem into a more subdued smile
This was a little difficult to parse on first reading. I might recommend replacing "that" with "it", and you could consider fiddling with word order.
>You had something classic in mind—long, flowing, elegant.
I feel like it's a bit odd to just attribute this to the player with no justification. You could do something in the tooltip or make it a bit less forceful.
>and makes no bones about it
Not sure that quite fits (though I'm now waffling back and forth). Also "make", and I'd recommend removing the comma. Unless you were trying to mix tenses, which is generally ill-advised before we get to the fact that it doesn't make logical sense here.
>be a good use for a silk as rare and valuable as your own daughter's
Very, very minor, but I might recommend "would" over "will" for this variation.
>She only cursively glances through the pouch
I do see a few select uses of "cursive glance" around (almost all in older works), but my instinct is that there's some confusion with "cursory", and I'm not seeing any adverbial usages like this one at all.
>(has wings)
For stuff like this, if you don't use spaces, there's a reasonable chance you'll have guessed the correct tag.
>a few close-ups regarding the more intricate areas
Don't know about "regarding" there.
>You'll take her word for it, then, and leave her to get started.
This tense mixing is only slightly awkward, but I'm pointing it out. When you keep it, I shan't shed a tear.
>>1405
>I feel like it's a bit odd to just attribute this to the player with no justification
Is an added "fancy" in the tooltip enough? No matter how I spin it, I either have to railroad the player's thoughts in some significant way, or have them design their own dress. The latter sounds a little excessive.
>Not sure that quite fits
How would it not?
>I might recommend "would" over "will" for this variation
I know it fits better, but I hoped to get away with it to avoid repetition with the "would" in the very next sentence.
>my instinct is that there's some confusion with "cursory"
I actually was split 50/50 between "cursive" and "cursory" in Marielle's content. No clue how I did that.
>Don't know about "regarding" there.
Why not?
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I can't select an option for sylvie that isn't [Fight]. Try to submit or fuck her after fighting her and the button simply refuses to work. Really annoying since I'm trying to get infested with slugs and I'll find her initial encounter before the slugs, forcing me to have to reload to avoid burning that bridge.

also how do I get rid of this QR window? it's huge and blocking parts of posts.
>>1425
Are you playing on an old version? That sounds like a bug that was fixed a while ago, and I wasn't able to recreate it. If you're on the most recent version, could you post your save?
>>1428
>Old version
Naw that was it. Must've missed an update or two because my current is 1.4.13 and the current seems to be 1.4.15.
>>1403
fucking obviously. i'm lazy, not an idiot
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We really need an option to just bend Lumi over her desk and breed her.
>Still no leotard undergarment
How do you guys except me to play as mecha pilot stranded on another world without correct clothing?
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>>1465
I usually don't say this, but clothing items are easy enough to write. Type it up on a pastebin or something. Once I finally so it, I'm going to do the same for the hybrid Naughty Nun+Lusty Maiden outfit.
>>1467
>I'm going to do the same for the hybrid Naughty Nun+Lusty Maiden outfit.
The author of the nun outfit is still writing things
I do not think it would be worthwhile if touched when the idea can be brought up to her instead
>>1461
Nobody'd write it properly so that she was an insane retard with a giant tongue piercing
Fran anon please complete Fran, she's the cutest thing that would appear in this game.
So finally we will be able to make lots of vampire kids with her.
>>1514
Just hope he dont try to remake it for the 8th time.
Also, is 2hufag frog girl shit finished? I liked it.
>>1535
I believe so?
But you'd need to get the proofread monkeys favor by appealing to their skill and generosity to prioritize it over other things. We're all counting on you, anon.
Fran's fine as it is now, we just need to find her sister so we can impregnate her as well.
>>1414
I thought I responded to this day of, apologies.
>Is an added "fancy" in the tooltip enough?
That would probably be good (although I'm not sure about "fancy, elegant"), but you could also consider using something like "classical" in the tooltip itself.
>How would it not?
It's not something you would make bones about, and it's clearly not ironic.
>Why not?
Don't think it's a common construction, but it's probably fine.
Alright, at least one finger on the wagon:
>The scraping of wood on wood, something opening, then snapping closed, and she emerges again
The way this nests is really unclear on first reading. You could consider sneaking in a "the sound of" before "something"; I think that would make it much clearer.
>and you watch her loosening up the lacing at the gown's back one by one
It'd have to be "laces" or something else countable for "one by one".
>[if (is taur)
I'll again note that just removing the space is generally what's needed.
>motioning you to put your arms high and forwards before she steps up
I believe you need a "for" after "you".
>than any worldly material
>than a material of this world
Was there a reason for this?
>straightening something out
I don't think the "something" works like it does in the other case. It would imply that's she's repeatedly straightening the same thing out, here.
>You don't even know what that means
Oh, thank you, finally.
>}] \"<i>A passing fine banquet to the eyes
Something happened here, but I don't know what.
>You admire it a little further,
"Further" is a touch odd.
>careful not to let the fine, unblemished silk come to any untimely harm.
"Careful" more naturally parses as modifying "you" for me (the construction isn't very friendly to moving a modifier out), but also, it's a bit mind-read-y when modifying the correct noun.
>That exhale sounded more like a sigh.
Pretty uncharacteristic of the game's narration, but not the absolute end of the world.
>much slower, and clearer, manner.
Why's that an interjection?
>[if (isfeminine) {other }]mother of the one whose silk that is
You need a "the" for this one.

I won't promise consistency, but work is continuing, I'll promise that.
you are now aware that the sand witch dungeon's map spells out SW backwards like the witches' language
>>1563
>I believe you need a "for" after "you".
That's perfectly fine to omit.
>Was there a reason for this?
Other than having fun with hyperbole? No. I wasn't quite sure whether it's supposed to feel like any other silk, so I went all out. Too much?
>It would imply that's she's repeatedly straightening the same thing out, here.
You sure? I think you could do that in either case, if the reader is hell-bent on seeing it that way. Doesn't feel like the more natural interpretation, though.
>Something happened here, but I don't know what.
Closing the conditional, a space, and the continuation of her dialogue. What's wrong?
>it's a bit mind-read-y when modifying the correct noun
I'm fine with both—it referring to "you", and the PC deducing her reasoning in case you read it otherwise. What else would she be careful about?
>Pretty uncharacteristic of the game's narration
Because past tense?
>Why's that an interjection?
Emphasis.
>>1594
>Other than having fun with hyperbole?
I was referring to the variation, not the content. I didn't notice any potential repetition on a brief scan.
>You sure?
It's noticeably off every single time I read it. When I point out things like this, it's because they're awkward, not because they're nonsensical. Would "some things" really be that horrible to you?
>What's wrong?
Apparently my medication. Thought I saw a formatting error that's not there.
>it referring to "you"
Wouldn't make the most sense ever.
>the PC deducing her reasoning in case you read it otherwise.
I'd just recommend some sort of hedge that makes it clear that it's the player's perception. I've been consistent in this preference.
>Because past tense?
Yeah.
>>1597
>I was referring to the variation
Then it's just me slightly preferring one over the other in their respective sentences. I could make them uniform, if it vexes you.
>I'd just recommend some sort of hedge that makes it clear that it's the player's perception.
That sounds plain unnecessary and inelegant in this case, and that's coming from someone who's been painfully diligent about reading no minds. But there, made both points of contention simply refer to the player instead.
>>1514
I'm trying to get back to working on Fran and Emily.
It really annoys me how I won't have them done by Halloween.
>>1535
>is 2hufag frog girl shit finished?
Unless i'm forgetting something. I probably should rewrite that scene of the pc fucking their tadpole daughter, because it's really bad.
>>1546
>wanting to knock up two loli sisters.
That's good taste.
Playing as human is fine and all but can we agree that the very best PC race from aesthetic point is catgirl?
>>1611
What about kitsune?
>>1476
Oh, can you contact her then? I had assumed she disappeared with the death of 8/f/ as I haven't seen her name around (blackthorne?)
Anyways if someone can, the basic gist is
>PC has these great outfits
>Wants to combine them into a "lusty Maiden Nun" outfit
>Mechanically just a merger of the two outfits' masturbation/victory sex scenes (Habit Masturbation & Cock Worship from NN, Bondage Titfuck and virgin bonus from LM)
>Maybe a bit of dressup text about the new outfit

Because
>>1614
>Clicked "Submit" instead of adding a picture, cutting the sentence off midway
*Because I feel like thematically the ideas of purity they have overlap and also because my lust for nuns is a bad habit
>>1611
>not being a dragon boy/girl
Foolish.
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>>1610
Yeah you should try to finish whatever there is on the frog girls, because i am tired of the ones currently in-game.
Good luck with fran too, don't die before finishing her.
>>1617
Sometimes I'll roll up a knight, and take Ember as my "Princess", slowly becoming a dragon knight in the process. Honestly I feel like it's the best route to go down as far as potential waifus go.
Ah, I found you all again.

Sharks.
>>1621
Welcome back dude.
Barreling forwards:
>It's definitely worth that much for you.
Just a note that "to" is significantly more natural here, especially because of "worth".
>She only cursorily glances through the pouch
It's autism, but you only mention handing her gems, and does the player have a spare pouch around?
>The scraping of wood on wood, something opening, then snapping closed
You didn't disagree with it last time, so I'll make the same comment about "the sound of".
>disappearing the petite seamstress in a cascade of silk
When you use "disappearing" transitively, it has a much more sinister meaning.
>You admire it a little further
You also didn't respond to this one last time.
>you take your leave in the same breath and wish her a good day.
The order of these verbs doesn't make logical sense.
>she says at last, though lets that fade again.
"Though" isn't the kind of conjunction you need here.
>'Tis a foison that eath out-feeds such, uhm... scantling article.
I want you to make very sure that "article" could be a mass noun.
>[if (furfag) {[if (silly) {...}]}]
You don't nest them if it's just checking for two things; you put them in the parentheses together. You can use && for "and" if you're feeling particularly helpful.
>//[Yes] greyed-out if insufficient money
If you can't pay 0 gems?
>the kind—and feeling—of the textile
One too many "the"s.
>Marielle's knowledge and experience show, as she
I would very, very highly recommend against that comma.
>from which she fishes a radiantly white, folded piece of underwear and delivers it over into your cupped hands with a faint bow.
The "from which" propagating to "delivers" is pretty awkward, and I would definitely recommend you mess with the structure.
>and its fine lace and embroidery's reliefs
I'm not sure you can make things link up in the way you want here. Is the possessive meant to apply to both "lace" and "embroidery"? If so, everything's fine, but if not, it's a bit messy.
>There's quite a bit of that, too
What does this "that" refer to? "Shadow" is the most clear antecedent, but it's obviously not what you want.
>but it's all still subtle enough to somehow steer free of the pitfalls of ostentation and bawdiness.
I'll preface this with a note that I love the vast majority of your narration, but this line might want to take some of its own advice. It's a matter of taste, though.
>stretches nine of them between one pair of hands,
Giving the exact count is a bit odd, since you wouldn't really notice that.
>a while go
ago
>[if (silly) {
You're too kind.
>You wonder about that. [...] Whatever is causing that
Mild repetition of "that".
>with anticipation etched onto the ivory of her face
You might consider "into".
>mothen
How glad I am that I got to the bottom today.

Thanks again for doing all this. I feel just like one of your dear girl's customers.
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>>1621
Shark girls are cute. CUTE!
>>1626
>does the player have a spare pouch around?
I think assuming that is preferable to imagining the player casually pouring a whole six hundred gems into her hands.
>You didn't disagree with it last time, so I'll make the same comment about "the sound of".
>You also didn't respond to this one last time.
>If you can't pay 0 gems?
I know you're a bit slow, but refreshing your page more often than once a week might be a good idea.
>When you use "disappearing" transitively, it has a much more sinister meaning.
I was thinking about magic shows when writing that. Can't you use it in a more light-hearted sense? I'm rather partial to that one.
>"Though" isn't the kind of conjunction you need here.
?
>I want you to make very sure that "article" could be a mass noun.
I know I'm omitting article's article, but need it be one?
>One too many "the"s.
Tricky one. It's "the kind of textile", but "the feeling of the textile". As "feeling" is at the end of that list, it should justify another "the", no? But then, does an interjection like that even make a list, or has it no impact?
>Is the possessive meant to apply to both "lace" and "embroidery"?
Yes, hence the rare sight of a plural "reliefs".
>this line might want to take some of its own advice
It's funny how I see about eighty percent of your complaints already coming as soon as I write the respective sentence. Fine, no pitfalls, then.
>Giving the exact count is a bit odd, since you wouldn't really notice that.
Can't the PC even count to ten? Must be a tough, living in the countryside.
>You might consider "into".
I did, and ended it with a coin toss.
>How glad I am that I got to the bottom today.
And how sad I am that I couldn't find a good place to use that word in.
>Thanks again for doing all this.
You're welcome, it was a lot of fun to write these. And thanks for still sticking to doing your proofreading. Marielle's been a lot better off for it.
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>>1621
Foolish child. To think one would become a separate entity from the whole.
>>1628
>Can't you use it in a more light-hearted sense?
Do people use that with an object in the context of magic shows? That doesn't sound familiar to me, so I'd recommend caution to avoid awkwardness.
>?
It's a subordinating conjunction. Those don't join verbs like that.
>but need it be one?
It's countable, so it needs some sort of determiner.
>Tricky one.
Yeah, I didn't know what to recommend at the time, but I might suggest a more intrusive change, however noble the goal might have been.
>It's funny how I see about eighty percent of your complaints already coming as soon as I write the respective sentence.
I can't write "it's all you can do to" and other dumb garbage without thinking of you any more.
>Can't the PC even count to ten?
Actively, but that would require them to think about counting them. Nine is enough that you generally won't just notice the number immediately.
>>1614

Since the death of 8ch, I have still been writing. I didnt know this place had been made so just fell out the loop.

I'm happy to discuss the possibility of the items being able to merge but there are a few issues. One being that the nun habit currently gives a victory sex scene similar to the Lusty Maidens Armor in that you arent penetrated.
>>1640
>One being that the nun habit currently gives a victory sex scene similar to the Lusty Maidens Armor in that you arent penetrated.
I know, but that's also kind of the reason I wanted to combine them. Create the ultimate Virgin Chad or something, but still have options. Also because the cock worship scene doesn't seem to get much use currently.
>>1641

Hmm, I could possibly whip up an 'upgraded' version that you can have made by Greta. Sorta more like a leotard/one peice, thigh high boots and hat combo that gives access to similar scenes. Have it give a bonus to virgin PCs (two bonuses if anal and vaginal as the outfit was meant to work for both genders) when teasing and offer a couple new victory scenes.

The problem is most the mastubstion scenes would take your virginity and when i wrote the item originally, i didnt want to be stepping on the toes of the lusty maidens armor.
>>1641
Also it seems odd that the worship cock scene doesnt get much use as i swear most cocks are big enough
>>1643
Right? I don't think I've found anything with a small dick aside from maybe Jojo pre-corruption. Everything's bigger in Mareth.
>>1642
That'd be cool. Also that way I can roll up another bridget clone.
>>1644
I'm not gonna be able to get on it right away, but I can add it to my list of docs to work on. Make a few more non-penatrative sex scenes to expand it, like a tit-job, hot digging and thigh fuck.
>>1645
No rush. Even I had been taking my sweet time with it and only got the basic idea of what I was originally planning to write and only barely had an outline when posting >>1467
>>1639
>It's countable, so it needs some sort of determiner.
It's also dialogue, and I faintly remember a similar argument about a countable noun without determiner in her speech, many months ago, where I ended up ignoring you with that very excuse.
>I might suggest a more intrusive change
Does it really need a change? Even reading the passage out loud to a nonexistent audience, it feels natural enough. Though as I said, I'm not familiar with the grammatical rules in such a case. From an instinctual standpoint, the "feeling" being placed last and the emphasis it receives by being an interjection make this sound to me like the proper way to do it, if there is one.
>Nine is enough that you generally won't just notice the number immediately
Definitely speak for yourself, and for yourself only, here. I'd draw that line at thirteen, everything below can be at least estimated at a glance by anyone possessing a functioning brain. Especially nine is a simple one to recognise. And the PC is doing more than glancing, anyway.
>>1647
>It's also dialogue, and I faintly remember a similar argument about a countable noun without determiner in her speech, many months ago, where I ended up ignoring you with that very excuse.
I thought that was based on some quality of the noun in question back then. Anyway, I don't think this is the kind of error a fluent speaker would make in dialogue, so I'd recommend the change.
>Does it really need a change?
You wrote "the kind of the textile". Yes, you should probably change that. If you want something less intrusive, you could switch one of the nouns to use the same construction as the other, e.g., "form and feeling".
>Definitely speak for yourself, and for yourself only, here.
I'm not. While I think I might be a little worse at it than average, nine is certainly above the range where most people would know at a glance. From Wikipedia:
>The accuracy, speed, and confidence with which observers make judgments of the number of items are critically dependent on the number of elements to be enumerated. Judgments made for displays composed of around one to four items are rapid,[2] accurate[3] and confident.[4] However, as the number of items to be enumerated increases beyond this amount, judgments are made with decreasing accuracy and confidence.[1] In addition, response times rise in a dramatic fashion, with an extra 250–350 ms added for each additional item within the display beyond about four.[5]
I think you might just be better at that than most people, in which case you shouldn't necessarily extrapolate from personal experience. You can look into "subitizing" if you'd like to read more.
>And the PC is doing more than glancing, anyway.
I would be perfectly fine with that. As I said, actively thinking about the number would be fine, but just slipping it into narration like this is slightly off. It's the kind of thing that many people probably won't notice, but might mildly bug someone someday, for how much that's worth to you.
>>1610
Just don't rush it, Fran-Anon.
The Fran content is top tier, you just need to be consistent.
I really like her kissing scenes.
Maybe have Emily teach her more about sex culminating in passionate baby making session.
Snuggles and your Frog girl is making my dick diamonds in anticipation for their implementation.
Please Fran anon, keep going, don't give up.
>>1620
I look forward in case to a pure Ember.
I always imagined her as the purest devoted waifu that would anything to keep you happy, a Dragon girl with princess-like beauty and she would make Amily look like a demoness in terms how virtuous she would be.
She would maybe want to date before and later would diligently beg to be inseminated.
>>1627
Especially Shark daughters.
Their only meaning of existence is to be their daddy's lovers.
I really would love a rundown of where all the loli content is, because so far I only know of the random Alice encounter, and then the gargoyle/ice sprite/Ember-loli. The discord is super anal about even mentioning loli content at all.
>>1661
The discord is to contain niggers like you.
>>1661
>hey guys can you help me find X while I can't be bothered to apply myself and think about where you'd logically find the answer
>I'm also from this literal who furry discord server where they talk about this mod so please be kind and help me!
>naughty nun's habit is being painstakingly written into the game despite being full of bugs and clothing-related TFs and scenes never working properly (vines, bimbo skirt in revamp, lusty maiden's armor)
>no new Scylla scenes despite the premise being literally identical
The fuck?
>>1672
>scenes never working properly
>>vines
I don't know how I'm saying this with a fucking text based game, but lol git gud shitter
>>1673
You can't just expect someone to read text in a text-based game. That's a foreign concept very little people consider, do you really think it could work for someone like him?
>>1673
>>1674
And the Pedant IDF arrives on time to virus bomb any and all criticism.
>very little
you mean very few, sweetie :^)
>>1675
Your "criticism" consists of several barely connected points that don't even form a single whole complaint. If you want to get people to listen to your complaints you need to learn to concisely form your thoughts into words and not just throw whatever you have on your autistic mind into a post and call it a day, you dumb nigger.
>>1672
You should elaborate on the issues you are having instead of complaining about non specifics. In the traditional fashion of good bug reporting you should state useful information such as:
>what OS are you using
>what version of the game are you using
>Are you using a browser or a flash player
>what version of flash player are you using
>Can you reliably recreate the bug
>what conditions are in effect when the bug occurs
>how does the bug bug, in detail
If you sumarize all of this as "The fuck?" then you can expect no constructive discussion beyond ridicule. This is like 2 decade old forum tech support standards, probably older.
>>1661
Discord is for gays anyway, why don't you go back there.
Not really a bug but if you're
>at or above 7'
>Green skin
>Muscle over 60
>elf ears
Can that count as an orc? Alternately orc TF item y/n?
Also not directly related but what's the opinion on full-tf abilities? Like if you go all-in on one particular TF you get a bonus ability/perk? I know cats can gain flexibility and harpies have the egg thing but I can't recall others. Feels like TFs should have that as a standard and I don't mind brainstorming them up myself if enough people are interested. Though, to be fair, the mechanical side of things is a little cloudy for me so I'd be just giving the general gist of how each one would work.
>>1683
That used to be a common thing but I think people wanted to factor it out so you dont have to go a in on a TF to get Abilties.

There still are a lot obvious in game, but I think that's cause how they were originally.
>>1685
That's unfortunate. I still might try to make an Orc tf item because the idea of being a big sweaty orc is appealing personally.
Maybe puzzle out a perk like "Orcish Virility" that boosts cum production/pregnancy speed or something. We already have a berserk ability (and lustzerk, however you get that one), so that's out.
I'd probably also do a generic Orc Domination (one for both sexes, with futa getting a choice?) scene but that's already out the window since I am kind of terrible at writing extended scenes and generic victory scenes seem to be hit-or-miss on whether they work.
I'll write up the basic item and TF stuff, then worry about the domination scene later if at all.
In the meantime have some greenskins from my collection.
>>1686
>and generic victory scenes seem to be hit-or-miss on whether they work.
Generic scenes are fine for the procedurally generated games like Lilith's Throne. However, with a game like this that's hardly acceptable. LT and CoC are both text-based games, but go about it in a completely different way where one can have an incredible amount of variables but the scenes remain almost the same between encounters and the other being much more suited for specific and deliberately written content.
Generic one-size-fits-all scenes rarely belong in this game.
>>1685
Other mods have, but we haven't been moving away from TF-based abilities at all.
>>1672
>>naughty nun's habit is being painstakingly written into the game
That was done a year and a half ago. You're a little slow.
>literally identical
One of the most disgusting abominations in the game, worse than the furries, is not literally identical to an article of clothing just because they're both nun-based.
Is there any food that doesn't transform you? In the same token, is there a way to enable satiety and remain a human?
>>1672
Background code has already been reworked three times and cleaned up, fixing all issues with previous TF gear and creating the framework to actually add more of said gear to the game, since the year two thousand fucking eighteen. Not even Revamp has done this.

>vines
They were never broken in either the initial or subsequent implementations and the biggest issue is niggers not reading or playing enough of the game to learn how to take them off. You're retarded.
>>1695
>Background code has already been reworked three times and cleaned up
No, it hasn't been specifically touched at all outside of a few typo fixes. There are a few game-wide changes that it's been included in, but that's stuff like formatting and how stats are handled, which has nothing to do with anything you're saying.
>fixing all issues with previous TF gear and creating the framework to actually add more of said gear to the game
I don't know what issues you're referring to specifically, but there is absolutely no framework at all. Every single implementation of stuff like this is done independently.
>They were never broken in either the initial or subsequent implementations
This is the biggest crock of shit. The original forest gown had a ton of bugs and issues that needed to be fixed, and there were several bugs with the vines upon their release (and I wouldn't be surprised if there's at least something still wrong with them).

In short, you have no clue what you're talking about, to an almost confusing degree.
>>1695
Honestly speaking I wouldn't be surprised if people pretty much stoped asking about the vines if Rathazul Ex Machina gave answer when asked about it instead of week later
You know what doesn't have problems with vines?

Sharks.
>>1618
I do consider the frog-girl done for now at least besides rewriting that one scene. More content can be added to the frog-girl rewrite later on too.
Also, thank you for wishing me good luck on Fran. I'll do my best not to die before finishing the vampire lolis.
>>1650
>The Fran content is top tier
Fran being top tier is a bit far, but I'm happy you enjoyed Fran's kissing scenes. It's genuinely nice to read that you're looking forward to Snuggles and the frog-girl, thank you.
>>1683
>>1685
>>1686
I've always wanted a way to distill Minotaur blood for gaining height, would making TF items dis tillable for certain traits and qualities be viable?
>>1696
>>1695
are yu guys talking about to completely different things?
a piece of gear and a scene?
>>1708
Maybe add an alchemy item made from gro+ and minoblood that increases height, and one made from reducto and goblin ale to reduce height.
>>1702
No Fran-anon. Fran was, at least in my opinion, perfect. You have written great pure vanilla waifus but you need to be consistent.
Quality testing and Grammar-anons are the ones that will do quality proofreading, though.
Where is Fran and her sister going to live in camp? In a nearby cave to sleep during the day?
Please, don't give up, i can't wait until we can sleep with the loli vamp sisters.
I remember someone making a lolification item. Did that ever make it in?
>>1708
Could have shortstack shortcake (have it sold at the bakery and by Telly?) as a height decrease item. Vala's scenes can increase height and maybe have Lifting Lemonade and a height increase item? Idk
>>1714
Lolipop, and yes
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>>1268
Holy fuck I hope this isn't merged. It's like doing mescaline and then reading something by Blauz. if he decided to snort a thesaurus. I haven't read anything purple prose this lurid since RP threads on GameFAQs. Holy shit, you're an embarrassment to the entire corpus of English literature.
>>1719
>>1268
Jesus fuck your writing is so awful it gave me a stroke while typing out this post.
>>1717
that and the lolicon perk
Did the thread get posted somewhere again, or what?
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>>1722
seems so
>>1723
also it appears only the fenoxo crowd is linking us
>>1722
Vch was down so we got flooded with Mark's trash.
>>1725
>
There are way worse fags around though.
>>1719
Glad you liked it. There might be more to come, if I find both time and ideas.
>>1710
>>1708
Could be combined with that cooking expansion if anyone is actually working on it
>>1694
Hard biscuits from the Tel'Adre bakery
>>1694
fnd water from oasis
Kiha's dinners
Protein shakes in bazaar(though drinking them kicks you back to camp for some reason)
Fish you get from that lake girl
Your cum if you are cat
Fairies
Teas
Most of stuff in bakery(makes you fat tho)
Pumpkin seeds
Calming mints
Dragon eggs
And probably a bunch more
>>1808
>fnd water from oasis
Peaches and water from oasis*
>>1808
>Your cum if you are cat
Or just have a big enough dick
>>1808
>Fairies
wut
>>1817
They taste like popcorn
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Remember, a moment of laxity spawns a lifetime of heresy.
>>1821
based
don't understand why you posted it here tho
Did the criteria for gaining ascension points change along with how it works, or is it still the same as in the original revamp?
>>1836
I think you can obtain 2 points extra if you do manor or tower

Though with how we are getting more and more shit to buy with them more things could use points rewards and maybe some way of buying some

Maybe some challenges for a run to select when ascending for extra points, maybe even perks or items
Stuff like disabling saving/loading, staying a virgin, ascending inside of a month, being forced to fight Kriemhild Gretchen after a month, staying pregnant without break longer than a day or being forced to use only spells
Some challenges could even be locked until you do something in the game like burning magical girl dress or do specific quests
>>1838
It would be nice to have alternative means to get a large amount of points other than "get X companion" "make babby with X companion", (where only some of them actually count).

Maybe if there were a series of run-specific challenges like you said, that can cover a couple different playstyles and story choices. I would be nice to have compensation for points you'd miss out on in a certain playstyle (i.e. the celibate Paladin who retains their virginity to the end gets extra points to make up for the fact that they had no children and purged all corruption).

On the Ascension note, is skill mastery permanence only supposed to last until the next Ascension? If so, it's kinda a waste of points.
So how much of clothing update is coded in already?
Assuming the game got run challenges added in what would you guys like to see?
>>1850
I know nothing about CoC, but if a game is AP/time-based at all, having trophies/achievements/rewards/whatever for achieving things in a certain amount of time is a pretty obvious way to make time management/efficiency desirable rather than something people ignore. Of course those who like to take it slow or not be efficient will bitch up a storm if the rewards are too good.
>>1850
>Wizard-Mode: Start off as a mage, but the moment you have sex you lose your spells and can't use magic anymore.
>/fit/ Mode: Start off with the "Bro" perks and mastery in fists, but you lose 5STR and 5Tough every day unless you ingested cum yesterday.
>Tenga/fleshlight Mode: Start with all the latex perks, 99999 Hours left of "Heat", and contraceptives.
>Serious Business Mode: Lethite takes over the world in 100 days. You need to beat her before then.
>Reel Hooman Bean Mode: Fucking anything causes a transformation based on that thing (fucking something triggers a "use" of its coresponding TF item. A plage rat would trigger "mouse cocoa", for example). Your "human" score acts as a multiplier for your stats.
>Puberty Mode: Start as a teen with 99999 "Rut", and a dick possessed by Exgargantuan.

Off the top of my head.
>>1855
>/fit/ Mode: Start off with the "Bro" perks and mastery in fists, but you lose 5STR and 5Tough every day unless you ingested cum yesterday.
>ingested cum yesterday
Why not just have it so that you your stats go down if you don't spend at least three visits to the gym instead?
>>1857
Because the joke is "/fit/ is hella gay"
Anyone here like to play as a norseman rather then a paladin?
>>1850
A mode where max corruption bad ends you.
Demonic enemies would spawn more often, and be buffed. Any transformation you underwent would increase your corruption unless they were giving you back your human parts. To make it more likely that a player would be in danger of corruption from transforming: realistic mode would be locked in and 0 satiety would kill you. Since most cases of hermaphrodism (according to Amily, at least) are the result of the demon's influence, sex with a herm would also corrupt you. You'd constantly gain corruption simply for being in Mareth (kinda like creeping taint) unless you were a paladin or religious. Not much of a challenge, but more cements the threat of corruption and how the world got fucked by it.
>>1869
Honestly except for the forced realism mode I'd argue this should be standard anyways. For a game focused on corruption, it does fuckall. On top of that we see at least two people go corrupt and lose their souls via lethicite but I find it disappointing that we can't get that when I can be bad-ended by eating too many of certain TF items that DON'T increase corruption.
Just some miscellaneous fixes.
https://pastebin.com/raw/3myWt4qk
>“I was hoping that idiot, Giacomo, did not dilute the 'potion' again.”
I'm pretty sure these commas in the Cerulean potion scene are unnecessary. Later on in the scene (and in all of the repeat scenes if you keep drinking potions) it mentions you drinking your fill of the demon's milk, so your satiety should probably increase. Also, your corruption should probably go up by a larger amount: a single point for engorging yourself on demon milk straight from the tap seems a bit low.
>>1858
>hella
The webring is a long fucking way from whence thine came. Go back. You aren't welcome here.
>>1883
You're trying too hard to fit in.
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>>1884
he's trying too hard, but he isnt wrong
>>1885
and now I deeply regret using that and not literally any other sudoku pic
>>1886
>>1885
Man imagine being a cuckchan frogposter and thinking you can try and tell anyone else to leave
>>1887
>Implying people on cuckchan don't use hella
These two are from reddit or whatever site is currently used by ten years old kids nowadays, the frog merely confirms it
>>1888
I think one's usage of "hella" might have more to do with their geographical location rather than what sites they use, but I don't mean to invite Californians here either.
>>1873
Good job.
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who ever decided fera's second encounter had such a low encounter rate, or that the deepwoods would have that shitty dullahan monopolize the entire encounter pool past 7pm is a nigger.
Christ why don't one-time or seasonal events take a higher priority than the millionth time some slut goblin waddles out or akbal decides to eat up another encounter.
And speaking of which there sound be a dedicated "no" button. Hotfixes don't fix shit when the denial option is mapped wherever because apparently neither fen or the revamp crews decided maybe having every option to say "no" for every encounter be somewhere different so a misclick could have you accidentally start a fight with someone you don't want to because what makes you back away from the tentacle beast also will have you follow a kitsune or bend over for tentacles.
>>1897
Fera's encounter rate is the standard rate, same as most encounters. Or a really high encounter rate if you eat more pumpkin seeds after the first encounter.
>>1900
>>1900
>Fera's encounter rate is the standard rate, same as most encounters.
I'm having a hard time believing that since i wasted a half hour of actual time and a week of in-game time spamming the deepwoods.
>>1897
I think Dullahan was added before we could stay up to midnight(How can we even do anything this late without magic or TFs?)
She seriously should be moved to be only encounterable past 10PM anyway
>>1902
Do you have to wait a year after the first encounter? I got it almost instantly after changing my date, but maybe it was just a coincidence.
>>1906
It's 7 days of game time.
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>>1888
Pepe was lack of thought to the times, I've only recently realized what kind of people use the word cringe and zoomer presently because it's easier withdraw from society to work on personal projects.
I was in a bad state for the first couple weeks when I didn't know where to go to shitpost
I'm really glad you guys are here
>>1904
>Moved to past 10PM
This, and while we're at it, Button 1 should also be empty at every such encounter so people spamming the 1 hotkey to skip text wouldn't just bum rush into saying yes to shit like tentacles or bending over.
>>1910
One is a gameplay problem and the other is you being a retarded mong. I'll let you figure out which one needs to be fixed on the game's end.
>>1910
Yes please, I just wanted to grind, not get dicks up my ass.
It feels kind of shitty that I can still act like a civilized person at 100 corruption unless I want to talk to Kiha. I get that she might not want to talk to me, but I don't like losing the option to not-rape her just because of that. Especially since I can decide to not take over the farm, or even decide to never take it over and generally be heroic at 100% normally.
>>1888
wasted get.
>>1943
100 corruption is kinda dumb at the moment. All it's for is unlocking some of the weirder content, except half the shit you can only do with high corruption is perfectly normal shit like fucking a goblin up the ass instead of the vagina.
>>1947
>fucking a goblin up the ass instead of the vagina
That really should be more pure, considering the champ is supposed to be here to stop monsters instead of make more.
Incidentally fucking an actual demon up the ass isn't corrupt at all.
>>1948
It's because you are getting in contact with corrupt/tainted fluids.
>>1947
That's because it was content made by the furries anal despisers that consider that corrupt and the scene has you cruelly anally rape when it's not corrupt to assfuck Tamani (Who uses a lot more of corrupt shit).
A lot of the "vanilla COC" scenes should be remade because they are outright terrible.
>>1364
Game needs a proper DEUS VULT route for paladinfags on a mission to smite and purge the world of degeneracy. You're supposed to be the champion sent to stop the demons and clean up everything anyway. Might as well go all the way and actually succeed.
So will clothing update be version 1.5 or just 1.4.16?
>>1969
nah we need to have an ending where we can live in a huge castle with all the waifus and daughter-wives.
>>1971
Believe it or not there actually are people who play Corruption of Champions with the sole goal of purging everything.
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>>1972
Based
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>>1969
>>1972
DEUS VULT
It's the only playstyle I know. I've done it three times and I'm about to do it a fourth now that I've re-discovered all this. Stats are shit in one of them due to not realizing how bullshit mable is
Is there some sort of list to determine which flags are what from this mod, or are they already marked and I'm retarded?
>>1972
What's th point of a game where you fight evil if there is no chance of failure am I right?
>>1972
Sure but what's better than having a harem of waifus ready to be impregnated.
Also loli daughters to sleep together, headpat and let them service you.
>>1991
>service you
ya lost me
>>1992
You know how Kiha sometimes makes you some good food if you hang out with her?
Something like this

While at it when will we be able to put others on cooking duty so we can start each day with breakfast and get bento for when we are going off to fuck eldritch horrors from another dimensions?
And no, Ember's eggs don't really count(they are pretty close tho)
I can't seem to trigger the "Rent-an-Alice" scene, what am I doing wrong?
I don't have Alices in my codex.
>>1995
It's a 50/50 chance (unless you have loli disabled, in which case it's the only Alice encounter you can get). What are you doing to get it?
>>1996
Searching for an Alice in the deepwoods
>>1997
This gives me very little information. Are you only encountering the alternate intro? How many times? Are you not encountering Alices at all? It sounds like you're most likely just having bad luck.
Minor nitpicks about some perks: It's pointless for Channeling to require Spellpower since it already requires Mage, which itself requires Spellpower. Masochist should probably require Corrupted Libido like Sadist does, for consistency. Iron fist 3 is gated behind NG+, is that really necessary? It's the only perk that requires that, and doesn't seem so overpowered as to justify it.
Speaking of technical issues there's times where fucking Anita (the harpy in the Bazaar restaurant) leads to the scene ending early.
small issue, when fighting a minotaur and blinding him, his tease attack still says "smiles at you", when it should automatically fail.
>>1993
>cooking
oh rad
>>2009
You know, it doesn't make perfect sense that blind stops enemy tease attacks, because if you think about it, blind girls are pretty hot.
>>2013
Would you do a blind bald old fuck?
Female characters (including PC) should get a bonus to tease when blinded meanwhile males should always fail.
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>>1993
>While at it when will we be able to put others on cooking duty so we can start each day with breakfast
Aren't there already scenes for them cooking the PC breakfast after sleeping together for the night? Could've sworn ember did at least. Snuggles if she ever makes it in cooks eggs for the player in the morning; assuming they slept with her for the night.
You can build a house in this game. I think it'd be a neat thing if, when you slept with a companion/lover, it was in your cabin.
>>2016
I want to be able to expand the cabin into a bigger one with rooms for followers etc.
>>2018
I just want the cabin to carry over ascensions. I've just stopped bothering to build build anything in the camp at this point.
>>2016
I remember people discussing improving cabin with extra rooms like something for alchemy(Could add more stuff to Rathazul for example), library(someone even wrote it as new building) or doing other things in the camp like fishing spot or upgrading the walls

>>2024
Speaking of ascension, what if achievements gave extra ascension points?
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The obsidian vines aren't capitalized here.
>>2026
>Speaking of ascension, what if achievements gave extra ascension points?
They'd have to be saved to individual characters instead of a separate master file for that. Also, some already overlap with ascension point granting actions, such as the dungeon completion ones, or the wizard duel one.
God damn took me a fucking month to find my way here from limbo.

Did the anon writing symbi ever finish?
Oh shit, glad to find these threads again.
Apparently you can encounter an Alice in the deepwoods that sells herself for 20 gems, I have never seen her, is it a 1 time event?
Or is it just RNG screwing ne over?
Same for the lost cats in Tel'Adre, single time event?
>>2041
>>2049
Did someone post us on a different goddamn site again?
>>2051

I wasn't on a different site, I've been busy with other bullshit. So last night I did a search found the github and then kept searching till I found this place. If you want to prevent finding this place the way I did you would need to remove any mentioning OtherCoCAnon
>>2051
Literally just googled "Corruption of champions hentai games general"
>>2051
>>2057
>>2058
google probably scraped us
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When making Applesauce for Kelly as a herm, "taste my summer flavor" should probably be in italics like other internal monologues.
If the giant turtle gets a dick from destroying the factory, her mention of this mixes up what should be italicized in talk cycle 2.
Sophie at the corrupted farm is missing a space in the type of egg she'll provide
If you shouldra dick a faerie while at high corruption, there's an extra You when you toss her into a bush
The goblin with a gun claims not to be used to being on top, but I think she's supposed to be saying that shes used to being on top as that would make more sense here.
The Parry perk says it gives "a chance to deflect blow", should be "blows"
>>2027
>>2060
>When making Applesauce for Kelly as a herm, "taste my summer flavor" should probably be in italics like other internal monologues.
This sentence makes me want to lean back and accept death.

Fixed all that, thanks. Were you any closer to releasing that theme? I know a lot of anons were interested in the final version.
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>>2065
I still have a few issues with it, but between the few things I can't change (database text color for perk pre-reqs you've already met/names of perks you have, etc) and stuff that's inconsistent (like the title screen text that randomly ignores my settings in pic related) I kinda gave up. I did change a shitty looking button I made and the even shittier monster bar pic, but it's not perfect. If anyone wants it, changing the swf to zip and unzipping should work, I think. I don't actually know if that works here.
>>2067
The swf symbol looks cooler than my theme and I must now commit sudoku to restore my honor.
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>>2068
it's from shadowrun, dont ask me why we have it everywhere for swf and pdf files
>>2016
>>2018
It'd be cool if you just ended up building a town and by the end of it just about every named character in the game is living in it one way or another.
>>1857
That'd be hell in early game if you don't manage to find the city within the first few days.
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>>2087
Maybe make it so you can sense gym equipment from a mile away, raising the encounter chance on finding the city?
>>2089
Would finishing the challenge unlock permanent gym membership?
I must confess. I encountered an Alice for the first time today, because all those months i've been diving into that loli without thinking.
>>2089
>PC traveling through the desert
>The sun is cooking his exposed flesh, and the sand gets in every nook and cranny
>Suddenly a full body shiver hits him when he realizes something dire: he hasn't even SEEN a gym in days
>PC begins to panic as he combs the desert for any trace of something vaguely resembling a weight set, or protein of any sort
>PC is considering lifting rocks and drinking his own cum when he sees a figure on the horizon
>This figure seems protective, fraternal. A brother you've never met but have known his whole life
>A'niki
>PC follows the figure, scaling dunes and stopping only to drink at an oasis he found until eventually he encounters a city in the desert
>There's a guard, but that doesn't matter
>There's a centaur talking to him, but that doesn't matter
>There's some fox with a crotch bulge the size of your head, but he's sure that's just a hallucination
>Finally his tired feet let him stop
>The golden doors stand before him with the holy phrase inscribed above them
>"Gym"
>The PC's pilgrimage has led him to holy ground once more
>A'niki hands him the fee for entry, then returns to heavy to spot Xxyz
>>2107
Poetry
>>2107
At last, a high quality story set in CoC universe that isn't actually in game
Am I retarded or is the nun's victory scene not showing up anymore? Wasn't it just "win against something with a dick"?
>>2112
It's "win against something with a giant dick".
>>2114
ah. what counts as "giant" because I figured the imps already are pretty big but apparently it works with ceraph? I feel like the condition can be lowered a bit since I think the only things with "giant" dicks are minotaurs and that's a bad idea.
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>returns to heavy to spot Xxyz
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This added any vore with player as pred? I saw something about unbirth with a 'nephila' queen, or whatever that is
>>2126
Honestly the Nephilia content is some of my favorite for how deep it goes. My only regret is that the end does basically what you'd expect, and I couldn't "compress" it all into a more aesthetically pleasing package somehow.
>>2127
Where do you even find this stuff? Done some casual playing and haven't found any transformatives.
>>2126
Yes, but don't tell Satan, he couldn't handle the truth.
>>2128
You need to have parasites enabled, it's basically a female version of worms.
>>2115
Its win against something with a 10 inch or more dick. I'm looking into this being lowered
>>2129
Is satan even still around? I haven't seen him chime in lately.

Though this layout makes differences between names and trips and anon harder for me to see. Something about this shade of green on the other shade of grey-green on darker grey-green that fucks with my eyes.
>>2134
Try a nightmode add-on
It seems it's possible for obsidian vines to turn a naga lowerbody into vine legs without changing the number of legs you actually have from one to two. Wouldn't have noticed if I didn't race my centaur kids only to find myself "slithering" on a pair of root legs
>>2137
Fixed, thanks.
Female Izma's 69 scene needs a rewrite. The scene still treats Izma as a herm.
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Update when
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Spare "]" when discussing Holli's magic
Missing "ago" when raping factory incubus' ass (does that matter, is he getting replaced/removed with the reworked dungeon(s)?)
Someone else pointed out the tail-coil thing with obsidian vine grab, so I'll just mention that the squeeze can't decide whether it's using one vine or many.
Not a bug or anything, but if the player is a dryad, maybe the Succubus Gardner could consider them a floral pet?
>>2149
It's been a little difficult getting it out due to many factors, but it shouldn't be too much longer before it's out
>>2149
I've been busier lately, and Marielle's a big chunk of work to go through. Apologies for the delay, but hopefully the payoff is worth it.
>>2151
I wouldn't make promises, and I don't know where you're getting "not too much longer" from, but work is progressing.
>Minotaur Cum Addict
>Slime fluid hunger
>Akbal's Buttslut
>Fera's perks
>Exgargantuan tits
>Bogworm dick
>Eel Pussy
0 Corruption
It's funny that Marae's blessing (and the perk from valentine's day) enables you to be a bigger slut than you could have been without it and stay pure. Basically just need to meditate with Jojo, talk to amily, and burn some forests. I'm more heroic as a cum-addicted slime-nun than I ever was as a proper hero (sans Paladin mode)
>>2161
Having a minimum corruption would make sense, increased by things like that.
>>2165
Don't get me wrong: that was entirely planned to be a "Pure Slut" who's purely slutty as a battle plan. I just find it funny that the two perks that reduce incoming corruption also let you get away with more.
>>2161
>Bogworm dick
That sounds like an insult I'd hear get yelled at me at 2am in an Eastern European country.
>>2168
I mean it kind of does. Invades dicks but forces the host to sometimes need to take it up the ass. Could be a roundabout way of saying someone has the gay.
>>2131
Where can I find them, if I have them enabled?
>>2172
In the .swf file you can download from the folder in the OP.
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>Content for the male PC to 'educate' shark daughters about sex
Oh my lord, that's like half of all my fetishes. Is there anything planned for a female PC to handle the tigersharks, because that might blow my mind apart
>>2180
Can I get a source for that?
>>2180
Unfortunately you can't repeat that event unless you make Izma pop more shark daughters.
I wish there would be a sub-scene menu like Sophie to fuck shark girls either one or two or all of them.
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When first meeting Jeremiah, he's interested in "your" instead of "you"
When sparring with Follower Helia, choosing a victory threesome brings you back to the end of battle sex selection instead of granting a reward and sending you back to camp.
>>2184
SHAAARKS
>Ages without anyone going "Gonna write first reply I get"
>The activity only getting slower over time
RIP this bunker
>>2191
I don't see you pitching in any contributions.
>>2191
>>Ages without anyone going "Gonna write first reply I get"
The two who have been doing that are either dead or busy being a good little code monkeys. You're welcome to fill in their shoes. And for a bunker, it's been decently lively here, I'm just worried we might never get our home back, the longer this exile goes on.
>>2193
>I'm just worried we might never get our home back, the longer this exile goes on.
That's the problem with a game that thrives on contributions from people. A bunker will never get the same mileage as 8chan did with all the people posting. The chances of anons writing content were already somewhat small, but a bunker completely nukes that into the ground because of there being barely any traffic. While newfags are a cancer, not having regular anons pass by is a detriment for this as well.
It really kind of sucks with the situation we're in, I hope Jim delivers with 8kun.
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First request I get i'll try my best to write it.
>>2200
vore content please?
>>2200
Leaving donation in kitsune shrine
>>2200
Marble and Helia threesome, bonus points for lactation play.
That or rutting Isabella.
>>2193
That's the nature of our societal game of cat and mouse. OC land gets invaded by normalfag aggregates who copy paste the OC repeating it ad infinitum thus driving out the content creators. I figured I out I would have to leave 8chan eventually 2 years ago, I just assumed it would be a situation like cuckchan where the owners were absolute cancer not foreign agents attempting to destroy it.
>>2200
Tigershark daughter getting curious about femPC mom
Convincing Izma to give in to having sex with your children
>get 502 errors
>First guy asking to do writeups appears during that
McFucking kill me. I just want a morning scene where Isabella and Sophie both bond over the PCs small dick. They are two of the only characters to even acknowledge it in a mostly positive light that aren't a random encounter in a mountain and I feel like they'd get along.
>>2205
this
Do plague rats not spawn unless you pollute the lake? Do they count as a source of mouse cum? Because the machine in the gym isn't working and I'm too pure to rape amily and jojo and don't want to
>>2208
They spawn regardless, if you would read the changelog you would know that they have replaced the Imp Overlord.
>>2194
Well, if at least the cripple fuck is stopped from being such a shill trying to de-platform 8kun, that would be great.
Question for you knowledgeable folks, how small of a dick do you need for the feminize imp scene?
Think I came across a glitch with the Nephila infestation. No matter how much imp cum I took, the amount they hungered for never went down, and eventually my level went down because of it.
>>2216
Having played more on it, this seems to apply solely to level 4 Nephila infestation.
>>2205
But that's in the game already.
>>2208
They don't count as a source of mouse cum, friend.
and my frustration reaches it's peak.
>>2222
Yeah tell me about it. They drop the mouse TF item so it might as well. My chubby goo girl has gotten maximum muscle and I still hunger for mouse cum. It wouldn't be an issue if the option to fuck jojo wasn't removed. And getting amily to grow a dick when you already have one is impossible until she's in the camp.
Also since this is eels and not nephilia, the mouse girl in the bakery doesn't exist.
>>2231
From what I've found, sometimes it counts as mouse cum and sometimes it doesn't. Frustrating.
>>2219
Incorrect.
>>2234
But I'm looking at the scene in the code at this very moment, anon.
>>2215
the source code is available in the op. search through it for the scene and check the requirements, and don't waste posts again.
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>>2201
This request was a little vague and i'm not sure what sort vore scene you would want exactly. I suppose the common thing would be to have the naga swallowing the champion whole for a bad end? Unless you wanted something like the pc chopping up a minotaur and making burgers out of him or maybe that isn't vore content.
>>2202
https://pastebin.com/SdFnZVat - offerings/donations to the shrine.
It's a little short but I tried to write the option to leave some gems or a biscuit at the shrine. Made me think it would've been neat if the kitsune girl we have was some sort of forgotten shrine deity that the player could take home by leaving lots of offerings/donations to the shrine.
>>2242
You can just rewrite aiko from the ground up with in mind, i dont think anyone would care. Still, its a interesting idea, the shrine isnt used for anything more grand than becoming a 9 tailed pure kitsune after all.
>>2242
>Made me think it would've been neat if the kitsune girl we have was some sort of forgotten shrine deity that the player could take home by leaving lots of offerings/donations to the shrine.
I want to say the weeb mod has something like that, but the quality probably leaves a lot to be desired.
what area is lacking the most when it comes to content? I want to say it's either the normal woods or the glacial rift. Also, does anyone else wish there was more content involving the gargoyle? Unless I'm misremembering her horribly all she does is quickly loredump some info on you about being raped by demons and then her story arc ends before you can actually do anything for her like fix up the cathedral or help her get over her PTSD and take her back to your camp.
>>2252
Rift or Crag definitely, they're almost devoid. Next batch of sprites soon. -ish. maybe.
Gargoyle is a common request, but it's simply a case of nobody really wanting to delve into taking that bull on by the proverbial horns.
>>2252
Straight up Explore option is kinda lacking as well
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I want Fran to happen, please Fran-anon don't give up on them.
Pics related.
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>>2245
I think it'd be fine to just write a new character instead of rewriting Aiko. No reason the pc can't have more than one kitsune wife. Who doesn't want countless loli kitsune daughters running around their camp? Think of all those wonderfully soft tails.
>>2257
It seems to be a rather common plot. I remember one from when I was just a wee lad where a guy had a fox loli and oppai loli tanuki move in with him after visiting a hot spring; it was great.
>>2259
https://pastebin.com/SQMegRLC - Bog mansion layout
https://pastebin.com/b758NbDg - Vampire sisters - part 1
I'm working on it still but here's what i've done. While it is mostly room descriptions; i've gotten some of the first meeting done too but need to do the pc fighting Emily, raping/killing her, and the other way to all that.
>>2253
Doesn't the crag have Circe, the tower with the dumb puzzle, hellmouths that have been getting a lot of content recently, and a unique boss that drops one of the best armors in the game? It's still not a lot when you realize most of those are just one-off encounters, but it's still a lot better than the rift that only has three enemies that all barely have any unique sex scenes and some dumb god living in a shack in the middle of nowhere that just dumps exposition on you and then gets a boner.
>>2255
The best solution for fixing explore would be to add more unique demons and monsters like Ceraph or Akbal running around that aren't tied down to specific locations. The entire premise of the game is that there are a bunch of demons running around corrupting the world but all the unique demons that aren't just cannon fodder are all either hiding inside their homes busting nuts against the walls waiting for you to show up or stuck in a single location doing absolutely nothing.
>>2261
>I remember one from when I was just a wee lad where a guy had a fox loli and oppai loli tanuki move in with him after visiting a hot spring
I know the one, Animal Ears, translated by saha, though the newer translation doesn't call it that https://exhentai.org/g/306991/fa2dfaaaff/
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>>2264
classic stuff. Also probably one of the reasons I like monstergirls.
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>>2261
>8ch's dead but fran writing isn't
Hope remains.
I do miss some of the scrapped stuff, but you gotta love franties.
Now if only Izumi wasn't unfinished forever.
>>2261
>Back in halloween with updates
Thematic, glad you're still working on this.
>>2263
To be fair the war (if there ever was one) is already pretty much over so most demons don't have reason to run around
The worst part is that outside of shutting down factory there really isn't much that player can do outside of shutting down factory or killing Lethice that would actually attract attention of someone of relevance, outside of maybe slaughtering a whole load of imps and building really big tower with them
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>>2271
kill jaguar god?
Become Jaguar God? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MK2qBEvP2uk>>2271
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Got this after having a bee dick
>>2271
I'd say having a camp full to the brim with unique and powerful people that all hate demons would definitely attract some attention. The only civilization left is a single city that is slowly dying out, a shitty village that the demons fuck around with constantly, the witches in the desert, the ant people (and that's being generous), and the kitsune that I'm pretty sure they don't even know exist. At least someone of relevance would notice and care when a camp full of demigods led by a champion that wants to kill Lethice appears out of nowhere. Honestly I kinda wish the camp got revamped so you could build everyone houses and have it slowly turn into a village.
>>2282
A village sounds like a good idea, but the trouble is getting someone to write all of its content.
>>2284
It's better to have a couple well defined ideas for what we want in the future instead of just a bunch of vague idea on what we wouldn't mind being in the game.
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>>2263
>dumb puzzle
I'm the only one that had no difficulty with that puzzle?
>>2261
It begins, again.
>>2277
Man, Darkwolf was the best part of Fire and Ice.
>>2290
he really was, just ate the pain and dealt with that wizard
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>>2264
>>2265
I'm glad to see others also remember such a classic work of art.
>>2267
Some of the scrapped stuff for Fran will be redone. I still want the pc to give her clothes and was thinking maybe trying to include the pc being able to change her style too? I think that'd be cute maybe.
Is Izumi unfinished and was there ever a list of what content was planned for her? I'm certain someone would take the time to try completing her eventually.
>>2269
I had the mansion's rooms done for awhile but I was struggling on how to do the first meeting this time and scraped that section a few times before going with something close to the last draft anyway.
>>2288
Hopefully this time's the charm.
>>2292
I'm not sure if Izumi's stuff was ever finished but she lacks any real interactions outside of beat and fuck, so she seems incomplete. I'm not sure anyone has stepped up to the plate of rewriting her. I'd personally like to see more asian characters in the game though, as kitsunes are just scratching the surface of what we can include.
>>2293
Maybe it's because I just like building up a giant goon squad, but I wouldn't mind it if you could recruit Izumi to your camp along with everyone else you've met along the way.
So can Anzu finally be removed already? It's a lore breaking furry OC/self-insert, and it's awful.
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>>2292
Izumi had that bizzare quality of a personality that wasn't entirely sex obsessed or overbearing femdom, which was stupidly rare before the mod. You can tell Fen didn't give two shits about her. At this point she's just tears in the rain.
On the fran scrapped, I just remember some cute scenes but I can't really name specifics because my memory's shit.
Franties still a best though.
>>1364
I want to mention that, in the apk, a couple scenes that occur at lake seem like they are set up for the boat like venus and at least one other as they talk about rowing away after the encounter.
Kind of a stretch to be calling anyone in your camp a demigod, or to assume that your camp is somehow unique- I mean, Tel'Adre has it's own militia, despite how little you see of the town's day-to-day workings.
Amily's not much of a threat to anyone, Jojo gets bullied by imps if they show up in groups larger than 'one', Rathazul's an old alchemist that doesn't seem like he's even capable of weaponized alchemy, Isabella and Marble are literal beef who get by on overwhelming strength and endurance in fights, Helia doesn't seem to ever lose fights against anyone but you to my knowledge, but that could just be leftover Savin-Armor, Ember's probably the most threatening companion you can get, Sophie's a step up from a basic-bitch harpy, Milk-Slave and Latex Slime- if they're even still things- are both depicted as clumsy, uncomfortable, and sort of just accepting cock-sleeves at this point. As far as the demons are concerned, even the player character is just a particularly annoying adventuring hero-type. Nothing you do throughout the game actually interferes with anything they're doing- up until you just spontaneously charge Lethice's fortress, and beat her and her pets down out of the blue. Goes from zero to sixty pretty quickly there.. And that would definitely attract their attention, drawing all kinds of ambitious demons out of the woodwork to take a swing at you to claim the throne. So maybe build from there?
>>2263
What I'm getting from this is that you want more Rift content. I agree, cold and snowy is /comfy/
>>2301
>like venus
Every time I see someone bring up that she's in the wrong place, it gets a brief acknowledgement and then ignored.
>>2310
is Venus always popping up at the lake when she should be boat?
>>2307
No Kiha?
>>2299
>Anzu sucks and needs to get deleted from the game
>Urta sucks and need to be deleted from the game
>The Gargoyle kinda sucks and needs to be reworked
Is there a single character in the game at this point that doesn't need to be reworked or deleted?
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Apparently 8kun might be coming online tomorrow. It'll be nice having the full site back since it'll bring in more discussion which might even lead to more content being made.
>>2325
Anzu is unironically worse than Urta, though. The worst lore shit about her is that there is a god living in her dick, the worst thing about Anzu is that he IS a god and one who introduces a whole new pantheon while he's at it. While Urta is at least somewhat grounded in the game's world still, Anzu is nothing more than an afterthought with nothing to make him belong in it.
>>2327
>which might even lead to more content being made.
Don't get your hopes up too soon. It takes a long time for a decently sized userbase to form again from the scraps that survived here even if the website stays online and stable. The people who write anything are a minuscule percentage of the userbase, of which only some see things through. I do like the idea of eventually getting back to that point, though.
>>2328
Did any of the old writefags even survive the purge? I'm pretty sure Satan didn't make the journey with us.
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>>2329
Every single one of them is here.
>>2327
You know what, I thought I'd never say it, but I can't wait until we get some fuckwit wandering in to ask how to get rid of the vines.
It'll be melancholic. At least for the first time

Wonder what the last few posts were before we left.


>>2329
The only faggot I'm pretty sure didn't survive the purge was one of the spritefags (the pleasant one, not the one with anger issues). The other writefags seemed to jump ship, even if coming along a little later.
>>2325
>Is there a single character in the game at this point that doesn't need to be reworked or deleted?
Amily?
>>2327
8kun has been trying to come online fro a bit but the soy goblin keeps reporting the ddos protection and getting them removed. Unless the cloudfalre alternative has been solved it's probably not coming back yet.
>>2334
Why doesn't someone actually do something as well against the cripple retard shill?
I remember when a reddit nigger that came on 8ch angered the autists and they humiliated him.
Tamani uses goblin elder teases for some reason but her outfit doesn't match the description as she wears something closer to what basic goblins do, not bones and loincloth.
Missing space in pic related. File name is where the one with the missing space is, since the walking to the gates thing in there more than once.
>>2335
There's nothing to really do to him at this point, he's devolved into an antifa internet agent, the living doxed
If you are disarmed in combat (drider/spider people) and cast/end the battle with geode knuckles, you aren't getting that weapon back.
>>2358
Do you know how to unlock that last spell from the terrestrial fire spell list?
>>1364
I just want to know, does this mod have a save editor, or can it use the save editor for the vanilla version of CoC?
>>2379
CoCED works with the mod, it just doesn't allow you to make adjustments to things that are exclusively from this mod (unless you're doing something like removing a modded perk or item from your inventory). There was an old file that did add some direct support for mod-specific stuff, but I don't have it. If you get an error popup about the save being corrupt when using the editor, ignore it. It's an issue with the editor itself, but is a harmless bug.
>>2331
If it makes you feel better I can huff some paint and ask you how to remove the vines several times in a row while ignoring all the answers.
>>2383
It's just not the same man, it's just not the same. It's literally the difference between pretending to be retarded and being actually retarded.
>>2381
>doesn't allow you to make adjustments to things that are exclusively from this mod
Or to clit length, and I think main inventory doesn't work, only storage. Everything else works, and mod stuff is a matter of editing an xml. A slightly out of date xml is attached, use it along with CoCED 1.3.1. You can update the out of date flags and/or items yourself.
>>2389
The main issue is that we're increasingly using SelfSaving over flags, and no current save editor works with that. There's CoCTweak, which one guy is actively working on, but I have to admit that I don't know if he's touching that.
What's the point of CoCED when the Debugwand exists?
>>2391
Ease of use for some stuff, and CoCED can also edit some stuff that wand can't.
>>2386
But there isn't a difference.
>>2360
Nevermind, already figured that out.
MoltenPlate > Quake > Scorch to be able to cast TerraStar, then you can cast Supernova. That was pretty dope btw.
If you Box with Helia, enter her threesome menu on victory, then exit out of that and all other menus, no time will pass.
At least it's not about the bathing part itself:
>Her voice is strained, her head turned away, and her lower palms press against your stomach.
If that's not meant to be a list, it looks too much like a list for comfort. If it is, you shouldn't omit the "is" like that if the last part doesn't have the same structure (though you could just make it "pressed" if you want to keep it mostly the same).
>before letting up entirely from the painfully uncomfortable girl
"Let up" means "stop", so the "from" doesn't make sense here.
>giving you nothing but an awkward nod that doesn't even meet you
I don't know what you mean by "doesn't meet you".
>in the full nude
Either "the nude" or just "full nude" (I'd recommend the latter).
>You try and ask her
While I probably wouldn't bother most of the time, this is a bit lower style than a lot of your narration. It's fine to keep if you want to.
>Marielle's frown deepens before her face turns back to you, where she glances down at your persisting hardness
What's the "where" meant to refer to? "You" isn't a location.
>to resume her touch that had you at the brink mere minutes ago.
Another one of those "possessive + that"s that I've railed against so often.
>she places the ones she won't need for your length onto your hips instead}]}] to steady you
I'd recommend moving that "instead" up in front of "places" so that it doesn't get in the way of the purpose clause.
>You have little capacity left to stay rooted
Naga rights.
>leaving you to freely ogle her tantalizing body, her deathly pale skin, her soft thighs, her diminutive chest, her lips parted in the slightest of pants, and the beautiful, graceful picture it all paints as a whole.
I might recommend a dash or a colon over that first comma. You had a dash earlier in this paragraph, but it's been a bit, and I think one would be more suitable here than there anyway.
>into the warm pond while you buck into
Mild repetition.
>who starts up from wherever she was staring
I thought you hated "start" over "startle", or am I thinking of someone else?
>When you're done and [if (!isnaked) {donned your [armor]|put on your equipment}]
Needs a "have" before the conditional.
>beyond the broken portion of the wall where the [sun]light shines through underneath to give the pond a gradual, lambent glow.
I don't know what that "underneath" is doing there.
>You don't disturb her, simply hang the damp towel over a brazier next to you, and make your way out of the abandoned temple.
This list doesn't work with the negation at the start. I'd recommend either switching to something like "leave her be" or making the second two things into participles.

And I thought I was spoiled with the maid scene.
>>2391
There are things the wand can't do that COCED can. Also flag setting is a lot easier than fishing around for them in flash.
How's the update status?
>>2467
>I don't know what you mean by "doesn't meet you".
A nod that is oblique, one that isn't directly directed at or "meets" your face. Not exactly a standard wording, but I thought it'd be more than clear.
>Either "the nude" or just "full nude"
Isn't that done often enough? I don't see why you wouldn't be able to combine the two, redundancy or not.
>this is a bit lower style than a lot of your narration
I do use "try and" from time to time. I suppose it's considered somewhat informal, but go and look it up. It's a lot older and better-established than you might think.
>"You" isn't a location.
But you are the object/person/place her face has turned towards and on whose body the thing she next glances at is located. I see that in logic and construction very akin to a "You turn your eyes towards the nearest facade, where you spot the graffiti he mentioned". Alternatively, I could invoke the "at which point" meaning of "where".
>Another one of those "possessive + that"s that I've railed against so often.
Why though, and what would you prefer? Just not using a possessive?
>Naga rights.
Snakes have no rights. But what part of that sentence wouldn't work on a naga? I'm not seeing it.
>I thought you hated "start" over "startle", or am I thinking of someone else?
No, that's me. I find it very context-dependant, but I didn't hate it in this instance here.
>I don't know what that "underneath" is doing there.
Referring to the "broken portion of the wall", underneath which the light shines through. I guess it's anything but needed and makes the sentence more awkward than it has to be.
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>>2479
>but I thought it'd be more than clear.
Perhaps I was being a bit hyperbolic. "Meets your eyes" is very idiomatic, and it doesn't really work the same with "nod".
>Isn't that done often enough?
There are no ngram results, but there are a few google results. You can see pic related for the company you keep; I'd really recommend "in the nude", but I'll recognize that there's a chance I'm in the full wrong here.
>I don't see why you wouldn't be able to combine the two, redundancy or not.
Because "the nude" is a single unit that can't really be broken up. I've mentioned in the past how you often do things to idioms that don't work; they're not very mutable.
>I see that in logic and construction very akin to a "You turn your eyes towards the nearest facade, where you spot the graffiti he mentioned".
But "facade" is a location there. The issue is with the pronoun here, not the logic, and I'm pretty certain on this one.
>Alternatively, I could invoke the "at which point" meaning of "where".
Could you provide an example of what you mean by that?
>Why though
I believe I'd explained it a few times like a year ago (Christ), but it's because "that" has a restrictive meaning (for some English speakers, though it's also viewed as more "correct"). In essence, that means that a possessive + "that" implies that the person has more than one of the thing in question, and that you're only referring to the one that has this particular quality, as opposed to the others.
>what would you prefer? Just not using a possessive?
Yes, I'd recommend a "the" there (though sometimes you can also replace the "that" with a "which"). Though again, if it wasn't clear from the previous paragraph, not every speaker makes this distinction, so I'll dutifully inform you that you have the option of ignoring this, at risk of your own shame. Though checking now, I see that you already did it, so I'm sorry for casting aspersions on your honor.
>But what part of that sentence wouldn't work on a naga? I'm not seeing it.
"Rooted"? I'm not sure how that would work for a naga, as it implies feet/legs to me.
>Referring to the "broken portion of the wall", underneath which the light shines through.
The "broken portion" would include the part that light is shining through, though.
>I guess it's anything but needed and makes the sentence more awkward than it has to be.
This was my backup complaint.
>>2480
>You can see pic related for the company you keep
Well, that's a compliment.
>The issue is with the pronoun here, not the logic, and I'm pretty certain on this one.
So how would you word it, then? Does English even have a non-archaic conjunction that does what I want? And why not treat a pronoun like that? As a person, you are a sight to look upon and, just like the facade is, and depending on viewpoint, you're even a location. And something more specific like "your body" would work, no? Would sound like garbage here, but still, what's the issue?
>Could you provide an example of what you mean by that?
I could swear I had heard it before, specifically in the context of accounts of historical battles, but I guess it's either highly informal or just straight-up wrong. Or my memory is deceiving me.
>"Rooted"? I'm not sure how that would work for a naga, as it implies feet/legs to me.
Who knew my feet were in truth roots. Thanks, internet-moth. That expression is figurative in the first place, and I see no reason why you would need any certain set of extremities for that to work. Even a fish could "stay rooted".
On the second page of the Marathon sex option with Helspawn, the first sentence Helspawn begins by pushing your thighs up and out of her way. uses the name "Helspawn" even when a custom name is chosen.
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Herms getting Profractory while having the Corrupt Marae Fertility and Stud perks have Marae slap their cock before saying... nothing. There's no message for herms getting Profractory or Buttslut there.
>>2485
>So how would you word it, then?
Well the first option that jumps to mind is "whereupon", but there are a lot of things you could do.
>Who knew my feet were in truth roots.
Well that's the metaphor.
>That expression is figurative in the first place
Yes, it's a metaphor for what your legs are doing (i.e., it's as if they had roots holding them in place).
>and I see no reason why you would need any certain set of extremities for that to work
So that you're not mangling the metaphor like some kind of cretin.
>Even a fish could "stay rooted".
That'd just be silly.
>>2495
>Well the first option that jumps to mind is "whereupon"
Unnecessarily formal and dated, but it's what I already went with anyway.
>That'd just be silly.
Not as silly as you are right now. Replace "legs" in your description with literally anything else a creature could use to move, and you're still good to go. Or if you want to be extra anal, what if your tail itself is the root? Looks closer to one than a human foot, at least. Or what if your fins are now roots? Also not that far off. C'mon retard, use your imagination. You're taking it too rigidly.
>>2489
As far as the base game goes, it was impossible for herms to get either of those perks (they can only get Fertility and Stud). You'd have to ditch the cock to get Buttslut, or the vagina to get Profractory.

Perhaps there ought to be some reworking of Corrupt Marae to allow herms to get them all without having to magic away their parts beforehand.
>>2500
I don't know about the buttsluttery, but you could probably roll all three of the corrupt marae perks into one "Profane Fecundity".
holy fuck I jsut got into the female Arian sex scene and the writing is trash, Arian's whole arc needs an update something fierce. Whatever shitter wrote it isn't giving enough visual reference and it's fucking things up.
>>2512
I mean, I'm not even sure they mentioned the boobs growing out and then suddenly I'm fondling boobs and thy are begin described.
>>2512
and Arian just turned into a woman and is droppings lines like "you really know how to make a girl feel appreciated"

The MC not even doing a double take when Arian went for the bottle earlier was jarring as well
>>2496
>Unnecessarily formal and dated, but it's what I already went with anyway.
That "but" makes it sound like that isn't your constant and eager intent.
>Replace "legs" in your description with literally anything else a creature could use to move
But many of those aren't directly connected to the ground, where they could have roots.
>what if your tail itself is the root?
But it's not going below the ground. Again, the legs aren't really roots in this metaphor (or I guess they could be, but the more important idea is there there are roots extending underground and holding you in place). I'm struggling to imagine the image where roots are growing out of the tail far more so than for feet, probably because it runs parallel to the ground, unlike legs.
>what if your fins are now roots?
Okay, the tail I'm willing to debate on, but this is just ridiculous. They don't touch the ground, you dummy.
>C'mon retard, use your imagination. You're taking it too rigidly.
Hey man, you're the one who complained so vigorously about ill-used turns of speech. Your meaning is clear and I don't think it's a huge deal; it's just a little bit mangled. However, you're absolutely braindead with regards to this whole fish thing, and if you ever attempt to use that metaphor, I'll divorce you.
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>>2512
>if if means you'll love me I'll become a girl
>muh girl parts
this makes me very angry
>>2516
I think you should be able to get further without needing a dick with Arian.
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>>2520
What the actual fuck is this?
>“Ja… ja Jojo, lick mein azzhole”
My fucking sides.
>>2520
This is gutter trash, befitting the place it came from (i.e., the place you should return to).
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>>2520
>She swoons over the "little" darling
I've read enough
>>2527
I'm irritated about how sub par the writing is though, how do I go about ripping the scenes so I can examine and possibly replace them?
>Arian needs a rework
>Gargoyle needs a rework
>Anzu needs to get deleted from the game
>Urta needs to be deleted from the game
Any other characters that need to be updated or reworked?
>>2536
pretty sure gargoyle just needs more content but I could be wrong
>>2512
To be fair the only reason i have her around is the eggs, not because she's actually good.
>>2536
Lumi could use further expansion and stocking, for really "out-there" potions that rathazul refuses to make.
The food golem in Tel Ardre could probably be expanded on, but I'm not sure how many people are into feeding or fucking a giant cupcake. Speaking of, the cupcake vendor there has also been largely ignored.

Gargoyle does just need something more to do after you get to know her. Expansion on rebuilding the monastery, or finding a way to take her and whatever passes as the anchoring point for her back to your camp.

Phylla maybe, but the bugfags here seem mostly moth-based instead of ant and so she remains undeveloped after she becomes a stone/gem/child generator.

Arian could use some work so that s/he can finally teach you magic if you don't know any. Maybe taking enough "lessons" gives you some insight perk to spell efficiency or something.

Niamh at the bar could use work, and a way to alter what she produces that won't get her thrown out of town.
>>2536
Gargoyle is fine, she just need more content, maybe we can finish fixing the bloody cathedral or maybe make a small one in the camp so she can come to it.
What we need is more ember and actual interaction with the children.
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>>2539
>Phylla
My waifu, i wish i had the willpower to write more for her and i really wish she had more content.
>>2539
>Arian could use some work so that s/he can finally teach you magic if you don't know any.
So the list of NPCs that could teach the MC is:
>shouldra
>arian
Maybe someone else? I don't remember.
>>2536
>Needs rework or deletion
All gym characters
The giant turtle in the lake
Fucking Loppe
Aiko
Just about every character in the bazaar
My cheeks burn red with the scandal of this menu:
>Nor would I them thus entangle, were it invert.
I might recommend adding in something like a "wish"/"want", given that such entrammelment isn't always conscious or intended (though I guess the second part of her metaphor is, so maybe it's all good).
>appals
Interestingly, we actually add an extra "l" to this one on this side of the pond. One wonders where we got our roles mixed up.
>//Greys out this option from here on out if you have a dick
There's been a small selection of little things like this that need to be tracked but weren't noted as such, so I just want to confirm again that you know that the game doesn't track if you've done an arbitrary scene. Not a big deal in most cases where it's just a matter of storing one value, but it can matter.
>The already questioningly frowning girl
A bit nitpicky, but that stacked modifier is pretty unwieldy.
>//Tooltip if you've actually tried and failed both
I curse your name.
>//If kiss count >= 4 and not insulted her father:
>Your eyes caught by those young, pale lips of hers, there's only one thing that comes to your mind. With a confident saunter, you skirt the table occupied by cloths and sewing tools before leaning in with obvious intent.
Am I missing something, or is this the exact same as the others?
>a hint of shyness rises up with it,
I have no idea what this "it" is, and this time, there's no hyperbole.
>One pair in particular
She only has two pairs, and the other isn't operating as a pair, so this is a tad odd, but I'll qualify that by saying I don't feel very strongly on the matter.
>tantalizing you with its ever-bolder motions that seize more and more of your butt, but never quite commit to groping you in earnest.
I don't know about "motions that [...] commit". Seems pretty off to me, though you do love your metonymy.
>pinch her soft meat to tickle a stifled squeak
But pinching is very, very unlike tickling. I enjoy the phrase that opens the sentence, but I feel like there's a bit too much concentrated playfulness on your part here. Also, I don't know whether to be more shocked by the fact that the player's dickdar is far worse than hers, or by the fact that this isn't giving her a stiffy.
>you've ended up practically sitting on Marielle's lap,
This would be pretty awkward for taurs, but I think we chose to ignore that the last time stool gymnastics came up.
>questing endearments
But you just said that neither of you were talking. What exactly do you mean by "endearment" (it's usually something spoken) here?
>>2544
>just to catch your breath and recline for a look at Marielle's flushed expression.
But you can't recline in this position; there's nothing behind you to support you, so you'd just fall. It's more than just "lean back", for your information.
>[if (kiss count >= 4)
Wait a second, I just realized that you're making this into a fucking trainer. I had no idea how diabolical you really were, and know that I read the rest of this in silent resentment for the forthcoming cuck content.
>When you reach out to brush them away, you [...] don't care to resist the temptation those lips of hers present, and with a smile, you swiftly seal them with yours again.
The triplicate "you" subjects in this sentence are very mildly repetitive, and you're more sensitive to that than I.
>her little interspersed moans and gasps coupled with the lustful forays between them and the many hands
Is "them" meant to refer to "moans and gasps"? If so, that doesn't make sense, and if not, I don't see the proper antecedent.
>body feels hot against yours, and her little interspersed moans and gasps coupled with the lustful forays between them and the many hands mapping the contours of your body
Feel shame.
>It'll probably be best
I'd generally recommend a "would".
>cooling herself off with a folding fan
Where was she keeping this? Under her daki? Am I just forgetting other references to this fan? I thought I was her fan; is this the cuck content I was worried about?
>//Greys out the [Kiss] option for 15 minutes, tooltip
Good lord, I hate you. Can I argue you down to just tracking whichever the most recent lewd option you picked was?

Apologies for the proofreading delays, but we'll get through this suffering posthaste.
>>2543
I actually like the sex scenes with one of the bazaar's prostitute. Nipple fuck is my fetish for some reason.
>>2540
I second this, her basic concept was good back when the first writer started before bitching out.
>>2539
>teach you magic
>>2542
>teach the MC

doesn't the chick with the lips in tel whatever bar, Dominika, teach the MC magic?

https://wiki.smutosaur.us/CoC/Dominika
https://cocxianxia.fandom.com/wiki/Dominika
pretty sure she's underdeveloped too
>>2550
Yes, dominika problem is that she is pretty much incomplete, and i dont think we know what the author was going we her also. Only that her plans would implode the city and open a dimensional portal.
As is, every spellcaster in the game likes to poke fun at the player's "understanding" of magic. Spamming white-fire, or doing with Arouse what anyone can do with Tease without the stamina cost.

Having a whole circus of clowns willing to teach you to cast spells doesn't mean much when the spells themselves are so limited, especially if they're all trying to teach the exact same spells. Other wizards are warping, and twisting time and space, doing things the player character can't wrap their head around- and we can spam white-fire.

Feels like every other wizard in the game is putting us to shame in every other scene they appear in. Shucks, even that harpy witch in Helia's dungeon is using her magic to produce deep-fried super-soldiers. Part of the inherent problem with all these Mary-Sue-OC-waifu self-inserts. It's an entire world of super-amazing-special-snowflakes that seem to have power on par with, or exceeding that of the player- but who are accomplishing nothing with that power.

It's like Mareth only has two speeds, apathetic hellhole, or lazy hugbox. Everyone's either already beaten, or just putting off fighting for anything, 'cause the player'll take care of it if they wait long enough.

Or maybe everyone secretly loves having the demons around, and just like whining about it to keep up appearances. Or garner sympathy. These super powerful wizard types, always actin' like the demons can't be overcome- and then a lone scruffy book-learned "wizard" shows up with White-Fire and Arouse, and dethrones Lethice single-handedly on a whim.

Power levels are bull-shit.
>>2552
Are you complaining about the base game or something?
>>2552
They arent mary sues because of powerful magic, the lore always said powerfulagic existed, the problem is the MC not being able to use at least some of said powerful magic.
https://pastebin.com/b758NbDg - Updated the vampire sisters a little more. Wrote the parts where the player does not pull open the wardrobe to make Fran scream in terror. I might change that more since I reused parts from if the player opened the wardrobe. The player fighting Emily is there. A scene for her beating you, a scene for you winning and not killing her. Then there's a scene for killing Emily too, of course. I'm uncertain of the kill scene as I tried to make it not as edgy as I usually do. It feels a little bland instead though? I'll probably try to get the player raping Emily done in a few days.
>>2293
>I'm not sure if Izumi's stuff was ever finished but she lacks any real interactions outside of beat and fuck
You can have a rock lifting contest too. I'm not sure what would be reasonable to add to Izumi; Prtobably would ant to start with her leaving her cave maybe and doing other shit. Something like pc beats her X times; she decides to travel a little, pc and her meet as she gets stronger and maybe she just decides she's fond of the player and becomes their oni wife? That's probably too simple though.
>I'd personally like to see more asian characters in the game though, as kitsunes are just scratching the surface of what we can include.
A Jiangshi for the pet menu in game might be nice. Maybe a pick up from a dungeon? We'll see.
>>2300
Was Izumi in base CoC? I thought she was a revamp addition.
I'm happy you thought some of Fran's old scenes were cute and hopefully I can deliver on the franties.
>>2555
Are you still going to make Emily be broken mentally from being kidnapped?
>>2555
The older killing emily scene was fine.
Also you should maybe add a option to actually try to find fran for the edge paladins that like that sort of thing.
Give us back out lethicite staffs, you can't take hostage our late-game equipment just because a few more points in the spell mod makes the game unbalanced.
>>2558
Why do you think that had anything to do with balance?
>>2559
Magic is pretty broken in this game.
>>2560
You'll find no disagreements here, but that's irrelevant.
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>>2554
> problem is the MC not being able to use at least some of said powerful magic
The spells the PC gets not (mostly) being grand makes sense. Where will they learn the bigger spells? The ones who have them usually aren't either willing or able to share, and those that are both usually DO.
>The harpy broodmother isn't very inclined to share the fruits of her efforts with you.
>The Sand Witches are only willing to share if you join.
>The mages of Tel Adre would want to press you into service.
>Ceraph's magic is instinct based.
>Vapula is useless.
>Jojo lost the rest of his order's techniques.
>Akbal gives you what is willing to share
>You can already steal the rest with Fera.
>Circe is already trading knowledge for knowledge.
>The Corrupt Coven is already trading knowledge for cum.
>Dominika isn't willing to teach you the good shit.
>Vilkus had the good shit burned.
>Arian doesn't want you to kill yourself.
>Aspect of Laurentus basically gives you what Arian doesn't, but
>Laurentus' Aspect is an answering machine.
That leaves about three potential tutors: Marae, Holli, and Shouldra. Holli would only teach plant stuff, same probably goes for Marae. Shouldra could probably teach other stuff, like her golem. Someone would need to write it.
>>2558
Magic is broken even without spell mod, what are you on about?
Shit, I had to follow about 6 diferent links until I stumbled here, what the fuck.
>>2041
So, a bit of an update: My life this year has been, well, currently is absolute shit. I haven't been really motivated to do much of anything, including writing Symbiote. The only thing I've written this year has been a little Shouldra convo.
But I have been thinking of new ideas and refining the older ones. I just haven't been motivated to write them, and I know that if I forced myself to do so, I'd be churning out shit.
TL;DR, I'm taking a long-ass break that hopefully should end up in a few months.
>inb4 replying to a 2 week old post
Why are Sandtraps so annoying?
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>The harpy broodmother isn't very inclined to share the fruits of her efforts with you.
A option to spare her for knowledge would be cool.
>The mages of Tel Adre would want to press you into service.
That shit is so incomplete, but i see no problem if you just steal the bloody books.
Honestly the one that makes more sense to teach the MC higher tier magic is Shouldra, she even says that she is willing to do exactly that, its just that no one wrote that yet.
>>2544
>Interestingly, we actually add an extra "l" to this one on this side of the pond.
Why would you even do that. There's a long vowel.
>I curse your name.
Curses only make me stronger. Can that shit be done? I thought it'd be funny, out of the way though it may be.
>Am I missing something, or is this the exact same as the others?
It is. I put it there temporarily so I didn't have to scroll up and down constantly to check the overall scene flow, then forgot to delete it when I was done.
>I have no idea what this "it" is,
Either your act of closing in or "what it is you're out for".
>metonymy
You sure that's the right word here? And naturally, "one pair" being the subject would be preferable, but "commit" is too far away from it for that to work without hiccups, and I'm semi-fine with it as is.
>But pinching is very, very unlike tickling.
Depends on how much force you put into it.
>I feel like there's a bit too much concentrated playfulness on your part here
I feared that. I had hoped you choosing the option to kiss her in the first place would excuse that amount of characterisation, but perhaps it doesn't.
>the fact that the player's dickdar is far worse than hers, or by the fact that this isn't giving her a stiffy
I'd like you to know that I fucking hate you for that joke. I'd like those divorce papers now.
>What exactly do you mean by "endearment" (it's usually something spoken) here?
Doesn't have to be something spoken, but I have to concede that it most often is. Here, I mean the general acts of fondling and kissing that are going on.
>>2545
>Wait a second, I just realized that you're making this into a fucking trainer.
Well why do you think her daddy called her "princess".
>the forthcoming cuck content
You mean the one where you catch her guiding Delores' hands while teaching her to knit?
>Am I just forgetting other references to this fan?
No, I sprinkled them in recently. There are only like two others.
>Good lord, I hate you.
I'd like to remind you that you were the one concerned about people using her as a "lust farm". Live with the consequences of your complaints.
>>2565
They're the justification for going a pure heavy lustbomb/archmage build, picking up archery or grabbing a pistol/blunderbuss.
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While I havent done anything for her in a long time or the like, I had an NPC who (though less efficiently teach if you went down the corrupt path) I planned to teach a form of magic to bimbos and bros though I'm not sure if it would be new spells entirely.

She's a bimbo wizard sheep girl herself who manages to keep herself mostly in a state of mind that isn't only 'want cock, do silly' unless you choose to take advantage of her and use your corruption to tip her over the edge into accepting full bimbo status. She was also going to be an alternate source of the sheep tf (since I also wrote that)
>>2569
>what is teasing
>what is distance fighting
>>2571
But anon, bimbos are all dumb as fuck.
She's not mechanically a bimbo unless you go down the corrupt path.
>>2568
>There's a long vowel.
As is there one in "wall", "pal" ("palling" as a participle"), "enroll", etc. (though checking the last one, it seems you also spell that with one, so it seems that that's where we part ways).
>Can that shit be done?
Yes, it's just better to know such things beforehand/all at once.
>Either your act of closing in or "what it is you're out for".
The first isn't even remotely close to working grammatically, and the second doesn't really work well with "with" (I can kinda see what you'd be going for, but it would be pretty awkward, if it was even clear in the first place, which it's also not).
>You sure that's the right word here?
I believe so, but I also think its meaning has shifted slightly to one that wouldn't apply here. You're using "motions" in place of just her (the one who would actually be committing to something; "pair" would also be a literary device, though synecdoche by strict definition, and yes, I needed to look this trash up).
>and I'm semi-fine with it as is.
I guess it's part of our life now, then.
>I feared that. I had hoped you choosing the option to kiss her in the first place would excuse that amount of characterisation, but perhaps it doesn't.
Note that I was using "you" as (You), not as "the player". I was just recommending that you dial it back a touch, as the introductory phrase (which, again, I like), "soft meat", the whole pinch/tickle thing (which still doesn't really work great, by the way), and the alliteration make the sentence a bit crowded.
>Doesn't have to be something spoken, but I have to concede that it most often is.
I'd recommend switching to a synonym, then, if the most common/natural reading is one you specifically don't want.
>There are only like two others.
Fine with me, then. It'd just be a bit comical if it only popped up here.
>I'd like to remind you that you were the one concerned about people using her as a "lust farm".
Well there are plenty of those in the game already, the scene isn't free since it does actually take up time, and the gain is pretty small, so I think it'd be okay. However, my strong objection was based on the erroneous assumption that there'd be more of these; just the one is manageable enough, so I'm fine with it.
>>2556
I'm not really sure yet. She should definitely be a little different afterwards at least, but being mind broken is too extreme unless I add variations dependent on how long the pc takes to find her.
>>2557
The older scene involved crushing Fran with the wardrobe and then stabbing Emily in the chest with a shard of broken glass. The reason I didn't write the player killing Fran here is because I was thinking about doing a thing where you meet her again eventually and she'd be a multi stage fight. Maybe as something the player can do after they've beaten lethice.
>>2584
>She's a bimbo wizard sheep girl herself who manages to keep herself mostly in a state of mind that isn't only 'want cock, do silly'
That's the problem, how?
>>2588
>The older scene involved crushing Fran with the wardrobe and then stabbing Emily in the chest with a shard of broken glass
This can happen even without Fran dying, it was more the feeling of hopelessness of Emily, the "mama, papa, help" seeing a character that tried to act mature but cracked before death like the child that she still is inside, shit that makes me feel bad from killing a innocent child like her.
Just make the death slow, give the one dying time to feel death and see they become what they really are inside, in Emily's case, a child that had to become a adult too soon, in my opinion.
>I'm not really sure yet. She should definitely be a little different afterwards at least, but being mind broken is too extreme unless I add variations dependent on how long the pc takes to find her.
I would like if you could somehow stop her kidnapping before it got any serious, stop it at day 0 or something, maybe a intimacy check with both sisters, after all i like my lolis unharmed.
If Emily still broke while kidnapped it would be cool to have her slowly becoming better, until she could go back to normal, with fran or maybe even others camp followers helping and shit.
Anyhow, good luck with the vampires, hope you dont die.
>>2576
Teasespam is the earlygame of lustbomb, to make it an instakill skill, you have to couple it with spellcasting.
>>2543
Isn't Loppe the random bunny girl with a massive horsecock (how original) but you end up getting her pregnant and then her content just abruptly stops.
Speaking of bunnies, the Bunny Eggs perk isn't working.
>>2555
I'm confused, do you still find lone Fran now or? There's been so many iterations i've honestly lost track. ..what was the first version like?
>>2599
It's been years, but i think first version was just fran? I may be wrong, the abandoned mansion also only came later, i think. 2hufag probably knows more.
>>1364
in the APK Hel and Ember grow more powerful when you spar with them but Kiha and Izma do not
Oh hey that was fast. I expected us to be down for longer.
>>2591
I'll try changing the death scene up to be a little sadder at least. It should definitely be impactful and get the player to feel a little uncertain about what they did. I don't think a character would ever go back to "normal" from being mind broken though. Anyway I appreciate you wishing me luck. Hopefully this will be the draft that actually gets finished.
>>2599
In this draft, you find Fran by herself and Emily shows up while the PC is talking to Fran. Originally, Fran was by herself and waiting for her big sister to come "find" her after they got separated.
>>2604
Kiha and Izma are jobbers though
>>2607
Please add a silly mode scene of the pc entering the wardrobe that fran hides if they are small enough and failing to do so if not small enough.
Also, with Emily going back to "normal" i didnt mean exactly like before, its more that she would recover enough to no be considered mind broken, kind like how shouldra just eventually shrugged off all the shit that she seem but became a little "off" because of that.
>>2604
That is correct.
>>2610
>>2613
I just assumed Kiha at least was supposed to grow like Hel, or at least get the option to sleep in your bed.
>>2614
It makes sense for all npcs to do that, it think, and also you should spar with the majority of then.
>>2607
I do hope we can find both vampire lolis as virgins and well, make them your wives to impregnate them.
I found a glitch.
I lost to the Minotaur Lord twice in fairly swift succession, and despite having Addiction turned off (and cum addiction listed at zero), the game treats my boi like he's addicted.
Winning to minotaurs shows the 'get filled' option, and the salon has me automatically suck one off.
>>2449
the threesome menu does something similar if you cancel out
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>>2629
It's too late, your boy has been given the big gay.
>>2629
Sounds like bugged gay mechanics
>>2677
more like bug chaser mechanics
>>2677
I confirm that also happens with my new character.
Minotaur lord has his tease attack always assume that the player is addicted, when i never lost to minotaurs or ever did "Minomutual".
This shows how retarded is the writing for the minotaurs.
Dumb furfags also ruined the lake with " fuck them too many times and it's game over" mechanics of shark-girls and Venus.
Forging ahead in unknown territory:
>The seamstress utters a small cheep as you knock the neat swathes over and topple her onto them before you follow suit to reignite the kiss while your hands hungrily roam each other's bodies, fondling and groping until you're squirming in blind pleasure.
Tacking on "as", "before", "while", and then a participle is a bit much. I'd recommend at least a comma or something so that it's not one unbroken death march.
>Tearing yourself from her with a mutual gasp
"Mutual" doesn't really work here because the "you" is singular. I'm somewhat willing to be convinced otherwise, though.
>[if (!isnaked) {, yanking your [armor] to the side}]
Well, there are a lot of things that wouldn't work for.
>flushed and dripping your arousal
I'd recommend adding the "with" before "your" to keep them both objectless.
>Thankfully, she wastes neither time nor words and promptly takes hold of your hips to pull you down onto her parted, glistening lips, spreading your heated folds with her tongue and sending a shiver up your spine.
Is there a reason that this isn't connected to one of the paragraphs around it?
>spirited pass she delivers over your pussy
"Delivers a pass over" doesn't work.
>The cool, probing muscle cavorts through your crevasse like a boreal dancer
This is one of those times where I'm exceptionally glad I read this, but I need to tell you that it's too far.
>brushing one sensitive spot after the other
I'd recommend "another" here, as "the other" implies to me that the number's known (and online results tentatively suggest similar things).
>for some brief, teasing seconds
This "some" is a bit awkward to me (due both to using that usage here and the intervening adjectives).
>where you insistently clutch them to yourself in order to get your need across until you can focus on riding Marielle's face in full.
I think you want that "until" to modify "clutch", but it naturally parses as modifying "get" instead (due to the word order).
>Your mind, too, is just as feverish
The "too" and "just as" don't work together (as while technically "your exhales" are just as feverish as themselves, that's not really what you want to be saying).
>the seamstress's
Huh? What?
>She looks absolutely gorgeous
A mildly abrupt change in focus here.
>smears of your lubrication
I'd recommend the "the" there.
>On point, she responds just as you crave her to
"On point" is pretty not fitting here; I wonder if you're thinking of a different phrase.
>just as you crave her to:
I'll note that I believe using "crave" like that is kinda archaic.
>thrusting her tongue in deep before seeking out your clit, and letting the vibrations
I'd highly recommend against that comma.
>and all you can do is mash your [vagina] in the pace her sucking lips dictate
You need something like an "against" for that "mash". Also, consider that you could have written "it's all you can do to" and nothing about the meaning would have changed.
>catch your panted breath
Another idiom that you probably shouldn't stick an adjective into, though I guess you're one mischievous marsupial.
>Some time through all this, your sweaty hand must have grasped one of Marielle's
Just "some time" without a preposition would indicate duration here. You want something more like "at some point".
>evidently a little short on breath, herself
I'd recommend against that comma.
>'twas to me a, ah, uhm... an exceeding
ly?
>and the trio of hands caressing you while keeping her fourth laced firmly with yours
The trio of hands is not keeping the fourth there.
>half of you never even wants relinquish of any of it again.
You're missing a "to". "Even" is also a touch odd with "wants", but that's not a strong impression.
>and judging by the expanded beam on Marielle's rosy face as she licks her lips
I don't think "expanded beam" sounds good. "Beam"'s already pretty uncommon in that usage, and the odd adjective just amplifies that.
>her fingers stuck between lengthy tresses
I'd recommend the "her" there.
>'Twas most licksome
Oh, those halcyon days of three months ago.
>>2629
>>2684
Are you talking about the minotaur lord from Urta's quest? If so, you're playing as Urta when you fight him, so I don't understand your complaint (did you just not realize that?). If not, that's the only "minotaur lord" in the game, so there's some sort of confusion somewhere.
>>2687
Nope, there's also a Minotaur Lord that can appear in the Mountains normally. Encountered and killed it many a time, but I've not had the bug the other anons are talking about
>>2688
>>2687
Addendum, I never knew about that at all, my apologies. Seems like some sort of oversight, though.
>>2684
Indeed. It should be possible to fuck the sharkgirls so much that they come back pregnant and/or with their daughters, whom you also fuck and breed.
>>2686
>I'd recommend at least a comma or something so that it's not one unbroken death march.
That sentence is a breathless incantation on purpose, though.
>"Mutual" doesn't really work here because the "you" is singular.
It's a gasp that is mutual, but saying it that exact way is too wordy, hence shortened to this. Further, the "yourself" already establishes that the subject is a singular you, so the "mutual" really is only modifying "gasp", telling you that she's gasping as well. Eh, I tried.
>Well, there are a lot of things that wouldn't work for.
To my shame, mainly the very things she sells. "Out of the way" any better, or does anything conflict with that, too?
>I'd recommend adding the "with" before "your" to keep them both objectless.
I got rid of that to avoid a second "with" so shortly after the previous.
>Is there a reason that this isn't connected to one of the paragraphs around it?
With 2 1/2 in-game lines, it's a small paragraph of its own, anyway. It's chiefly to get a short "your action—her action—your action" sequence, though that's broken after the next sentence.
>"Delivers a pass over" doesn't work.
Even when synonymous with "lick"?
>but I need to tell you that it's too far
I'm very tempted to keep it anyway, though.
>I think you want that "until" to modify "clutch"
Does it matter? "Aching for their touch, you guide them to your [chest] [...] in order to get your need across until you can focus on riding Marielle's face in full" doesn't sound wrong to me.
>Huh? What?
Marielle is a seamstress. You never noticed?
>I wonder if you're thinking of a different phrase.
Been a while. "On the dot" may have been it, though that one's usually used together with a specified time. Well, you're the one here who's anal about the sanctity of his idioms; could I defile it that way?
>I'll note that I believe using "crave" like that is kinda archaic.
That's the "desire" sense here, not "beg". Though I guess both fit.
>ly?
There's a good number of adjectives that were also used as adverbs before their -ly form got introduced and popularised. "Exceeding" is one of them.
>>2695
>so the "mutual" really is only modifying "gasp"
Well that's not the problem, it's that the "with" means that it's part of the action it's attached to, but that action is something only the player is doing.
>"Out of the way" any better, or does anything conflict with that, too?
I was thinking of armors that you can't really shift around to get an opening (like plate mail), but that's probably good enough that people's imagination can fill in the gaps.
>Even when synonymous with "lick"?
It's just that the interaction of the individual parts doesn't seem to work for me. The only usages I can find of that are football-related, but there's a chance that this is only awkward to me. A second opinion would help.
>I'm very tempted to keep it anyway, though.
I don't know how such a finely wrought line could ever fail to break the reader's neck with whiplash, which while nice in and of itself, does kinda detract from the scene overall.
>in order to get your need across until you can focus on riding Marielle's face in full" doesn't sound wrong to me.
That would imply that the player doesn't care if she's aware of their needs after they get focused, which doesn't seem like your intent.
>Well, you're the one here who's anal about the sanctity of his idioms; could I defile it that way?
"On the dot" would be fine, but I might recommend something more like "on cue".
>That's the "desire" sense here, not "beg". Though I guess both fit.
I got that, I'm referring to the structure (crave X to Y). It seemed wrong to me at first glance, but I found some robust usage in older works, so it's definitely not incorrect.
>adverbs
Oh, neat, like "passing".
>>2684
You can avoid the Venus game over by occasionally just talking to her instead of sex I believe.
>>2690
A fellow man of taste.
>>2706
I already knew.
My point is that we should actually be able to fuck her (It just raises lust after the first encounter ) without punishing us for it.
There's very little giantess content (not my fetish though) but it's quite retarded to cause a game over for fucking too much.
>>2687
I have that shit Urta disabled (i wish i could just behead her and cut off her dick) .
As other anon said, there's the minotaur lord random encounter in the mountain.
The fucking scenes are the same of the minotaur, but it has over 1000 hp.
That's the one that has the bug of the shitty mino cum.
We should be able to rape it anally, cut off his dick and put it in his mouth.
That or maybe shove 10 succubi milk down their throat and turn them into submissive hollstaur cocksleeves.
>>2707
>succubi milk
>not la bova
Formally requesting the implementation of sleeping with Kiha at night, and sex with Tilly, as soon as possible. Please.
>>2707
I feel the idea of the Venus game over makes sense. She has no interaction with anyone else but you and lives in a lake of corrupted water. If the only interaction she gets is sex, that's probably going to cause her to lose herself to the corruption and try keeping the only source of sex as a permanently available sex toy. But, if you talk to her every now and then, you can keep her somewhat sane. Of course, there should probably be some evolution to her content, maybe find her some friends to talk to and not lose her mind. Become a mobile fishing platform for the otter or something. Would need someone to care enough to write any fixes or expansions to her, either way, and I don't think anyone does.
>>2622
I think sparring with Jojo could be added in without too much effort, maybe even have it raise your training level
Helspawn needs to be able to have and increase her sparring intensity. Is a little pointless to fight our daughter and see no improvement in her fighting capacities. Or add a menu to train and raise her stats.
>>2738
Turning on the option to level scale things makes her extremely difficult to beat due to her healing, meaning you can exploit her sparring to automatically master any weapon.
>OtherCoCAnon
How do I get the ability to make a cabin in my camp? So far, all I've been able to make is the training dummy.

Also, how do I recruit Rathazul?

Final question: Is there a wiki for the CoCAnon mod?
>>2767
Go back to where you came from.
>>2767
Play the fucking game, and no.
>>2771
Huh?
>>2767
People will be hostile wherever you go but to answer your questions.

Building a camp requires you to buy a toolbox in telaldre and then you can start building it(I think) Rathazul can be recruited by buying his items a couple of times, and there isn't a wiki for features we've added but you can still use the wiki for revamp as most of it's content is in here in some form.
>>2776
People are hostile because we don't want niggerkind in the thread. You and him can go anywhere else to have such useless conversations.
The random orgy event with Hel and Isabella makes the bovine pregnant, even when she's taking contraceptives.
Choosing a weapon mastery to keep during ascension cost one more point of what's listed in the description.

I am playing the latest android build.
>>2767
>>2776
everything he asked about could have been looked by searching for cabin and corruption of champions followed by a few minutes of reading. You people are trash and the scorn your receive is justified, kill yourselves.

>we
Seriously kill yourselves.
>>2784
Go back to Fag95 or Jewnnoxo's forum, you retarded redditor.
This is why satan left us.
>>2791
Why would shitting on newfags and spoonfeeders make him a redditor?
>>2796
I can't believe I'm seeing this comment. It's 2019, the internet is for /everybody/.
>>2794
Nah, he is in "hiatus" because of other reasons. There where always faggots and immigrants from time to time.
Less fighting, more sharks.
Wasn't there a guy who was writing in more clothing/armor? I remember that being a thing but I don't know how far along it was.
>>2801
I'm still here. It's mostly dresses and underwear, but stuff's being coded in, ETA unknown.
>>2803
Before the combat rework, I swear.
>>2797
heh
Any tips on descriptive writing? I feel like my vocabulary is somewhat limited whenever I try my hand at it, and when describing things I notice I have a tendency to fall back on using a repetitive sentence structure.
how to save the game...
>>2809
how to kill yourself...
>>2807
You noticing those things is already the most important step. Vocabulary can be expanded by simply reading more, and it's perfectly normal to keep a thesaurus open for those words that just won't come to mind. Sentence structure again comes down to reading, as well as actually having a closer look at how other people are handling it. Preferably people whose style you like. The best quick and general advice I guess I can give is to try and put yourself into the character's shoes when describing something. What is the first thing you notice, what is the next, how—if at all—are the senses other than sight being involved, does it invoke any mood or feeling, what are you liable to pay more or less attention to, and what else could be important for the reader to know? Things like that. You don't have to, and often shouldn't, go down the entire list, but it helps to get an idea of what to mention and what not, and then think about how that particular character would express it. For a more neutral narrator like CoC's, you should of course keep the personality to an excusable degree and roughly in line with the rest of the game.
Is this how you felt all those months?:
>but you get the message and continue on further
You tease.
>Scarred and stitched-up as though her body is
There's a random "though" stuck in there.
>Not the pillowy goodness of something more developed
I'd recommend against "goodness" unless you want to sound like a cereal commercial.
>that fits the petite seamstress all too well
Why "all too well"?
>With your thumbs, you gently knead the delicate flesh as you travel in wide circles over her skin towards the two peaks that dot her chest like a pair of snowberries
I'm a bit confused by this motion in general, but specifically, how are the circles wide if they're closing in on her nipples? Also, I have no idea what a snowberry is, and I imagine the simile'd be more confusing than anything else for a lot of readers.
>tug at your [armor], heatedly working to loosen the top
Plenty of armors don't have tops.
>sliding it out of the way
You should avoid using pronouns for armors, as some of them are plural, and there's not any tagging for that yet.
>sliding it out of the way[if (has uppergarment) {, followed by your [uppergarment],}] and baring your [chest] before pulling her back
I find that that interjection really messes with the flow of the sentence.
>On every little rub or undulation, you stimulate each other's bodies further
I find "on every little undulation" unfitting, but that's fairly nitpicky.
>prickling lust
But neither of you is taking a bath.
>Your chest is [if (cup size is flat or A) {about as small as Marielle's, and the resulting symmetry and friction provide you with a heavenly harmony in your intimate coupling.
I think you're transitioning from a singular to a plural "you" here without any marking. You had a "the both of you" last paragraph, so that's out, but you should probably add something.
>providing her with ample, pillowy goodness
You're telling me you liked this one so much that you used it twice in one passage? I'm going to have to ask you to take a look through your own smug folder. Also, that comma shouldn't be there.
>to press up against, and you with the gratification of
I would also highly recommend against that comma (there's no significant shift in focus between these two objects).
>[if (cup size is > FF) {, or anyone's, really}]
You're undershooting that in this cursed realm.
>the pumping thumps quicken to reveal her softer spots
I feel like you're trying to get "softer" to mean "sensitive", but that's not really working out.
>burst
s
>over the most vulnerable of regions
I'd recommend the "your" there.
>The lens of her glasses bumps against you
But her glasses have two lenses.
>well-conscious
Don't think that should have a hyphen, as "well" is just an adverb.
>but your simmering blood has cooled somewhat
I don't know if you care about goos as much as yuribot.
>but she doesn't seem to want to let go, and presses her lips against your cheek
I feel like a lot of this are nitpicky wording things, but I'd recommend something like an "instead" to justify/emphasize the comma.
>and let her explore you at her leisure while you're steadily untangling yourself from her many limbs and inch away
I'd generally recommend that you match the aspect of "untangle" to that of "explore", but you should absolutely match it to "inch" (so to be clear, "while you steadily untangle yourself", though just "inching" would at least be acceptable).
>With a step back[if (!isnaked) { while rearranging your [armor]}]
This just seems a bit awkward to me, though I couldn't put my finger on exactly why.
>You've been occupying them for quite some time,
Since you're no longer doing so, that "have" should be a "had".
>She peeks outside, lingers there in brief thought, then faintly bobs her head and gets up.
You've probably guessed this complaint already, but splitting the last item in that list into two is strange and awkward.
>the girl says as she dips you a curtsy
The pedant in me wants to tell you that "dip" is intransitive, but I like this for some reason, so nice work.
>>2807
I think that >>2812 has some great advice, and that definitely covers the most important parts, but I can add two things that might help. First, just posting your stuff and getting specific feedback is a great way to identify problems/learn solutions. Even if what you end up making doesn't feel perfect to you, it can always be a starting point. Secondly, I can recommend learning a bit of basic grammar to help with the sentence structure problems you mentioned. Knowing what the different chunks are that you can use could let you put them together more easily. There's some stuff in the writing guide in the OP, but nothing comprehensive.
How do I get rid of the vines?
>>2817
You just take them off.
>>2819
Shit, I didn't realise it was that simple. Sorry for the stupid question, I'm fine now.
>>2805
https://w.atwiki.jp/rai7puk/pages/20.html
Damn so many mods, this is suicide fuel. I wonder how many games the japanese got but we'll never even hear of them
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>>2815
>There's a random "though" stuck in there.
I was under the impression that would amount to something like "Despite her body being stitched-up and scarred". It apparently can't carry that meaning though, and I have no clue why I thought so. I guess just getting rid of the "as" fixes it?
>Why "all too well"?
Because I forgot about its negative connotation.
>Also, I have no idea what a snowberry is, and I imagine the simile'd be more confusing than anything else for a lot of readers.
Difficult to retort here without being catty. Knowing what a snowberry is is not required to form at least some sort of mental image. The word combines "snow" with "berry". So at face value, it's a berry that is either made of snow or shares at least one quality with snow, the most common of which when it comes to words relating to flora and fauna being the colour. So, I dunno, could be a berry that's white.
>Plenty of armors don't have tops.
Such as? Skimming through, only the indecent ebonweave robe could be called into question for sort of lacking a top or top part that needs to be loosened.
>You should avoid using pronouns for armors
Looking at it, "it" could refer to either "[armor]" or "the top". I trust readers to choose the path of least resistance. But maybe that's foolish.
>I think you're transitioning from a singular to a plural "you"
Are you taking "your chest" as a synecdoche representing "the player", or how did the issue you're seeing come to life?
>I'm going to have to ask you to take a look through your own smug folder.
I'm smug enough as-is, thank you.
>You're undershooting that in this cursed realm.
My bad, let's up that by another four.
>I feel like you're trying to get "softer" to mean "sensitive", but that's not really working out.
Why not—because of the figurative meaning of "soft spot"?
>But her glasses have two lenses.
But from that position, it's unlikely that both are hitting you at the same time, unless she's trying for that.
>as "well" is just an adverb
An adverbial "well" is often enough hyphenated, but right here the compound isn't prepositive, nor does the "well" significantly change the meaning of "aware". That's why it doesn't need one. I think I have a few of these redundant hyphens.
>I don't know if you care about goos as much as yuribot.
Probably not as much, but since this here is a figurative "blood" (mood, passion), it doesn't matter. The later "her own pulse, too" contradicts that so some extend, but whatever.
>This just seems a bit awkward to me, though I couldn't put my finger on exactly why.
What part of it, the whole sentence?
>splitting the last item in that list into two is strange and awkward.
Your complaint has been acknowledged and disregarded.
>"dip" is intransitive
You mean this particular meaning of "dip" can take only one object. But thanks, I stole that from somewhere else because I liked it just as much, grammaticality be damned.
>>2819
I didn't want to be a dumb faggot and ask but now I feel embarrassed I didn't even try that.
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I wanted to have this done last week but that didn't really work out. Not really happy with what I wrote but I did my best.
https://pastebin.com/b758NbDg - vampire sisters part 1: Wrote a new scene for killing Emily (i hope it is sadder), also wrote the pc (m/f/genderless?) raping her too.
>>2611
>a silly mode scene of the pc entering the wardrobe that fran hides if they are small enough
I thought about doing something that for a child PC. Maybe I should try adding a route for child players before moving on to the next part.
>>2623
You're in luck as that will probably be one outcome at least.
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>>2835
Well, you're great at writing vanilla scenes, and i do hope you get to finish them, they're probably going to be as cute as Sylvie.
Pure love sex, hold hands scenes and kissing are top tier (in general).
Maybe a scene where both sisters drink a bit of your blood and kiss you?
Have them alternate, one sucks your blood and the other smooches you? Maybe Emily teaching Fran how to have sex?
>>2835
The death is sadder indeed. Good job.
Also do you have plans of making a slave route?
>>2835
Fran is acute. ACUTE
>>2835
I want to cuddle her wholeheartedley and make her feel wanted.
And also do perverse things with her underwear and her sister.
>>2844
>no mention of doing perverted things with her
>only her underwear and her sister
>>2812
>It apparently can't carry that meaning though, and I have no clue why I thought so.
Both "though" and "as" can do that individually (together they mean "like"/"as if"), so dropping either works.
>Difficult to retort here without being catty.
Apologies, I meant to go back and change the word "confusing", but forgot. It's more just that that kind of thing takes you out of the flow a bit, not that you wouldn't understand.
>or top part
I hadn't considered that reading, but there are some with top parts that can't just be loosened well independently (like the rubber fetish suit and goo armor). Probably not an issue, I suppose.
>Looking at it, "it" could refer to either "[armor]" or "the top". I trust readers to choose the path of least resistance. But maybe that's foolish.
"Sliding the top out of the way" would definitely mean to me that you're using "top" as a distinct piece, not just the top part.
>Are you taking "your chest" as a synecdoche representing "the player", or how did the issue you're seeing come to life?
I don't know what you mean. Are you denying that the first "your" is singular? Are you unaware that possessive pronouns have number as well?
>[if (biggesttitsize > 1 && biggesttitsize < 5) {
I refreshed and noticed you doing this, but that doesn't work, since it can't handle two comparisons (complain to one of the better coders if you want that changed). Instead, you should nest them, like so: [if (biggesttitsize < 2) {...|[if (biggesttitsize < 5) {...|...}]}].
>because of the figurative meaning of "soft spot"?
Well first off, that's emotional, not based on sensation, and secondly, you're once again playing with an idiom, and while either changing the form a bit or playing with the meaning can be okay, doing both makes it unrecognizable.
>But from that position, it's unlikely that both are hitting you at the same time, unless she's trying for that.
My point's about the wording. Since there are two, there is no one "the lens of her glasses". I'd recommend a "one of" or the like here, but I'll recognize the outside possibility that this is autism.
>but right here the compound
But it's not a compound, which was my point.
>but since this here is a figurative "blood" (mood, passion)
I recognize that, but the metaphor's still a bit mangled if the player doesn't actually have blood.
>so some extend
Lay off the liquor.
>You mean this particular meaning of "dip" can take only one object.
That's neither what I meant, nor what I should have meant (it's more of just a nonstandard usage than a grammatical thing), but anyways.
>>2852
>Are you unaware that possessive pronouns have number as well?
I know, and I was trying to figure out what your point was by coming up with a reasoning like that. Guess I'm in the dark again.
>it can't handle two comparisons
Well that's fucking retarded and screws me over pretty nicely. Can it at least do comparison + something else, like (corruption > 20 && !hasdick)?
>Well first off, that's emotional, not based on sensation, and secondly, you're once again playing with an idiom
But I'm not playing with an idiom. Aiming for the idiomatic sense here would be idiotic, how would that make sense? I was wondering whether "softer spots" looks too much like said idiom and may confuse the errant mouthbreather, hence causing it to "not really work out". Maybe I should stop making assumptions about your chains of thought and just ask you directly what the respective issues are. Consider yourself hereby asked.
>But it's not a compound, which was my point.
It's an adverb modifying an adjective. What other name does that have? The internet isn't helping.
>>2853
I missed this one:
>What part of it, the whole sentence?
No, the quoted part. The "while" seems incredibly awkward to be stuck there in the way it is.
>Well that's fucking retarded and screws me over pretty nicely.
But I told you this already. Specifically, I told you that it can't do it but not to worry about it, since I just have to do a bit more work on my end (however, nesting is preferred when possible).
>Aiming for the idiomatic sense here would be idiotic
Which is why I expressed uncertainty in the initial comment, but congratulations, you've traded a mangled idiom for a nonsensical meaning. Why "softer" at all? How does the thumping help the player feel which parts are soft? Have you not touched human skin in so long that you've forgotten that it has a tactile sensation? You're saying that a quality that only matters to you (the softness) is easier to find because of her reactions, but that just doesn't work. So are you implying that these softer parts are more sensitive, and thus that she's reacting more when touched there? If so, that's exactly what I was getting at.
>It's an adverb modifying an adjective. What other name does that have?
I feel like you're again confused by what a compound is, because that has nothing to do with it. If you're looking for a term for a group of words, "phrase" or "constituent" may be appropriate in different contexts.
>>2851
It wasn't an exhaustive list, that was just on the pervert roulette at the time.
Is there some requirement to get the shark daughter education scenes?
I've been sitting here for like 30 minutes doing nothing but watching and playing with them and I only got the penis bully scene like once
I kind of wish you could use a big-enough clit (5 inches min?) as a substitute dick with a fixed cum of 0. Like how becoming full cat lets you gain flexibility, having a huge clit gives you a perk that makes it count as a dick for scenes.
Would that be too much effort? I would be willing to write up the fluff as long as I know what I need to write.
>>2887
Probably a shit-ton, considering you'd be rewriting any male-pc scene where you are using your dick that references any of your cum, which is nearly all of them I would think, and any point where your dick is described as dick and not a 5 inch clit. Just my guess, but you'd be putting in more work than anyone person has put in at this point. Good luck.
>>2888
I feel like there's a way to bullshit it, but I'm going to go check out the scenes and see what I'm working with here.

Is there a way see just the codes without going through the non-euclidean texts that is code?
>>2887
Why? Clit fucking is essentially dickgirl/ futa shit, like gnoll clit fucking is inconsistently referred as vaginal sex and sometimes as urethral penetration.
Rather have a proper submissive trap character than this.
We could use someone writing Izumi to finally get an Oni waifu.
>>2894
>Why?
Because aesthetics and to enjoy some penetrative content without actually being a futa, which has the game do different checks for since you have two sexual organs instead of one. Also because if I can get a huge one anyways, might as well put it to use.
>Izma and Izumi
The former kind of sucks overall, and the latter is fine as-is in my opinon.
>Gnoll clit fucking
It's a pseudopenis. Different organ. That's why it's considered vaginal penetration, though urethral penetration is incorrect.
>>2289
>I feel like there's a way to bullshit it
I imagine the parsers could be changed so that [cock] uses your clit if you have the perk, but that would still leave reading every scene and writing out variants whenever something only make sense with a true cock. Sounds absolutely miserable, but we did have a madman do the same for nofur mode.
How do I get the prison stuff in the alley to work? It never fires
>>2902
You don't.
>>2901
I can at least give it a shot. If you don't hear from me again, just assume I said "fuck it" and rolled up a futa.
>>2904
Have fun with your futa.
>killit that bitch Kelt still kicks you of the farm
Whatevs, Marble is kinda shit anyway.
>>2903
Shit's broken
>>2906
>Shit's broken
Yeah, broken and never finished, that's why it's gone.
>>2881
Just have at least one virgin shark daughter, and play with them. Has to be a sharkgirl, not a tigershark.
>>2908
I want an option where we can join our two lewd shark-girl daughters in a threesome bonding for PCs with a dick.
I don't want to just to watch them, i want to teach them the joys of being their daddy's cocksleeves.
I haven't been able to run into the fox twins event with Hel in the bar since I started using this version of the game. Someone in the discord told me it the event was still in there and that I was just having bad rng, has anyone else run into it?
>>2923
If Helia is monogamous you won't get that event.
>>2931
The window should be after you befriend her but before she moves in with you? Or at least before you have helspawn? That's around the time I start encountering them in every other version of the game and it's always frequent and reliable. It's only with /hgg/ mod that I can never find them.
>>2895
>not wanting to make oni kids with strong oni waifu
>not wanting to have shark daughters that want to be bred by their father
>>2939
>shark daughters that want to be bred by their father

Jesus Christ how arousing
>>2939
I'm more partial to centaur incest
>>2932
>The window should be after you befriend her but before she moves in with you? Or at least before you have helspawn?
None of that matters. If you tell her that you'll keep her satisfied so she doesn't need anyone else, she stops sleeping around. That includes the twins and Urta.
>It's only with /hgg/ mod that I can never find them.
Because this mod is the only one where she can be monogamous.
Anyone got a coc2 backers download?
>>2952
>Anyone got a coc2 backers download?
I'll keep this brief for everyone's sanity: no, fuck off.
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>>2945
Fuck, okay. Thanks.
>>2942
It makes my dick diamonds.
>>2943
That is fine too. I can't wait until i can make kids with Snuggles and Fran.
>You feel your duo of cantaloupe-sized goopy testicles quickly swell then tighten out of nowhere, forcing some of their payload out your mushroom-headed horse-member. Suddenly your hand darts down your Naughty Nun’s Habit and delivers the errant cum directly to your mouth! “Had some time on my hands, so I decided to try out some new recipes. What do you think?” Shouldra asks. Tastes... citrus-y? That your loins are being used as an experimental factory is... disconcerting.

You feel revitalized from your recent intake, but soon you’ll need more...

Your smothering breasts fidget ominously, a muffled female voice piping up, “No cloth, metal, latex, or gel can protect you from me, champion. Give in and caress these cans!”

I feel like I can go even further.
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>>3005
In unrelated news, Shouldra, the nun's habit, and horses have been disabled.
>>3013
I'll disable you next.
>>3035
I came disabled.
Is it intentional that masteries saved using ascension points only carry over for that single ascension? Looks like you need to spend points again the next time you ascend if you want to keep them again. Sounds like a total waste of points.
How do I stop jobbing to demon form akbal, he is kicking my fucking ass
>>3063
Get gud.
>>3013
>Horses have been disabled
This game needs more bestiality and cum vomiting.
>>3063
There are two ways of doing it
First is being pussy and using healing items like spring water
Other is to hit him until he dies
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https://pastebin.com/XjwJ2kzQ - I started on part 2 for the vampire sisters. The only thing in it at the moment is the player visiting while Fran is asleep. I did update part 1 a little bit too, though it was just with letting the player search around certain rooms for small stuff. Like finding another set of comfortable clothes and a dirty platter to sell. Probably will add a route for child pc's to part 1 too, just been trying to figure out what to write overall for this draft.
>>2836
>hold hands scenes
You're a real degenerate anon. But I do like the idea of Emily and Fran alternating between kissing while drinking the pc's blood so i'll be humbly stealing that idea. I don't know about teaching Fran to have sex, but there'll be a threesome at some point.
>>2837
I didn't have a slave route planned. Not sure how I would go about a slave route, though I do have some little things in mind for evil characters to do.
>>2840
Glad you think so. I'm not really sure what is very cute about her this draft.
>>2844
>do perverse things with her underwear and her sister
So you want something like Emily jerking you off with Fran's underwear?
>>3063
Divine Wind+decaying touch spam. Cheese like no tomorrow.
>>3081
Nigger if you want somethin to help just reread your old bog sisters draft, i really liked the interactions on that one.
>>3063
Punch him.
>>3060
It's a total waste of points. Better to put them into perming event and racial perks and maxing corruption tolerance.
>>3081
>I didn't have a slave route planned.
Yeah, its just a idea, it would indeed be a lot of work.
>>3060
No. Just don't reload between ascensions and you'll be fine, the problem is that the permanent status isn't saved.
>>3081
Seems good so far.
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>>3081
>Emily jerking you off with Fran's underwear
Hell that works, I was just stating incest and pantsu as seperate things. I'm just a degenerate for cute underwear.

Kinda wish i'd saved the Fran Meido and pantyjob scenes now.
>>3098
I'm pretty sure it's in the content submission somewhere. Now if only it wasn't in fucking google docs.
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>>2939
Yes hello can I pipe in a voice for 'tigershark daughters that want to breed their mother'
And Izma being into, very guiltily, joining in on the incest
Update WHEN
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>>1364
IF you're still about Marielle-writer, I think she's bretty good. Still wish I could get her to model pantsu for me.
Also, will the twin sister cats ever be revisited, even if they yhave really odd ideas of what should be inserted into themselves?
>>3106
Glad she's still in your favour, pantsu-obsessed anon.
>Still wish I could get her to model pantsu for me.
So do I, but I've kinda written myself into a corner for that one, personality-wise. She'd be the type to do that maybe once or twice, then ask herself "what the hell am I doing?" Perhaps I'll come back to that idea some other time, but for now I only want to make her commission menu a little less lonely. Everything else is in the stars.
As for the lolidom kitten-sisters, I have plenty of ideas for them, but finding the time and drive to sit down and make something out of it is a different matter entirely, as any of them would be a good chunk of work.
>>3114
>Pantsu obsessed
I feel bulliedand I wish it wasn't true.
And I presumed Marielle is the kind who would do things to please others, even if she doesn't particularly understand. It's nice to feel wanted or attractive, even if you have to induldge someone's strange requests, as she'll technically let you creampie her even if she didn't particularly like it.
>>3116
>And I presumed Marielle is the kind who would do things to please others
She is, yes. But the more time she's given to think, the more likely she'll refuse if it's something she's not a fan of. That's the reason why at the few times you're able to dick her, you more or less spring it upon her, not giving her that time. And even then, she stops you if you've been an asshole.
>even if she doesn't particularly understand
That makes me wonder, does Marielle come across as an innocent, clueless, and perhaps childish character, or did you mean that in a different way?
>>3118
As in understand the attraction or interest. Kinks can be perplexing to those who don't have them.
And I suppose the PC could always attempt some measure of compromise or persuasion, but since we don't precisely have some kinda charisma or not a shithead stat it's a bit bizzare for the PC to suddenly be smooth-tongued when meeting the rare few who don't bend over after a quick hows-your-father introduction.
>>3123
>since we don't precisely have some kinda charisma or not a shithead stat it's a bit bizzare for the PC to suddenly be smooth-tongued
Corruption usually gets used in lieu of "not a shithead", but that's anything but a flawless substitute for proper charisma/speechcraft, or even a broader "personality" stat. Something like that, besides stealth and perception, would be really nice to have and play around with. Can't have it all, but for games that put an emphasis on player customisation, it's sometimes baffling how little Jewnoxo cares for his shitpiles' main draw.
>>3129
So you are saying we need a charisma stat?
>>3135
Among others. But it's probably not the brightest idea to introduce a new main stat or two at this stage, unless someone wants to trawl through the entirety of the game and revise the parts where they would be applicable. And that someone won't be me.
>>3083
I did reread the sisters draft for some ideas. The main thing is getting to the parts I have in mind. The scene where you choose to either tickle Emily or Fran will be coming back in some form at least. Another thing i'm wondering about though is if Fran and Emily should have different affection stats or just share one. I thought separate would be okay but i'm not really sure? I think one sister would just like that you're making the other happy so maybe interacting with one should just make both like you. I did try adding some variation for Fran to react a little differently to being seen in her underwear based on her affection already though.
https://pastebin.com/XjwJ2kzQ
>>3086
What characters in game have a slave route anyway? I know Amily and Jojo do. I think marble has the player more or less become a slave in her bad route by being addicted to her milk.
>>3094
Glad you think so.
>>3098
>>3100
If some of Fran's scenes aren't in the google doc archives I did uploaded every draft of her here in a zip file.
https://mega.nz/#!QrRHEahQ!nOh7cJDz7sY-nDECJTgXq0tPkNnCkBOInJcL1FOBIjs
>>3138
I think the affection should be separate, maybe have comments from each character for if you get high affection with the other, maybe have then show then a little jealous of the other.
Having one love you because you are forming a relationship with their sibling is a little too much, maybe make so it goes up on both until a certain point.
>>3081
Can't wait until we have hold hands degeneracy. maybe some kissing and pantyjobs too
>>3138
I too think it should be separate (but only for lewds and romantic action), so to have separate comments and necessary for a threesome option.
It looks great so far.
Maybe have the "look" option for her underwear to raise lust a little bit.
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>You tell Isabella that you want to breed her so she gives birth to semen demons for your semen demon harem that will give birth to more semen demons to add to your semen demon harem, ad infinitum.
>Virility Rating: 100
>Cum Production (after just having sex): 1,221,047 mL
>Can't get Isabella pregnant
Is she infertile or what? i'm tempted to keep modifying my cum production and the modifiers in the related perks but if i do it too much the game will fuck
itself when i try to equip a different armor and will outright ignore me if i try to take off the one i'm wearing.
>>3168
It's not obvious when she becomes pregnant and it takes a long time for her to give birth. Maybe you already succeeded.
Is Marielle not in yet? The Chronicle doesnt mention her implemented, nor does the changelog. But a lot of people on here talk like she's in-game, and I also visited her with the moth daughter despite never seeing her up until that point.
>>3171
She's been finished for a while already
Roughly as long as this thread really
Still not coded in though
Revamp got updated, huh. I honestly thought it was dead.
>>3168
You love to see it. Such virility that you could jizz a new lake for your sharkdaughters to swim in and get themselves constantly bred.
>>3171
You had debug on.
>>3184
>Cleansing Palm can now be made permanent on ascension.
>You can make cabin permanent! It'll be carried over to subsequent ascensions so you don't have to build it again.
>You are no longer stripped of weapons at the end of Ingnam prologue.
>Laid the second batch of groundwork for Dragon City. This is still not yet accessible normally, but you could test the fights in Beta Zone.
These are only things of interest in that changlog
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>>3186
Imagine getting rid of every enemy in a dungeon at the same time by drowning them in cum or making them both glorify and be frightened of your mighty dick
Cont.:
>while hooking your fingers underneath the flounced fabric without even thinking about it in order to slowly slide it downwards.
In addition to the "without even thinking about it" interrupting the flow, it also doesn't really go with the "in order to"—how can you do something with a specific goal if it's thoughtless? I guess I don't get the point of the "without even thinking" in general, but I'll again stress that the two phrases are fighting for a spot there regardless of the logic.
>Soft, snow-white skin does the cloth reveal
You had a "do" inversion at the end of the last paragraph as well, and that's probably not one to repeat so close together.
>where you have only little time to tease her perking nipple and provoke an inhale that makes her ribcage stand in stark relief
"You have only little time" doesn't go with "provoke" very well, as it's more intended for short, premeditated actions (so you'd rarely want an "and" at all). I'd recommend changing "provoke" into a participle and setting that bit off by commas.
>[if (isnakedupper) {always|now}]-naked targets that are your [if (isflat) {flat breasts|[if (biggesttitsize < 5) {nice, soft tits|large, pliable jugs}]}]
This "that are your" is pretty awkward.
>merely teasing you with the prospect of proper devotion to them
The "to them" strikes me as a bit off, and the "them"'s also pretty separated from its antecedent.
>There's nothing you more happily do right now than rest your brow against hers
You're missing a "would", but it would be strange even with it (though probably not enough that I'd bother you about it).
>pry it away from where it was resting on your hips, only to pointedly
Why "only to"? There's not really a change in action/intent.
>takes control back of her hands
Move the "back" before "control".
>undulating your hips in a lust-driven attempt to delve further
But you're not delving anywhere; only she is.
>the little pubic tuft of hair
Should probably move "pubic" over into its proper place.
>Incredible tightness surrounds your digit the moment the seamstress sighs into yet another kiss
"The moment" doesn't make sense to connect these things, as the latter doesn't cause or presage the former.
>her vanishingly small, young breasts
You might consider dropping that comma.
>digital attentions
You'll win a grin from many, but I think this is a spot where the playfulness takes the reader a bit out of the mood/flow.
>and only roll into your general direction.
Just "in".

Shorter one, but another should come soon when I'm more able to work on this.
>>3168
Cum production and virility don't scale infinitely for impregnation checks; the chances are all capped at some number or another. Though as >>3169 said, she may be pregnant already.
>>3189
The cleansing palm permability thing is probably fine, but the rest are retarded for various reasons. Kitteh has tried to make a bunch of claims that he's the only modder who's "staying true" to the intent of the original or whatever, but he added the ability to stare at your cabin so hard that you form a spiritual connection strong enough to store its form in your soul (lord knows why this was better than just ignoring the in-universe explanation entirely). Secondly, it makes no sense for the elders to let you take weapons along, since they're supposed to be making nice with the demons. Finally, the dragon city's just placeholder work that's probably never going anywhere (and some of the discussion of what he wanted in it isn't very encouraging either, mainly the fact that you'll be spammed with trash mobs as you try to move around in the dungeon).
>>3190
>pick a spot in the mountains
>start a new goblin religion by edging for a few hours and then deciding to loose the juice
I'd love the ability to perm the cabin. It does very little and takes a lot of effort to build so I never bother.

>>3192
>but he added the ability to stare at your cabin so hard that you form a spiritual connection strong enough to store its form in your soul
That's pretty silly, though, and I bet Fen's intro assumes there's nothing at your campsite when you arrive.
>>3208
It'd make some amount of sense as an ascension perk if instead of it being magical it was just a abandoned cabin you found near your campsite. Ascension perks don't make a lot of sense to begin with and it's not hard to imagine that would be champions(who failed) would build a more permanent residence.
>>3209
They're all given a permanent residence for free though.
>>3118
I wanna hold hands with Marielle and hold her as she sleeps.
Also maybe stick a few fingers in her butt or elsewhere.
>>3191
>it's more intended for short, premeditated actions
But that's exactly what "tease [...] and provoke" is.
>You're missing a "would", but it would be strange even with it
It would be far stranger with one. There's no "would" because there's no mere possibility, no unfulfilled wish; what follows are the PC's actions, nothing less.
>But you're not delving anywhere; only she is.
Right in that moment, you're trying to use her fingers as a masturbation aid, hence why I wrote that as if they were either a tool or your own fingers.
>this is a spot where the playfulness takes the reader a bit out of the mood/flow.
Is it? I think I nested it deep enough into the scene where it's glanced over by most people who would take umbrage with a wording like that. I tend to be a little cuter towards the figurative and/or literal climax because I know I'll likely get away with it there.
>Just "in".
Why? Either is fine.
>>3215
Your dreams won't be just dreams.
>>3208
>>3209
wait I got it
that's where the rain barrel comes from
>>3169
>>3192
It would be nice to get a hint though, like how with Izma you are unable to spar when she is pregnant
>>3226
Approach her with an ovilixer in your inventory. If she's pregnant she'll have an option to use it. Only works once per pregnancy and shortens the time it takes by a little.
>>3216
>But that's exactly what "tease [...] and provoke" is.
"Provoke" is more based on her reaction, and you can't call that hideous construction "short" in the slightest. I'll retain my stance that this is a bit awkward, but you can keep it.
>It would be far stranger with one.
Regardless of the rest of this conversation, this sentence is false, as that construction is extremely common. I wonder if there might have been some confusion about where I meant the "would" should go (after the "you"), because I'm sure you've seen that done many a time.
>There's no "would" because there's no mere possibility, no unfulfilled wish; what follows are the PC's actions, nothing less.
But the simple present is super strange here. You're saying that none of the actions the player habitually takes are better than this resting. What's your problem with "nothing you could potentially be doing right now would make you more happy"? That doesn't imply an "unfulfilled wish" in the slightest, so I'm confused why you brought that up.
If your intention was for this to mean "none of the other things you're doing right now are done more happily", I have three complaints. First, that's a slightly odd sentiment, but forgivable enough on its own, I suppose. Second, that reading isn't very natural, and my first reading can interfere (and you're the one who likes to complain about ambiguity). Thirdly, the player isn't actually doing anything else right at that moment. You had them lick a nipple, but they can't be doing that if their forehead has moved up here. So what are you comparing this head resting to?
>Right in that moment, you're trying to use her fingers as a masturbation aid, hence why I wrote that as if they were either a tool or your own fingers.
But you don't set up that metaphor at all, so no one has any reason to think that. You just say that the player is "undulating their hips", leaving the reader to wonder how exactly that causes any delving on the player's part, and eventually to conclude that you probably meant her fingers delving into the player. I would most definitely recommend you change this.
>I tend to be a little cuter towards the figurative and/or literal climax because I know I'll likely get away with it there.
My inclination would be the exact opposite, but different strokes for different folks, and I can't deny your charm.
>Why? Either is fine.
No, which is why I told you not to use "into", the wrong one. Google Ngram, a random online discussion, and intuition all back me up strongly.
>>3225
Just make so you get the barrel from Amily's destroyed village or something?
Or just don't talk about where it comes from, it aint needed to explain where every single small shit on camp come from.
>>3228
>What's your problem with "nothing you could potentially be doing right now would make you more happy"?
Because it can express a strong wish towards something. Are you retarded, or am I just conflating that with "nothing you would rather do (than)"? Can they not be synonymous? I'm finding it surprisingly difficult to find printed examples here, but the few that do come up point either way.
What if I put the whole sentence into present continuous? "There's nothing you're more happily doing right now than resting your brow against hers, unwinding, and submitting yourself [...]"
>>3233
>What if I put the whole sentence into present continuous? "There's nothing you're more happily doing right now than resting your brow against hers, unwinding, and submitting yourself [...]"
Not him, but that's a strange thing to say and a strange way to say it. Why does it matter that the unspecified other things you're doing aren't being done as happily?
>>3233
>Because it can express a strong wish towards something.
I suppose that it is a bit ambiguous, yes. How would you feel about, "There's nothing that would make you happier than when [...]," or something along those lines?
>What if I put the whole sentence into present continuous?
As >>3237 says, that's pretty odd.
Trying to get back into the swing of it:
>When you slide your fingers out again in a sucking smack
I'd recommend "with" over "in" there.
>ensnares your head in all four of her hands
I actually would recommend the exact same change here, though that obviously presents a mild problem. You wouldn't say that your head is "in all four of her hands", since that implies it's in them separately.
>One of Marielle's pairs of hands repairs her clothing to a state of relative properness, the other holds itself out
Not the biggest fan of that comma splice, but I won't raise any further fuss if you want to keep it.
>hasn't yet quite dissipated
Switch the "yet" and the "quite".
>you've been spending quite some time here
You want present perfect (i.e., just "spent"). What you have means that you have overall been coming here a lot recently.
>Yes, I suppose 'twould be... most prudent.
Notably, the last thing you said to her is that you can't spend all day their, so the "it" would naturally in the flow of conversation refer to that, and it wouldn't be prudent, so I'd recommend changing this into a negative.
>dainty, white as milk, half-naked, and her long, golden hair spilt out
The first three things in this list are modifiers, but the last one is not, so it should not be in a list with those (and please for the love of god don't make me have to explain why again). You could just make the "and" into a "with", if that's acceptable to you (just removing the "and" would also be cool).
>time she takes with fixing her dress
I'd recommend against the "with". The few examples I can find of it only use "with" with a person after.
>dress and hair in satisfied silence, watching her move with swift, practical motions.}] Apparently content with her state of dress
retard
>The motion rouses and shifts her from where she was resting
I don't think the verbs can share the object but not the rest of the predicate. I suppose "rouses her from where she was resting" is kinda okay, so there may be no change needed.
>She certainly doesn't mind being there,
This is my old complaint about the player not being a mind-reader.
>you've scratch by little scratch directed
"Scratch" is almost certainly not what you want there. What exact motion are you imagining that has the player scratching her earlobe?
>the let-down of milk
I know that lactation's probably pretty disappointing in this game, but you should be conscious of the other (and standard) meaning there.
>between light, languid sucking and short pecks and licks all around your areola.
I would very, very highly recommend against splitting one of the objects of a "between" like that.
>you lace your fingers into her silken hair
"Lace" generally takes "through".
>ever wider-growing
I think that should get a hyphen after "ever" as well, no?
>[if (ischild && ispregnant) {[...]|[if (ischild)
Forgot to mention this upon seeing it in some scorpion stuff, but you should try to stack things as efficiently as possible. Instead of checking ischild twice, just split the true of ischild into pregnant and not, i.e., [if (ischild) {[if (ispregnant) {x|y}]|[...]}].
>were...</i>\" Something seems to dawn on her. \"<i>Is... Is this truly all right, then? Ought you not— I mean...
How's this silly? Looking further, you repeat this word for word as the default. I think you may have made a mess.
>You can take some guesses as to why.
I can't. What's the reason/why's it obvious to the player?
>Her mindful attentions aren't tantalizing, not in its negative sense,
"Tantalizing" is a bit of an odd thing to negate in this way, I don't know what "negative sense" of the word you're referring to, and you are absolutely honor-bound to admit that "titillating" is the word you need to use here.

By the way, are there any other sections that you're happy enough with that I can start pasting them in? It really helps to break that up a bit so that it's not one long slog, and there isn't much else left to do on the coding side.
>>1818
They taste like rabbit meat and roses
>>2129
It's not vore if you bite off pieces and eat them properly. It's only vore if you take them in whole, so the faerie thing doesn't count
>>2222
Well I hope they fixed that
>>3208
When I first discovered the cabin I thought it'd lead to you building a building for every single person in the camp, only to find out that you can only do it for yourself and that it's absolutely worthless. They should either add more to it than just building a cabin for the hell of it or drastically reduce how much it costs to build so you don't have to grind or spend thousands just for a useless glorified shed.
>>3254
I fucking lived in a glorified shed for a year, don't invalidate the home I had, that was still a lot better than living in a tent
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>>3248
>just removing the "and" would also be cool
Looks cool, but you do want some sort of signifier telling you that "her long" on its own is not another item on that list, or else it's going to be a little choppy to read.
>This is my old complaint about the player not being a mind-reader.
May not be able to read minds, but certainly faces.
>you should be conscious of the other (and standard) meaning there
I debated that for a good while for that reason, but it is the proper term for it. But then, you still don't exactly see it too often in smut. I don't know, I'm still undecided.
>I think you may have made a mess
It did make sense, I think, but I forgot to pretty that up.
>I would very, very highly recommend against splitting one of the objects of a "between" like that.
But it looks so nice, and came in quite handy.
>I think that should get a hyphen after "ever" as well, no?
No, but I couldn't tell you exactly why. A quick search yielded only unrelated stuff, and I don't feel like going on an odyssey to find out. It's probably something simple like the fact that you should try to avoid having multiple hyphens where you don't have to, and adverbs not needing hyphens when modifying an adjective-participle compound, as there's no real ambiguity. Maybe you're more successful in finding a proper answer, though.
>you are absolutely honor-bound to admit that "titillating" is the word you need to use here.
Am I, now. I'll gladly take your humble apology, thank you very much.
>are there any other sections that you're happy enough with that I can start pasting them in?
Her intro, I suppose, and what else is in that main doc with it, as well as what you didn't yet put in from the desert rose paste. Don't forget to actually refresh, too.
>>3264
>May not be able to read minds, but certainly faces.
Which is fine if you present that as how you know, but you shouldn't just assert her emotions like that without an indicator.
>but it is the proper term for it
I wasn't aware at all, interesting. I would tend to say that you're fine to keep it. I don't remember what hind-milk is.
>It did make sense, I think, but I forgot to pretty that up.
Just so you know, you should always try to avoid repeating text, and there's usually a way to do so.
>But it looks so nice, and came in quite handy.
It doesn't look nice. It causes the hackles to raise. I'd expect I'm not alone in that.
>A quick search yielded only unrelated stuff, and I don't feel like going on an odyssey to find out.
In my searches at the time, I found pretty robust support for hyphenating "ever-X", but it isn't actually a compound, as far as I can tell. I think my support for the hyphen at the time was based on the bracketing [[ever wider]-growing], but [ever [wider-growing]] probably makes more sense.
>Am I, now.
Yes. Or are you trying to tell me that you don't see this pun?
>I'll gladly take your humble apology, thank you very much.
If that's your intent, I don't think it's a bad idea, but I'm not sure how clearly your meaning is coming across. It could easily just be me, but I was obviously confused.
>Don't forget to actually refresh, too.
I hope you're proud to know I did actually remember to do that before this round of editing, for once in my life.
Is it possible to blush through text?:
>The cool tongue dancing and flicking across your nipple
But what regional flavor does this dance have? I've come to expect these things from you, don't drop the ball here.
>When the sound of her finally swallowing the first mouthful of milk—[i:your] milk—graces your ears, it's like biting into the sweet, juicy cherry atop a sugar-glazed cupcake.
This metaphor is pretty strained.
>and with a hum vibrating through your throat and her lips sealed around your throbbing teat
The structural ambiguity of what that "and" is connected to doesn't help you, as the default assumption is the closest thing, which you only realize isn't the case several words later, turning this into a roadbump. This is besides the fact that this "and" repetition isn't great.
>Things of steel and cloth are being swiped away behind you before you're guided backwards
The present continuous isn't extremely suited to taking a "before" like this, so I'd recommend getting rid of the "being".
>with a lovely view down her nude, nubile upper body
"Down her dress" is fine, but this is odd.
>obscuring some of your vision
This is pretty nitpicky, and there's a chance I'm wrong, but "obscuring your vision" generally means things blocking your sight at your eyes, not blocking your view of what you're looking at. "Vision" is the general ability to see, not a specific thing you're looking at.
>Her velvety hair drapes behind, obscuring some of your vision, so you reach to swipe one side behind her ear.
If it's draping behind, how is it covering her front?
>and trapping it against her gum to coax out the tingly flow of milk.
It's been a long time since I was a baby, but do you really put it against your gums?
>By the next thrilling minutes
"By the next" can't take a simple plural (would need something like a number/"few", but it's almost always singular, and just adding a "few" there would sound wrong to me).
>You don't fight the current, you only welcome it with one final, deep gulp of air.
This sentence felt a bit jarring. I might recommend setting up the metaphor a bit better (looking back, I can see how you might have intended "afloat" to conjure images of water, but you can just as easily float in air (in metaphors)).
>it doesn't so much as [i:hit] you, but rather does it comfortingly [i:immerse] your body
"Doesn't so much as" wants a second "as" afterwards to go with it (unless you're using the other sense of "so much as", which is more like "even", but that's not the sense you'd want here).
>Marielle's full-bodied embrace, her sweetly suckling lips, her talented fingers' rubs and strokes, and the blissful light-headedness
I don't know if I've mentioned it before, but you're really fond of four-item lists. They're all generally fine individually, but I might recommend sticking to three a bit more (all three lists I've read here in this short section have four items). Four items lists tend to stand out, so it's possible to overuse them a bit, but it's also possible that I've just become more sensitive to that from you.
>You're dizzy, quivering, lethargic
I can feel your smug hand in this.
>but still does the slight shift in weight and the seamstress's face appearing in your vision
I believe that should be "do", and I'd recommend "a" over "the" for "shift".
>draws on, brims over, shakes her slender body, and proves
But aha, I'm vindicated in the end.
>It draws on, brims over, shakes her slender body, and proves to be quite contagious
I'll note that the first two verbs didn't help me identify what this "it" was/make sense of what you were saying, but I was able to figure it out by the end of the list. I don't know how generalizable of a problem that is.
>turning to a gluttonous, needy blob of jelly in your lap
I'd recommend "into", as "turn to" has another meaning.
>it's like you've sucked all strength out of her; her arms
I might recommend a colon/dash there.
8kun has stabilized for now, anons have begun posting in /hgg/ there for anyone interested.
A little chaser since I have nothing else to work on:
>hand on Marielle's thigh and close your eyes.[pg]You feel the girl lay one of her hands
Dunno how much you care.
>simply keeping it there for contact alone
Mind reading, and this time you have no excuse.
>after a while when she must be done cleaning her glasses
That "when" attaches to "while" without a comma or something to separate them, and you don't want that, though I might recommend only keeping one of these phrases, since they jockey for space a bit.
>[if (femininity >= 59) {[if (biggesttitsize < 2) {I do adore|[if (biggesttitsize < 5) {exceed indeed|[if (biggesttitsize < 7) {I do adore|I do find quite pleasing}]}]}]|[if (biggesttitsize < 2) {I do quite like|[if (biggesttitsize < 5) {I do find quite sightly indeed|I do quite like}]}]}]
Several instances of repeated text. I can sort things out if you don't want to, but that's something you want to avoid.
>gather your bearing
That should be plural, no?

I also forgot to note that I liked the meat of the breastfeeding scene, nice job.
>>3288
>This is besides the fact that this "and" repetition isn't great.
I have literal thousands of those, how this one any worse?
>"Vision" is the general ability to see, not a specific thing you're looking at.
It is, and it doesn't work here. I was using it to avoid repetition (view) and crossing my fingers nobody would notice. That hope didn't last very long, I guess.
>do you really put it against your gums?
I sadly don't have a titty at hand to suckle, but that is indeed what most babies do. Now, a teen's or adult's mouth and teeth are a little bigger, though that shouldn't be much of an issue in most cases. On washboards with small nipples, it might be a challenge to pull off.
>you're really fond of four-item lists
I am rather partial to lists in general, though I don't consciously aim for a specific number.
>all three lists I've read here in this short section have four items
Really? I spy a couple threes, a five, and then two fours ("The cool tongue [...]" & "Marielle's full-bodied embrace, [...]"). Those two are reasonably far apart, but where's the third you saw? Did you already count "It draws on, [...]" here?
>I believe that should be "do"
Grammatically, it should, but the flow seems to slightly favour the singular for me. It's one of those fringe cases, I believe, where one of unarguably correct, but the other just rolls off better and is often used instead.
>>3312
>Mind reading, and this time you have no excuse.
She's doing nothing with that hand. In that situation, what else would it be for? It's less of a "mind-read" and more of a "mood-read". Should I put that behind an intelligence-check for you?
>that's something you want to avoid.
It's either repeating stuff like this with the parser alone, or employing some pretty lengthy conditionals. Either way, you're ending up with an unsightly bulk of text. I suppose one is slightly more elegant than the other.
>>3322
>I have literal thousands of those, how this one any worse?
I've commented on some of them (like with the "between" from last time). Subsetting things with "and" multiple times so close together is ill-advised.
>I am rather partial to lists in general, though I don't consciously aim for a specific number.
Anything over three stands out a bit. Again, probably just something I've noticed more and more over the course of reading what, ~200k words from you? I wonder how many have changed in between rereadings.
>I spy a couple threes
I thought I remember there being a fourth verb in the "seeks yours" list, but I don't see any other threes below the "both" (the section I was referring to) and before the one I mentioned.
>a five
I'm missing this one entirely.
>Grammatically, it should, but the flow seems to slightly favour the singular for me.
Fine enough with me, but surprising coming from you.
>She's doing nothing with that hand. In that situation, what else would it be for? It's less of a "mind-read" and more of a "mood-read".
The player making inferences is fine, but that's not what's going on here; you're just asserting something in narration. This is her intention/desire being presented as a strict fact with no process for how it was learned.
>It's either repeating stuff like this with the parser alone, or employing some pretty lengthy conditionals.
Not particularly lengthy. Certainly less text overall than repeating the sections. For this one, you should check for the middle range first and then make the femininity check inside. Refreshing the page, I see that you've exchanged messes, and also that you seem to have messed with some of the conditions themselves, and I want to make sure that that's not accidental.
>I suppose one is slightly more elegant than the other.
Repeating text is also avoided for the purposes of maintenance. It's irksome to have to change something in multiple places when that's unnecessary (and can cause things to be missed).

To be clear, this is how I'd make it maximally clean/readable:
>(player.biggestTitSize > 2 && player.biggestTitSize < 5 ? "[if (femininity >= 59) {exceed indeed|I do find quite sightly indeed}]" : "[if (femininity >= 59) {[if (biggesttitsize < 7) {I do adore|I do find quite pleasing}]|I do quite like}]")
>>3324
>I don't see any other threes below the "both"
"More shuffling [...]"
>I'm missing this one entirely.
"your nape, your arms, your chest, your waist, your [legs]"
>with no process for how it was learned
The process is "You feel the girl lay one of her own hands on yours, simply keeping it there". That's it, she's doing nothing else with it, so the logical inference is "for contact alone". Why would I need some modifier conveying uncertainty when there is practically none? Were you to write about a mugging, and the robber flourishes a knife at his victim, would that be "perchance in a threat" or simply "in a threat"?
>you seem to have messed with some of the conditions themselves, and I want to make sure that that's not accidental.
The general mess is a perpetual accident, but me making a small change to the low-fem side isn't one.
>>3326
>"More shuffling [...]"
Questionable, but I guess I'd give it to you.
>That's it, she's doing nothing else with it, so the logical inference is "for contact alone".
No, there are any number of other reasons she could be doing that. What if she's so exhausted that she can't move it? What if she's just distracted by something and not thinking about it? What if she really likes the feeling of your skin? What if she desperately wants you to fondle her, but isn't confident enough to request that, so she's resting her hand on yours as a middle ground, burning with the desire to move it somewhere else? "For contact alone" is a very specific and internal desire.
>The general mess is a perpetual accident
Well do you mind fixing it?
>>3328
>Well do you mind fixing it?
Me changing the low-fem conditional makes your solution impossible. But I tried. Not very hard, but I tried.
>>3329
Well I might recommend not making that change then, especially considering its actual impact. The main thing is that you probably shouldn't break up the conditional parser with ternary expressions like that. If there's no other way to structure it, I would recommend abandoning the parser entirely.
In current version 1.4.15.1 using adobe flash player 32(latest from the site) on both fresh and old saves the game will not save my display settings.
It keeps reverting back to the blinding yellow and will not swap to whatever my save file is using when loading either, I have to manually change it every time. This is new, I'm fairly sure. It always kept it. I haven't played in months though.

Also on difficulty extreme or nightmare it still displays the difficulty as normal on the save file, however the effect of the chosen difficult is still retained.
Do I... need to find and delete some outdated global settings file or something?
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Nope, tried that. Didn't work.
Unhindered: chance to evade when you are wearing light clothing
Does this mean when wearing armor that says (Light) as opposed to (Medium) and (Heavy)? Because I seem to recall in the past that it was actually your armor value, which had to be, like, less than 5, so thick skin would be bad. Underwear with any armor on it would be bad. A robe that says (Light) would be too much armor if you go for a high enough tier like ebonbloom or something.
is that still an issue? If it is, it probably shouldn't say light clothing.
Gotta keep going:
>Her hat's hanging to the side
You might want to add an "off" after "hanging" to make it clear that her hat isn't on her head.
>before your cup it with your palm,
The nostalgia almost brings me to tears. It's moments like this that I appeciate what a long jouney it's been.
>In an effort to make it as pleasant as you can for her, you let your fingertips rake over her scalp
Raking's not a pleasant/calming motion (in the context of a surface, like here).
>you run the other in slow, sporadic figures over her tresses of velvet, interspersed with the occasional soft pat,
The only thing "interspersed" makes sense to modify is "figures", but you have them separated by the "over", so I would recommend moving the "over" in front of the "in".
>interspersed with the occasional soft pat, tousling them in the process,
You generally shouldn't tack on two modifiers to the end of a clause like this unless they modify the same thing or are otherwise related (the brain wants this "them" to be related to something in the "interspersed" phrase).
>start rather to
If you want that "rather" there, it needs commas around it (though in my mind, it clashes with the "indeed" regardless).
>if you're interpreting the faint curvature of her lips correctly while a silent sigh escapes them.
Odd that you clarify here when it's far less necessary than in the places you defend so rabidly.
>An owl's call echoes through the temple
Do owls live in bogs?
>>3348
>This has definitely been the one thing you wanted to do before you went and checked on your camp again
Your phrasing is so offputting that I would swear you were being sarcastic if that made any sense. Definitely don't go with the present perfect, and maybe reasses again when you've changed that.
>\"<i>Ah...</i>\" comes out of Marielle when you take your leave from her.
"Out of" is pretty odd (though I probably wouldn't complain about the one later).
>their ostensive smoothness
Why "ostensive"? Doesn't seem very fitting to me.
>time.isTimeBetween(7.9, 10.1)
I'm obliged to point this out, though you likely would have caught it.
>light-blonde
No hyphen. You lost this fight last time, I'm fairly sure.
>a bit of light-hearted fondling over and behind her ears to draw even the faintest reaction from the demure girl
I'll note that this "even" would mark that as an intention of the player's, not something that actually happens (though the purpose clause helps that along a lot too).
>the seamstress's tresses
Lovely phrasing, but you did use "tresses" in this scene already, and I'd err on the infrequent side with that one, thought you're free to disagree.
>and you let go of her and
Since the topic came up, this is another of the many of those you do. Most of them (like this) don't leave a bad enough impression that I comment, but they're just a bit ugly.
>Her eyes though—lidded and directed groundwards—show no discernible expression in them
I'd recommend against the "in them".
>It's not all there is
This statement confuses me. It's not all there is where? Depending on your answer, I might complain about the lack of an antecedent, though that's potentially fine.
>you should be finding your way back by now.
Nix the "by" or make it "should have been finding" (though the latter's awkward). The current phrasing only works when the speaker doesn't know if the person is doing the action yet or not, but obviously that doesn't apply here.
>Her mindful attentions aren't tantalizing, not in a negative sense,
I happened to think about this again, and I believe I can better explain some of the things wrong with it. Firstly, the reason I had to ask for clarification at first was because that sense of "tantalize" isn't really "negative". There are negative associations, potentially, but it's not negative with regards to the thing you're describing, or even necessarily with regards to the emotion itself. As a result, your meaning isn't super clear. Secondly, the entire format isn't very logical. In the statement, "X is not Y, not in a negative sense of Y," the first claim already implies the second, so it's entirely redundant. It makes sense to say, "X is Y, but not in a negative sense," or "X is not Y, especially not in a negative sense," and maybe even, "X is not Y, not in the negative sense," but not what you have. In the course of writing this, I've come to the conclusion that you probably just wanted the last one, where the additional information provides emphasis. As of now, your sentence is closer to meaning "not 'not tantalizing' in a negative sense", which I don't think is what you're going for based on the next part/your earlier explanation. I think I've graduated to whatever the next stage on the spectrum is.
>>3199
There's a perk that allows you to cum at your maximum capacity always even after cumming, so you can easily make an ocean of cum if you want.
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Thanks for doing it for free guys. Cant imagine what jew trickery allows this guy to make 17k a month
Long haul is nice, I like the feature, but I hate forgetting that it's 19:00+ and doing to deep woods and then having to awkwardly walk away and back over to Evelyn some 5 times. If you could do something about that, that'd be nice.
>>3348
>Do owls live in bogs?
The great horned owl for example can live just about anywhere where there are old trees around, including swamps and bogs. Then there's the great grey owl, also known as the phantom of the north or Lapland owl. Lapland is basically half bog, half conifer forest, and those massive birds are perfectly fine with either. Also various barn owls, northern hawk owls, northern pygmy owls, the aptly named marsh owl, and probably many more that, whilst not directly nesting within bogs or wetlands, have their hunting grounds there. And there's a Swedish idiom "ana ugglor i mossen" - to suspect owls in the bog, meaning to smell danger or something fishy.
In short: yes, some owls may live in bogs.
>No hyphen.
But her hair is a blonde colour that is light, not light and blonde.
>but you did use "tresses" in this scene already, and I'd err on the infrequent side with that one, thought you're free to disagree.
It's been four hundred words between the two, and in a scene that's all about hair, you're both running out of synonyms pretty quickly, as well as being somewhat excused for using one of them twice.
>tl;dr
What I meant to do with that is to invoke the "stimulating/arousing" sense of the word while excluding the "being dangled just out of reach" one. The double negation may be unnecessary, but the reasoning for that is as follows.
The goal is to arrive at and emphasise "fulfilling". So take an adjective commonly used here in smut that you can put into opposition with it and negate it to do just that. Now, "tantalising" isn't used much in its senses of "teasing/frustrating/taunting" nowadays, but you still should probably do the extra step of ruling those meanings out, because some could very well apply here, as in "her attentions are stimulating, but too light to feel satisfying", which is why I chose that word in the first place. And thus you end up with a double negative.
As for "a negative" vs "the negative", "tantalising" seems to possess a certain range that isn't very well-captured in dictionaries. "The" implies there's only one negative sense whilst "a" suggests there might be more. Compare "it was that monomaniac Ahab, furious with this tantalizing vicinity of his foe, which placed him all alive and helpless in the very jaws he hated" with "It is at once a delightful and tantalizing sight. You see it for nothing, but you get nothing" and then "All boats, carriages, beasts of burden, and other vehicles and animals, behave in a similar tantalising and disappointing manner". Three negative instances of "tantalising", all three different in intensity. So why "the"?
>>3360
>So why "the"?
With "a" it could easily be read as referring to the statement as a whole rather than the specific word "tantalizing." As he put it: "not 'not tantalizing' in a negative sense". With "the", it refers more specifically to the meaning of the word alone.
>>3360
>In short: yes, some owls may live in bogs.
Neat, I just wanted owl facts.
>But her hair is a blonde colour that is light, not light and blonde.
Exactly, "light" is modifying "blonde"; why would that need a hyphen? Look up usages of the term "light blond(e)". We had this argument with "light brown", and you acquiesced then (unless I'm misremembering).
>It's been four hundred words between the two, and in a scene that's all about hair, you're both running out of synonyms pretty quickly, as well as being somewhat excused for using one of them twice.
That's fine, I just like to err on the side of caution with mentioning those to you. Also, that's a really odd use of the present continuous, just as a side note.
>What I meant to do with that is to invoke the "stimulating/arousing" sense of the word while excluding the "being dangled just out of reach" one.
Then you should say it is tantalizing, but not in a negative sense. Or use "especially not in a negative sense". Or do about anything other than what you have. If you want to invoke any sense of the word, you cannot say that it is not that word. That just makes no sense at all. Also, if you're looking for a word that means only the parts of "tantalizing" you want, there's a perfectly good one that you know you have little enough shame to use.
>"The" implies there's only one negative sense whilst "a" suggests there might be more.
This is incorrect as far as I can tell. "The" is more a result of the negation (grammatical negation, since terms are getting a bit muddied) than anything else here, though I'll admit that the specifics of the situation aren't entirely clear to me. I can only point back to what I said earlier about it change the referent to "not tantalizing" instead of "tantalizing".
>As for "a negative" vs "the negative", "tantalising" seems to possess a certain range that isn't very well-captured in dictionaries.
I would contest that there's not really a range of separate meanings, but rather just slightly different contexts/usages flavoring a single meaning. We don't say the word "ball" has many different meanings because there are many different types of balls, and all the examples you're bringing up should similarly go under one heading.
>Three negative instances of "tantalising"
But again, "negative" isn't a great word for this. Sure, there is unpleasantness involved in the situation, but the word does not specifically say a negative thing about the things it's modifying. Rather, it implies that there's something positive about them that could be (but isn't) or is otherwise out of reach. When I first read it, I was trying to think of a way that "tantalizing" could imply something negative/unwanted about her actions.

I don't think the idea behind what you're trying to say is bad; it's just not communicated well. I might recommend being a little bit more explicit, along the lines of "not tantalizing, or at least not frustrating(ly so)", "not tantalizing, not in the sense that they're out of reach", etc..
>>3364
>why would that need a hyphen? Look up usages of the term "light blond(e)
I know English has an almost obsessive refusal to hyphenate colours, but I think it's unnecessarily stubborn and retarded. "Light" here is an adjective, not an adverb, so how do you know it's modifying "blonde", and not "hair"? Read to the end before you reply to parts of the shit I'm spouting. Look at a "``light brown room``". Is the room well-lit and painted brown, or just painted in a light brown? Thanks to established custom, most people would read that correctly as the latter, but you do have two oh so simple ways of clarifying for anyone either too dumb or trying to dissect it: commas and hyphens. Or just writing it as one word, which English also seems allergic to. A "light-brown room" leaves no doubts as to what is meant, nor do "light, brown room" and "light brown-room", though I don't know what a "brown-room" would be. The only issue that I can potentially see is thanks to "light"'s ability to be a noun as well, so "light-brown room" could be a room that is coloured in the brown of light. Which thankfully isn't a thing.
Basically, you have the tools, so why refuse to use them if it could improve clarity without even looking any worse.
>you acquiesced then
That was chiefly because I didn't feel like arguing back then, not because I thought it was a good idea.
>Then you should say it is tantalizing, but not in a negative sense. Or use "especially not in a negative sense".
The first doesn't allow you to put it in opposition to "fulfilling" and the second looks just plain awful. How dare you even suggest that.
>at least not frustratingly so
This one's pretty nice though, I can live with that.
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This map system really needs some work. It was a bit annoying in the factory with it being bright yellow/tan on a black theme, but just awful in the desert where there's text instead of icons. I can't see that at all on my screen. At first, I thought the map was blank
>>3366
>"Light" here is an adjective, not an adverb
Yes, and normal adjectives modifying nouns generally do not get hyphens. That is just not a common convention.
>so how do you know it's modifying "blonde", and not "hair"?
The fact that everyone uses the words like that. An orthographic convention is not needed when the usage is already clear to speakers. Also, [[light blonde] hair] is also [light [blonde hair]], for what that's worth (though again, no one will read it like that).
>Look at a "``light brown room``". Is the room well-lit and painted brown, or just painted in a light brown?
Painted in a light brown. If you don't mean that, you probably shouldn't write that.
>Or just writing it as one word, which English also seems allergic to.
You're complaining that English doesn't write entirely distinct words that are not compounds as one word? Why should we get rid of important morphological cues in such an arbitrary and inconsistent way? Or are you trying to say that English is allergic to forming compounds in general (because that's amusingly wrong). It's coming off more like you're complaining that every language doesn't behave exactly like your language, because that's the language you know, and so every other one should bend over backwards to use systems more familiar to you. Unless you're complaining about the inconsistent writing of compounds, which is a problem, but not a problem with the language itself, and entirely irrelevant to this discussion.
>A "light-brown room" leaves no doubts as to what is meant
On the contrary; for me, it's confusing, since I spend a split-second trying to figure out what the compound is.
>Basically, you have the tools, so why refuse to use them if it could improve clarity without even looking any worse.
Because the tools aren't used in that way, so making this change you're suggesting would only introduce more inconsistency, when no change is even needed, since convention already does the trick.
>I don't know what a "brown-room" would be.
Any room you're in, ya fuckin' roach.
>>3367
oh the APK version is worse on droid, shit doesnt even line up properly
>>3370
>Yes, and normal adjectives modifying nouns generally do not get hyphens.
What, are "brown" and "blonde" nouns in those examples, now? Why?
>The fact that everyone uses the words like that.
And that's where you wrong. Even within dictionaries, you can find hand-picked example texts of [adjective] [adjective] [noun] where it's unclear which one the first adjective modifies. Here, this is Merriam-Webster's choice for "light" as in "having light; bright": "a light airy room". Sure, "light-airy" only makes sense if you're a fairy or on drugs, but naked like this, it just looks fantastic, doesn't it. You have the tools, yadda yadda, I'm repeating myself.
>If you don't mean that, you probably shouldn't write that.
But it has the potential to mean it, which is my entire point.
>you're complaining that every language doesn't behave exactly like your language
I do think that the languages of this world could definitely take some cues from one another, and that does, believe it or not, include my own. And you're still hilariously off about which one that is. Five points for trying and sticking with that one for so long, though. English, for the better or worse, is an absolute amalgam of so many languages that it has become one of the more chaotic ones. Part of that makes the charm of it, but a little more order and consistency would nonetheless be appreciated. Doesn't help much that it's the only world language has no centralised institution that calls the shots on what's right and wrong, either.
>for me, it's confusing
Doesn't surprise me.
>since convention already does the trick
And it does it so well. Never could there exist the evils of confusion, ambiguity, regional differences, and a deficient school system. After all, we are all one, we are the hive. Now excuse me while I drive away in my ruby red electric steam car that is powered by five starred sheep wrestlers, me mum and you.
>>3373
Mobile is barely supported, I'm not sure if any of the devs would even know where to begin fixing whatever issues it has.
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>>2562
It's very late, but I fixed all these, redfriend (and some other bugs in the thread, hopefully all of them).
>>3375
>a light airy room
That seems like an obvious mistake to me. It should have a comma, which removes any ambiguity.
>Doesn't help much that it's the only world language has no centralised institution that calls the shots on what's right and wrong, either.
Very few languages do, it's not a common thing at all. Rather than being the only one, English is in the majority here.
>>3375
>What, are "brown" and "blonde" nouns in those examples, now? Why?
In the example, no, but we were talking about the words in general; however, I apologize for getting terms muddled. Adverbs modifying adjectives don't get hyphens either, though, so the point's the same.
>Even within dictionaries, you can find hand-picked example texts of [adjective] [adjective] [noun] where it's unclear which one the first adjective modifies.
Who said anything about that? I'm talking very specifically about colors. "Light <color> <noun>" is generally understood to mean "a noun that is <light> <color>". That's it, that's all. I won't disagree that English writing conventions around compounds and lists of adjectives can be arcane or inconsistent, since that's true, but in this very specific instance, things are pretty clear.
>I do think that the languages of this world could definitely take some cues from one another, and that does, believe it or not, include my own.
That's a fine stance to take, but you've have in the past demonstrated illogical biases about language. You view certain ways of doing things as obviously correct because that's how your language does it, so of course that's what makes sense. Now note that I'm not saying that every way of encoding information is equally valid, and indeed there are many parts of various languages that could be viewed as confusing, inefficient, or pointless, but people are never as objective as they think they are on these topics (since they often don't even fully understand what's going on with the languages in question).
>And you're still hilariously off about which one that is. Five points for trying and sticking with that one for so long, though.
I don't (and didn't) actually think you're Turkish, by the way. It's a joke, you dummy.
>English, for the better or worse, is an absolute amalgam of so many languages that it has become one of the more chaotic ones.
Patently false and evidence that you're not very well informed. Now, this is slightly more reasonable to say about English spelling, but not the language itself (and people constantly conflate orthography with actual language, despite the fact that they're very distinct). It is not "chaotic" just because people say it is (the rules of English are just as rigorous and self-consistent as any other language), and the languages you see as "pure" are often just as misshapen (or have you not heard about all that inbreeding that happened in the old continent?). People often take the fact that they don't understand a given rule or system as evidence that there is no rule or system and then vehemently argue on that basis. Being able to see doesn't make you an ophthalmologist, and being able to speak doesn't make you an expert on language, but people only readily accept one of these facts.
>Doesn't help much that it's the only world language has no centralised institution that calls the shots on what's right and wrong, either.
Yes, language change is a natural thing that's been going on for millennia and that a bunch of government stooges have no hope of stopping, but we've decided that that's Wrong, so we're going to sit here and pretend that a certain arbitrary state of the language we speak is the fully correct one regardless of how real people actually speak.
>Now excuse me while I drive away in my ruby red electric steam car that is powered by five starred sheep wrestlers, me mum and you.
The only relevant part of that is "ruby red", and I'd warrant that the vast majority of English speakers would understand that to mean a particular shade of red.

Shit, I was supposed to be looking at handholding. Anyway, I can see this argument branching out, and while I legitimately enjoyed it, this might not be the place. I'd recommend against the hyphen mostly on the basis that that's not what people do, and the best way to communicate is the one that other people will recognize (even if it's not perfectly logical all the time).
>>3378
>It should have a comma, which removes any ambiguity.
Makes you wonder if there are perhaps other sources of ambiguity which could be quelled with as little as a single punctuation mark. Perhaps doing so may also approach something akin to consistency.
>Rather than being the only one, English is in the majority here.
What? No, it isn't. English is the only world language lacking any regulatory body. Arabic has one for each country, Mandarin has one, the Indian languages have one for each, French has a couple, German has a single one for all, Russian has one, and even Spanish has one big association combining everything under one hood.
Being productive:
>lays itself into your palms
"Onto".
>on your way down the girl's hands, where you clasp and hold them together.
Where is this "where"? There's no location for it to join to.
>You're satisfied simply
Somewhat close to the first "simply", if you care.
>but she does by and by overcome it and softly clears her throat
I would recommend "clear", as while you can join "clears" to "does", it's much less natural.
>She bundles all four of them together on her lap
Probably "in".
>looking into your general direction
Most definitely "in".
>to simply comply
Three's too much, right?
>A nightly bath
I think we ran into this before, but "nightly" means "every night" moreso than "nighttime". Let me also note that I've enjoyed all these return blurbs, and that I'm impressed how fresh you've kept them.
>she squeezes you, entreating you to make no comment and settle down into simple hand-holding, enjoying it for the contact alone.
If you want the "enjoying" to modify "you", then that's a pretty odd sentence structure. The "you" of this action is a figurative one, but you're not framing the "enjoying" as figurative/part of her entreatment, I guess is the best way to say it (though I'll admit my feeling of discomfort is somewhat vague). If you want it to modify "she", you've got a very familiar complaint on your hands, but also, it's a bit far/separated by other nouns.
>As you let her hands glide out of your grasp and back onto the girl's lap
A bit odd to have "her" before "the girl's".
>the songs of birds, the rustling winds—all faded into a grand, collective slumber
If the birds are still singing, they can't have already faded into slumber, can they? You might consider making that "fade" or "has faded".
>and allow yourself to drift away, gliding along the dainty length to the very tips of her fingers, and finally let go
This seems to flow somewhat awkwardly to me due to the intervening participle (and the "and" subsetting). I might recommend "and finally letting go" with no comma (I know that gets rid of the connection to "allow yourself" that I'm sure you want, but it would be a lot smoother). If you make a change here, remember to do so later as well.
>so you make use of your voice, telling her you'll be going, to draw her out of whatever fantasy
You shouldn't separate purpose clauses from their verbs like that.
>She starts up, blinks, her mouth opens, hangs there, then closes with a quick hum and a nod.
This comma splice seems absolutely dreadful to me. Was this before we had that whole bout about what kinds of things you can join in a list? You cannot join verbs and clauses, in case that discussion has faded.
>her mouth opens, hangs there, then closes with a quick hum and a nod.
Her mouth can't nod.
>reunites the pair to her other one on her lap.
That "to" should be a "with".

I'll see about getting out another tonight as well, but I'm not sure. I've fucked up like five posts or something today, Christ.
No matter how many times I look at the sign in the mountain about worms and say I'm grossed out, I still end up seeing it again.
Is it because I have fetishes in options set to turn off parasite?
>>3393
Do you only run into it again after reloading, or multiple times in one session? Have you tried toggling it manually in the fetish settings?
>>3395
Multiple in one session. I've now tried to open the game up and check if I can find it again and I quickly did. I did toggle it off in fetish settings
>>3397
Could you post your CoC_Main.sol then? I can't find any possible cause and can't replicate the problem.

Also, what version are you playing?
>>3398
Latest version, 1.4.15.1
Also silly mode is set to off but I still got mind kitsunes
>>3399
So after several attempts to upload the file failed, it sent the message regardless even though I didn't want that. Whatever. Put it up externally
https://files.catbox.moe/ehr92d.sol
>>3400
Still can't replicate it. As far as I can find, going into the settings menu, changing it from off to something else and then back to off, and leaving the settings menu should fix it permanently, or at least until the global save file is deleted. Other fixes include getting the encounter (which can only happen once until you load a save again) and then entering the settings menu or getting an achievement to trigger a global save.
If you still get the encounter after doing that, then I can look into it more, but you're probably just cursed.
>>3399
>Also silly mode is set to off but I still got mind kitsunes
Yes.
>>3391
>"Onto".
Isn't that a matter of how you hold your palms? Keep them flat, and it's "onto", cup them even slightly, and it's "into".
>Where is this "where"? There's no location for it to join to.
I think I intended that location to be "down the girl's hands", as in you clasping them together as you reach the tips. If I squint, that still works.
>I would recommend "clear", as while you can join "clears" to "does", it's much less natural.
"She clear"? "She does clears"? You should have went to bed a little sooner.
>Probably "in".
"On" is kinda meant to imply here that she doesn't let them sink between her thighs, but instead keeps them in a less-relaxed manner.
>I think we ran into this before, but "nightly" means "every night" moreso than "nighttime".
I know, but since it can carry that meaning and I'm desperate for variation, I take what I can.
>If the birds are still singing, they can't have already faded into slumber, can they?
Where does it say that they're still singing? I mention two things commonly heard in the bog "the songs of birds, the rustling winds", and then say they've "faded" now.
>You shouldn't separate purpose clauses from their verbs like that.
I put the ", telling her you'll be going" at the end now. Seems awfully far away from "you" and doesn't read too smoothly to me, but any thoughts?
>That "to" should be a "with".
"With" may be a good deal more common, but what's wrong with "to"? Does it have too narrow an application to be used here?
>>3411
>as in you clasping them together as you reach the tips
"Down" would imply the player was going the other direction to me, since the wrist is the base of the hand. That might change if there were a clearer picture of either the player's start point or the hands' orientation.
>If I squint, that still works.
It would work if there were a clear destination in the last action, but there wasn't (it was more of a general direction).
>"She clear"? "She does clears"?
The inverse; I meant joining them with "and", though that wasn't entirely clear.
>"On" is kinda meant to imply here that she doesn't let them sink between her thighs, but instead keeps them in a less-relaxed manner.
Between your thighs isn't really your lap (or at the least, it's not prototypically your lap); the lap is just a location that often takes "in" (in this context, "in" means exactly what you want).
Also, unrelated, but
>onto the her lap
>I know, but since it can carry that meaning and I'm desperate for variation, I take what I can.
Your readers will absolutely 100% read that as "every night". While it technically can carry the other meaning, the one you don't want is ubiquitous, and many readers may be unaware of the "nighttime" usage. I would recommend against this wording.
>I mention two things commonly heard in the bog "the songs of birds, the rustling winds", and then say they've "faded" now.
I'd still generally recommend the "has".
>any thoughts?
Seems good to me.
>"With" may be a good deal more common, but what's wrong with "to"?
At the time, I hadn't found examples of "reunite to", but looking again, I'm finding some scattered ones from the mid nineteenth century (as well as from John Calvin, the man himself). The ngram results would still suggest that "with" is the clear winner today, the switch having taken place around 1930. In any case, "to" feels wrong to me, not sure how it'd feel to others.
Discovered a morsel in the bath:
>Marielle herself sure isn't someone to initiate a conversation
The "sure" is maybe a bit odd for narration, but I won't fight you on this.
>glance at it after what shouldn't have been more than just a few minutes—clearly it wasn't
"It wasn't" would mean that it indeed wasn't more than a few minutes (negation can be a bit confusing, since languages often do it completely differently). "It" just refers to "more than a few minutes", and the negation in the previous clause doesn't influence the latter one.
>>3414
>The inverse; I meant joining them with "and", though that wasn't entirely clear.
Which inverse? "she does [...] clear" or "she does [...] and clears"? I do agree with your initial observation of it sounding less natural when joining "clears" to "does", but that's already what I'm not doing.
>Between your thighs isn't really your lap
I meant more the insides of your thighs. I'm pretty sure "in" is the more specific one here, and "on" may apply to any position. A cat may rest in or on one's lap, though preferably in, as that is how they lie—nesting into the crook of your thighs. Whereas a laptop would be resting on your lap, unless it's a really small one or your thighs are gigantic.
>Your readers will absolutely 100% read that as "every night"
Fair enough, I wasn't actually aware how overwhelmingly more common the "every night" usage apparently is, as I've heard the other one often enough. I'll keep "nightly" though where it's ambiguous.
>>3416
>Which inverse?
I meant that I was comparing "does clear" to "clears", not with the "s" positioned incorrectly.
>I do agree with your initial observation of it sounding less natural when joining "clears" to "does", but that's already what I'm not doing.
That is exactly what you're doing—where do you think that "and" connects to? In the grammatical structure, you're putting a compound in the spot that the "does" goes instead of where the verbs go, but that's generally not advisable. To be clear, I'm recommending just "clear".
>I'm pretty sure "in" is the more specific one here, and "on" may apply to any position.
It's not a difference of "specificity", since both are used about equally. Rather, I think you should go with "in" here because her hands fit solely within the confines of her lap. I believe it's less about the thigh penetration than it is about space taken up.
>I wasn't actually aware how overwhelmingly more common the "every night" usage apparently is
Ah, I believe I've found the culprit—the other usage is considered obsolete in American English, but persists in British English.
>>3417
>That is exactly what you're doing
I think I'm getting now what you mean, but Lord, your explanations have been atrociously confusing. I hope you'll never teach children. With "compound", I suppose you mean "by and by", not "overcome", and you mean to tell me that in a structure of [subject] [auxiliary] [adverb1] [verb1] [conjunction] [adverb2] [verb2], the "and" links the verbs to the same subject, so the auxiliary wants to modify verb2 as well, and I should grant its wish and make "clears" a "clear". But then, the adverb position somehow matters, and also the fact that one of them is a compound, so does that mean I could just switch the places of auxiliary and adverb1, or make it a non-compound adverb? Or squeeze in some dumb shit like a repeated subject after "and"?
>>3418
>I think I'm getting now what you mean, but Lord, your explanations have been atrociously confusing.
It's better when you can actually work with somebody/know their background and current knowledge. I've been very successful in helping others understand grammatical concepts, thank you very much.
>With "compound", I suppose you mean "by and by", not "overcome", and you mean to tell me...
What the fuck? No, not any of that. Basically none of anything you said in this paragraph has anything to do with what I'm saying (if the adverbs mattered, I would have mentioned them specifically). What I'm saying is that you're linking "does overcome" and "clears" with "and". Instead, it's more natural to link "overcome" and "clear" with "and", which would involve attach "clear" to "does" as well. Sentence structure seems to be a repeated point of difficulty with us, and I've repeatedly started writing and deleted various explanations just now because I'm unsure of where to go with this. I don't really know what you know already and what you would even want to know, which is why when I gave the recommendation, I just told you that it's more natural this way. It's a bit frustrating that I can write, "To be clear, I'm recommending just 'clear'," (which was also the original recommendation) and you can take that to mean that you should perform some arcane ritual to summon a demon into this sentence.
Can we fuck Marielle already?
I can't wait to fill her pussy and suck on her chest.
>>3443
I don't think the dick can win this one.
>>3446
>thinking dick can't win
Pathetic.

So, my beloved bugs coming in:
- 2096847 0
- When load game or going to camp, almost always there's a scene with Hellapawn and KidA.
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>>3446
I think she's going to like it eventually.
>>3460
What version are you playing on?
Sharks
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>>3482
Cute sharks
>>3483
Novel concept
>>3489
How do we apply it?
>>3490
Implementing the cooking system and incorporating shark meat
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>>3492
That's mean.
>>3493
Sharks are low tier, trash
>>3494
Shark girls aren't that bad, it's the demons that are utter garbage because they only shit out imps outside of a lose condition.
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>>3494
Spotted shit taste pleb.
Shark-girls just need to be expanded more for breeding, remove the game over retarded limit for fucking shark-girls, and breed the loli daughters seeking their daddy until they're completely covered in his love.
>>3504
>remove the game over retarded limit for fucking shark-girls
Didn't we do... something about that? I don't know, but I seem to recall the discussion in the past.
>expand breeding
The people most obsessed with breeding are the ones that should never do it
>>3505
Shark-girls are obsessed with dominance, if you prove to be the superior mate they'll gladly be your cocksleeves.
Just like Izma that when you beat her enough she submits in being your submissive lover.
>>3505
The limit is still in the game, scene has been written but not implemented.
Shark-related question for fans: Opinion of sirens? In CoC, they're shark-like with harpy wings.
>>3508
Minerva would be fine if we ever got around to de-dicking her.
>>3513
Seconding this.
There should be more de-dicking options.
Too much futashit in this game, like demons and references to horse dicks that are everywhere.
It's fucking annoying, just like minotaurs and their retarded as hell scenes as if everyone Is a filthy furry lover that plays as a gay futa that suddenly goes dumb for some oversized beef.
>>3521
Just leave my tigershark daughters alone. I will jerk them off into their sisters' faces forevermore.>>3521
I mean are we talking about shark girls as in ears-and-tail human or shark girls as in shark furries? 'Cause a human with pointy teeth is fair to middling but having sex with a goofy looking fish is right down there with birds.

Of course when you've started dissecting which furries are okay and which are nasty, you've already lost.
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>>3525
the nonfurry ones.
>>3526
I don't mind a bit of snout personally.
>>3527
I'm glad 8kun is back so we can abandon trash like you here
>>3525
Only monster girls type of shark-girls that have a tail, monstrous parts, shark pupils and retractable teeth but have a normal humanoid body, human pussy, boobs and face.

Monster girls are not to be confused with those filthy furry lovers.
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I looked over PerkLib.as and found a bunch of Elder history perks. Can they be accessed in any way?
>>3533
Yes, by playing an elder
>>3531
Thanks.
>>3333
>Also on difficulty extreme or nightmare it still displays the difficulty as normal on the save file, however the effect of the chosen difficult is still retained
The functional difficult is controlled elsewhere, but the displayed difficulty is still tied to flag 2990 even though it's supposed to be unused according to the git.
So you could edit a save file and set flag 2990 to another value and it will change the display. The dark red Hard is a value of 1, Nightmare is 2, Extreme is 3.
I would take a guess Easy is -1, but I don't feel like checking.
If the devs haven't fixed this yet, I hope I'm helping somehow.
>>3527
No snouts, no dicks. Any deviation from this mantra is unothadox and therefore Heresy.
>>3567
Tigershark girls have natural dicks. I will die on this hill.
>>3570
It's not natural it's the corruption of the lake water that caused it. Futas are not natural.
>>3574
You leave my daughters' dicks alone.
>>3579
>y daughters' dicks alone
never thought i would hear those words.
>>3583
He drank the chemicals in the lake that turned his sharks gay.
>>3570
I thought they used anemones?
I am assuming I am just retarded. But in case I am not I can't seems to download the .swf for the latest patch.
>>3599
It's working fine, so you're probably just retarded.
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>>3579
They are to be de-dicked so they can enjoy the pleasure of being a female taking their father's cock.
This is still being worked right?
>>3596
No, tigershark girls just have a donger.
>>3616
Just because they have a dick doesn't mean their daddy can't fuck them raw.
>>3618
You can find that answer on this post >>1364
Is there more naga content? Turning into a snake person and never having the fight the one other naga is cool but that's just the thing, there is only ONE other naga. Amily is the last of her village and she asks a human pc impregnate her to give the mice people a chance but, this one naga who hasn't seen another of her kind in so long doesn't even consider the possibility? Am I just missing something?
>>3640
Go make a naga girl waifu or naga village then.
>>3641
That naga village thing is some of the worst content I've seen someone make. I hope naga anon never finishes
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>>3643
Well fuck, I can't write to save my life. I guess I gotta take matters into my own hands.
>>3644
>>3643
How bad we talking? Hellboi cuck content bad?
>>3645
Check the chronicles, it's NAGAANON's work.
My favorite part is the 5000 word long scene that involves slobbering excessive amounts of saliva all over the player's hands, just drenching them in prep for something, then continuing the scene without addressing it again.
>>3646
How disappointing. Sounds like the nagas need some love.

You could probably expand on the existing desert naga for a start. She has dialogue already but not enough. Perhaps if the PC spends enough time with her she'll offer to join camp?
>>3660
Just add more sex scenes like a paizuri and scenes to make her friendly without being a furry fuck.
>>3661
That's pretty shallow, man. Need to get elbow deep and really expand that bitch.

Besides, nagas aren't usually considered furry.
>>3662
Expanding her start like that, a few scenes, not a massive project because that would require an experienced writer.
>>3664
I had thought about this stuff some time ago. It's been a long time since I read the in-game scene, but I think she's supposed to be the only of her kind on Mareth.
Maybe someone gets upset at me for this, but I think it makes sense if canonically nonfurry(not counting nofur mode) races are all foreign. The way sapient-intelligent races came about was Marae, inspired by humanity finding her world, uplifting animals. So a native race would be like the lizans, while the naga is more like a gorgon and thus must be foreign. Top half too human. The closest thing to breaking this trend is the harpy race, I think.

On a totally different note, her intended name is awful. Given her locale, dark skin, black hair, and sandy scales, an egyptian style name seems good. I said this to NAGAANON too I think, which is why he changed her to Zahra or whatever. Another person that tried writing naga stuff went with... Keesa? Her intended name isn't even in the game.
Can I propose a scene in which the player character turns Gwen into a full female preferably with some pregnancy and birth scenes.
>>3685
You can propose anything you want and it won't be worth shit unless you write it.
>>3685
Who is Gwen?
>>3691
Bitchified Erlking I believe
>>3692
Only if >>3685 doesn't know how to pronounce or spell his waifu's name.
>>3693
Implying it can be waifu untill it gets turned into a girl.
>>3695
>Implying giving a man a vagina makes him a girl
>>3691
It's actually Gwynn
>>3696
Magically turning a man into a girl does turn a man into a girl, though.
>>3701
I disagree. Gwynn still has the personality of an autistic furry pretending to be one.
I return from being busy:
>A series of rather unappetizing sounds
You've mistaken my appetites.
>follows until she has it entirely detached and wipes it off with a cloth before presenting it to you.
If it's happening "until" the detachment, how is it also happening "until" the wiping? The "has" isn't helping matters.
>but [if (insultedfather) {expressing|having}] no qualms about then
About what? Also, "then" is probably going to be odd, since there's no real sequence (unless she stops expressing no qualms).
>The palm, however, is spared that treatment.
Believe "has been" or "was" would be better than "is", which would imply that the treatment is a current thing.
>There's something moving among the flesh though
"Flesh" isn't a collective noun, so "among" is off.
>you note while you curl a few of her fingers
"While" + the present tense would mean that the two things are happening contemporaneously, but "note" is a one time event, not a process (which is a long way to say that I think you should use "are curling" or change the "while" to "when" or "as").
>if (corruption > 50) {A morbid part of you wants to cut it open to see more,
Corruption does not imply bloodlust, especially such a comparatively low amount of it. I would highly advise against the "cut it open" part.
>grey-in-grey
on
>Could be a crane or heron, perhaps, though its body seems larger than that,
I know you like birds, but I don't know why you keep assuming every champion does enough to be able to point things like this out. I am certain that it would be out of character for plenty of people.
>Was that... a young caiman?
Where's this coming from, bud?
>as she does relax somewhat and weaves
Does we needs another "does" conversation?
>over the assorted miscellanea
Since you seem the type to care, that should be "miscellany"; "miscellanea" refer to a countable assortment of miscellany (unless you're saying that she has several distinct collections of miscellaneous items crowding her desk, you spaz).
>with the wrong palm—the one you're still holding, the one that's nothing more than a stump.
Her palm is a stump? I imagined it being much cuter. Careful with the reuse, pal.
>something must be following you
Oh my, I'm blushing.
>[if (SYLVIA_STALKING = 1 || SYLVIA_STALKING > 2)
Why specifically not 2? I'd think you'd want either all of them or just 1 and 4.
>[if (SYLVIA_STALKING = 1) {You told her off, after all, and
If it's at 1, you have not told her off. I think you're confused about what's what here; it might be better to just put the states you mean rather than the numbers.
>civilisation
I think you've been a good goy for these Zs for the most part, so I'll point this one out.
>It's relatively quiet, too; only from somewhere behind you echoes a series of odd clattering noises that carries far into the old trees.
The structure you're using would seem to imply you'd expect this echo from other directions as well.

I don't know your feelings on the matter, but we could try to sort this whole operation this weekend.>>3685
UPDATE
WHEN
>>3707
My guess is 20th-24th
>>3708
Based on what?
>>3709
Most colleges have at least the week of christmas off, and many jobs do too, and family is usually awful, so using extra time to get an update out seems likely if none's out by then
>>3710
Suppose that's reasonable reasoning. Probably sooner than then, but coordinating stuff can be difficult.
>>3697
>>3695
How would you do it, succubus milk as usual?

Also has anyone thought of a way to make Kelly being transformed not evil?
>>3712
>Also has anyone thought of a way to make Kelly being transformed not evil?
by transforming him into a corpse instead of girl
>>3713
But I like Kelly's scenes, even if by moral rights Kelt deserves death.

Maybe you could unlock his harem if you transform him/kill him?
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I haven't really been working on part two, but rather working on part 1 a lot more. hopefully this is a little better and i'll be back to working on the player interacting with them.
https://pastebin.com/b758NbDg - the only really big changes is Emily's dialog and the fact she'll now kill you if you choose to attack them instead of just choking you until you pass out.
>>3139
>>3140
So maybe have it so that early on by talking or playing with one you'll get you affection with both of them up to the point it makes them think you're at least nice to have around. That should make sense, I think.
What is everyone doing for Christmas?
>>3716
Alcohol binge. How about you, anon?
>>3715
>dying by having a loli vampire drink your blood too much while holding you.
There's no better way to die.
It will be better when Emily will just drink a bit from you and she gets horny or if she's too horny she'll drink enough to make you pass out and wake up in her bed wrapped in her soft beddìng, maybe if she has enough affection she will be snuggled with you.
>>3717
Same but more spaced out throughout the day because I'll be around family.
>>3718
You're a moron. Do you often not pick up on the most basic of contextual clues and ideafag away regardless of how stupid you are?
>>3720
Take your autism pills, Sheldon.
>>3716
Masturbation.
>>3718
>>3721
People like you are the reason 2hu never finished Fran properly. Stop being a filthy ideafag when you can't even suggest something that would make sense.
>Emily kills you because she is protecting her sister BUT WHAT IF SHE GOT SUPER HORNY AND ONLY DRANK A LITTLE BIT AND WE WAKE UP LIKE LOVERS IN A BLANKET???
You speak of autism, but you're the genuine prime example of it.
>>3715
Yeah, makes sense for the "cool person to be around" to happen for both, but close friends to lovers separate.
Gonna read you shit later.
>>3716
Playing tf2 or some other multiplayer shit.
Also alchool.
>>3706
>About what?
"(then) slowly twisting her hand out of its joint"
>"Flesh" isn't a collective noun, so "among" is off.
I see it used that way in books about surgery. Granted, they're 200+ years old, so perhaps "among" used to be less rigid and referred not just to groups, but masses of something as well. Or perhaps it's "flesh" that changed. Do I really have to replace it with some shit like "within"?
>Where's this coming from, bud?
From the water, presumably. What do you mean?
>Does we needs another "does" conversation?
Is it illegal to have the "does" sodomise only the verb in its immediate vicinity, officer?
>unless you're saying that she has several distinct collections of miscellaneous items crowding her desk
Well, that wouldn't be incorrect, either.
>Why specifically not 2?
How would I know what past me all those years ago was thinking.
>If it's at 1, you have not told her off.
Blame yourself, then: //It's not okay; tooltip- This is a bit too much for you.; SYLVIA_STALKING = 1
>we could try to sort this whole operation this weekend
The next thing is centaur-related. I don't know if your stomach is strong enough for that.
>>3727
>"(then) slowly twisting her hand out of its joint"
I have no clue why I didn't get that the first time around.
>Do I really have to replace it with some shit like "within"?
"Within" would be great; "among" definitely creates an immediate "wrong" reaction, so I wouldn't recommend keeping it.
>What do you mean?
This spurt of misplaced wilderness enthusiasm.
>Is it illegal to have the "does" sodomise only the verb in its immediate vicinity, officer?
It's not illegal to be a furry, but I can tell you not to do it.
>Well, that wouldn't be incorrect, either.
But it would be an odd sentiment requiring some further explanation, yes?
>Blame yourself, then
How would I know what past me all those years ago was thinking?
>I don't know if your stomach is strong enough for that.
I've been training it. And I'm not letting you forget that I went through that taur statue pissing scene for nothing.
>>3728
>This spurt of misplaced wilderness enthusiasm.
Does "scaley squawpy bitey thingy" more fit your palate?
>>3729
Yes.
>>3724
Take your autism pills, Sheldon.
>>3724
He still hasn't finished that shit? Man this mod really is fucking dead. The only ones left are obsessed waifufags who want to shove their OCs in without caring a bit about the lore of the actual game they're being parasites on.. and even with all that they can't even finish their implementations.
Hey, here's a good one: Who remembers 'No, the mod isn't doomed, the 8ch devs posted on Twitter that it'll be back up in September, just sit tight'?
>>3732
I'd worried you'd never made your way to the bunker. What took you so long?
>>3732
>in without caring a bit about the lore of the actual game they're being parasites on
It's CoC, man. I've been following since before urtaquest and this game has never had a coherent or noteworthy lore. It works best as an engine and a base that can be expanded upon.
>>3732
No you.
>>3734
I like the whole "sinkhole of multiverse" thing
Shame it's barely used for anything
There aren't even any laser guns in the game
>>3724
Clearly you have no idea what my suggestion was, you dumb nigger.
It was implied that i was suggesting at high affection a variant of the consensual blood drinking scene (that 2hufag posted) would happen and that would make sense, either one or the other.
But if you're too dumb to understand the difference, you need to leave.
It's up to 2hu to take suggestions or not, we're here to provide feedback and the others to proofread/qualitycheck.
He's the one being not satisfied with his own results, not us.
>>3720
Stop samefagging.
>>3732
I smell a Jewnoxo faggot.
Jealous that this mod is much better than the shit fenoxo did?
Or you're just a twitter brainlet that found this bunker?
Either way, just go away.
>>3736
>Corruption of heroes of might and magic
Sure is a shame CoC doesn't really support a multi person party
>>3733
I've been here for ages but there's been nothing even worth laughing at. Time traveling moths are almost starting to look shrewd and innovative compared to the latest catastrophes
>>3739
I've been here since before Helboi and Cucktan sank the board and well before the prolonged fag95/le_donald invasion made things really go to shit, disagreement is not newfaggotry
>>3742
>l-look guys I'm totally not a newfag
Keep trying and purposefully misrepresenting the content of the mod, you're stupid enough to make me laugh every time you post.
>>3742
So old enough to know complaining fixes nothing, but still can't be arsed to write.
>>3718
I'm not really sure getting all your blood sucked out by a hungry monster is a very good way to die. Emily snuggling with you after she mistakenly drinks too much of your blood sounds like a possibility though.
>>3745
I think the characters are trash, but on the topic of dying from blood loss, that's really one of the least bad ways, especially like this. A little bite and comfortable sucking as you gradually get dizzy. After a couple liters of blood are gone, you painless pass out, and then you end up dead before you wake up.
It's at least a peaceful death.
>>3745
It's a painless way to die though.
I dig the idea of her sleeping/cuddling with you in her bed if she unintentionally drinks too much blood, only if she likes you enough.
Emily would be cute like this, i already Imagine the scenes where you sleep with them both. maybe while holding one of each hand of theirs for the filthy lolicon degenerate in me
Getting close:
>but you suspect she's ridden one before
Why?
>she asks without anticipating an immediate answer.
Mind reading.
>rake the [lowerbodyskin] of your lower half like a comb
Raking skin is generally a bad thing, unlike hair.
>!player.hasCock
That needs a () after it, by the way, though it's an easy catch once added.
>so that's certainly no issue to you, but quite the opposite.
The "but" is a bit off, since it being the opposite doesn't itself oppose the previous clause.
>well-know
Don't think that should be hyphenated.
>sans saddle nor reins
Just want to confirm that "nor" used to be used like that.
>You guess there won't be coming any actual commands from her.
The brain cancer's that bad, huh?
>. <i>Well
Missing quotation mark.
>There are hours worth of sights and curiosities to examine[if (bog temple inspect has been fully read) {—and even you haven't seen them all}].
You once asked me how big I thought the temple was, and this introductory paragraph is giving me a different sense from the rest of her content. A lot of the floor space is unwalkable, no?
>Marielle appears absorbed chiefly by the statues in when you look over your shoulder.
Random "in".
>It isn't before she has finished up her observation and straightened her back again that she answers.
"Until" is more common in that construction.
>and nothing immediately disturbs you save for a few small insects, and
This is more akin to standard repetition than the ones we'd discussed recently.
>'Tis sure-bound to come to the worst...
I'm not 100% clear on what she means, though I get the obvious general intent.
>When you step upon the smooth stone
Are you stepping on the pedestal? How? If not, remove the "the".
>to and fro the nearby shrine
Despite it's clear origin, "to and fro" isn't a preposition.
>the way she's perched on your back feels entirely relaxed and at ease, even as her head is likely somewhere else again.
Why "even"? Would her head being somewhere else make her less relaxed?
>your bestial back
You had "bestial back" in the directly preceding scene, and you have "bestial body" in this one.
>she says and steps away
It's been a while since it's come up, but joining a verb to another which has its predicate moved ahead of the subject is still awkward (this mainly comes up with dialogue tags).

A relatively smooth ride this time; well done.
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>>3718
>>3745
>>3751
Did 2hufag even write how his vampires are made? Normally its something as being sucked as a virgin and drinking some of the vampire blood, or something.
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>>3759
I did throw together some ideas for where vampires might have came from originally and might have different characters tell you different origins. Fran and Emily would be born as vampires though unless i decide to change that i guess. On the topic of the player to becoming one I was thinking the pc would need to get all their blood sucked and then drink some of emily/fran's blood.
>>3760
>I was thinking the pc would need to get all their blood sucked and then drink some of emily/fran's blood
Yeah, thats how more or less it goes in the fiction that i read.
>>3757
>Why?
Because she's high-born, so probably had some form of riding lesson in her early life. Plus, she's also been a traveller for who knows how many years.
>Raking skin is generally a bad thing
Is there a way to check whether there's hair or not? And can you even make a taur with skin on the lower body?
>That needs a () after it, by the way
Welp, every single one is missing that, then. And if hasVagina needs those as well, than those, too.
>The "but" is a bit off, since it being the opposite doesn't itself oppose the previous clause.
That's a pretty standard thing to say, though.
>Just want to confirm that "nor" used to be used like that.
Actually, no, at least not like that in "without x or y". In some dialect, perhaps. And now you have me doubting all my other "nor"s.
>The brain cancer's that bad, huh?
?
>I'm not 100% clear on what she means, though I get the obvious general intent.
She's taking some liberties with "when worst comes to worst", which in its original form was "when the worst come to the worst", with two articles and a present subjunctive "come" in the archaic sense of "become". It meant something along the lines of "when the worst possibility becomes the worst reality", so she's fearing that the worst possible thing is sure to happen.
>>3762
>Because she's high-born, so probably had some form of riding lesson in her early life. Plus, she's also been a traveller for who knows how many years.
That's enough of a leap in reasoning that I'd recommend a brief explanation.
>Is there a way to check whether there's hair or not?
Not really.
>And can you even make a taur with skin on the lower body?
Yes, you can make all kinds of horrifying amalgams. But it'd also be odd for scales and chitin.
>Welp, every single one is missing that, then.
Yes, but both of those were just a single replace for the bath stuff, so don't worry too much.
>And now you have me doubting all my other "nor"s.
Most of them are fine, I think. I'd probably say something if they're not, though I guess I'm not the most reliable guard dog.
>?
That sentence was a ? for me too.
>so she's fearing that the worst possible thing is sure to happen.
Right, I got that, but I just feel like there's no real obvious "worst" here, or even a particular bad thing that you should assume she means. Just getting dirty? Seems weak.
Are you guys gonna migrate back to 8kun? I don't think there is even a cocmod thread yet.
>>3764
Are you scared to check it yourself without asking us to?
>>3764
You realize the old board got migrated, right?
>>3764
I'm staying in the webring, the ddos mitigation stuff is required but incredibly annoying to deal with as it fucks with normal use of the site, the captchas always have one fucking unreadable letter, it takes a minute for a post to actually go through, and I just don't trust an imageboard with qfags that won't shut up about the place on social media.
>>3768
I'll be slow to really take to julay. I mainly watch 8kun, and it's where things still get posted and requests for scenes still get accepted and written.
Until that ends, I think I can accept the faults much longer.
>>3770
> things still get posted and requests for scenes still get accepted and written.
Anon, I don't post in 8kun but I do lurk in there. I've seen one request posted, and another which was a proofread version of an older post. If you're talking about pure content posted after the old site came back then we're about tied with 8kun, though the discussions there is better.
>>3764
You are incorrect.
All the way through:
>Without a preamble,
Generally no "a" in that phrase.
>She's hardly a weight
That's not a thing you should write. "Too much weight" is fine, but "a weight" is not.
>Inscriptions, carvings, and remnants of all-but-faded murals, she tells you,
She tells you what? Are you saying that she's pointing out that these murals are murals as if the player needs confirmation of that fact?
>It's not bad.
A bit clunky.
>her light weight and naked feet pressing down on your spine
Her feet are on your spine? I thought she was riding side saddle.
>is making mental note of a few things under her quiet mutterings as you slowly,
Well, it's not truly "mental" notation is it, then?
>as you slowly, leisurely, make your way
Nix the second comma.
>The reason being her mind having gotten sidetracked entirely,
This is a pretty awkward phrasing in general, but you also just had a "being" absolute clause a short while ago.
>half of it a braid already.
I'd recommend the "in".
>pick up where she left
"off"
>And so, through pillars and roots you weave
Would probably recommend against that comma.
>Night time
One word.
>Marielle suddenly asks and indicates
Another of those awkward verbs joined to tags.
>leaning onto you as you do the same.
You're leaning onto yourself?
>Only that you don't have anything in the way of suitable snacks.
Random "that" in the middle of the sentence, and this sentiment strikes me as one that not everyone would have.
>Hmm... comfortable as a camelback,
There were camels in her world?
>you enjoy her closeness.
There was an "enjoy" last paragraph, if you care.
>she offers and taps you into motion again.
And another; you're on a roll.
>That's one word for it. \"<i>Hmm...</i>\" Glancing over your shoulder as you round the wide stump and steer clear of the morass around it,
A bit odd to have her dialogue interrupting your thought and action in the same paragraph, without even a tag to differentiate it (though even then, you'd probably want to separate them).
>(player.hasPerk(PerkLib.HistoryThief2) ? "You've stolen your fair share of them, but you can't say you're particularly deep in the matter of fine art, so"
I very much doubt the player was stealing paintings.
>The brief lapse in attention though has you nearly stepping into a narrow and no doubt deep hole in the ground
The placement of that "though" is very awkward; I'd recommend moving to the very end.

And we've broken free. Another journey well worth it; I believe only that one snuggle scene remains. We'll see if I muster the will to do that tonight.
>>3783
>I very much doubt the player was stealing paintings.
I want to but in and say I also think that's quite unlikely.
>>3783
>Her feet are on your spine? I thought she was riding side saddle.
Did you forget to read the previous sentences? Did I not make it clear enough what she's doing with "precariously balances on your back" and "using you as a living step ladder"?
>Nix the second comma
I do like using interjections even where I don't have to.
>Another of those awkward verbs joined to tags.
One of the few instances of these where I do concur.
>Random "that" in the middle of the sentence
That's not random, "only/except that" is neither new nor uncommon.
>this sentiment strikes me as one that not everyone would have
The sentiment that you don't have anything to snack on, or that lying down and relaxing in the middle of the bosom of nature with a girl on your back kinda feels like a picnic?
>There were camels in her world?
There are, though she's never seen one. She means a camelback couch.
>I very much doubt the player was stealing paintings.
Really? Even though you "were the most skilled thief around, and even to this day you’ve never been caught. Nobody can match you when it comes to finding valuable targets and escaping from danger unharmed"?
>And we've broken free.
And so we have. That rejection scene is only a handful of paragraphs, though haven't you already coded that in anyway? But let me thank you for all this shit, mate, proofreading almost twice over and everything. Probably could have done it without some retard lecturing me, but I don't want to think of how much longer it would have taken, and what quality it would have been.
>>3790
>Did I not make it clear enough what she's doing with "precariously balances on your back" and "using you as a living step ladder"?
For some reason I'd thought that the action had moved on back to general riding, my mistake.
>I do like using interjections even where I don't have to.
But this isn't interjecting. It makes no sense as an interjection, so you'd need to justify it more to keep the second comma.
>One of the few instances of these where I do concur.
Do you not make most of those changes? If not, you probably should have said something, because you should be.
>That's not random, "only/except that" is neither new nor uncommon.
Those two aren't the exact same; "except" would be fine here, but "only" feels distinctly wrong, and the only usages I can find that seem similar to yours are distinctly antiquated.
>The sentiment that you don't have anything to snack on,
That. It just feels like something not everyone would think of in that moment. Anorexics aside, staunch paladins and other more serious characters probably wouldn't. There are just plenty of kinds of people who wouldn't happen to think about food in a random situation like that, so it feels a bit forceful on your part.
>Really?
Yes, really. Why do you think there are a bunch of paintings to steal in Ingnam? Who would even buy stolen paintings from you? You're from a small, simple village, something that you seem all too happy to forget sometimes.
>though haven't you already coded that in anyway?
Yes, I realized my buffoonery only afterwards.
>Probably could have done it without some retard lecturing me
Such is life, but there are always more retards around. It was a pleasure to work with you.
>>3795
>Do you not make most of those changes?
Some I do, some I don't, and I've told you before that I disagree to some extent on that point.
>Those two aren't the exact same
But they are, and I can find printed examples as recently as 2015 with only a quick skim. I don't know whether that's a regional thing, as I've heard it rather often. Which leaves me a little baffled that you apparently haven't.
>it feels a bit forceful on your part
So, what, drop the whole picnic reference and go with some boringly neutral, stone-cold bullshit while you're snuggling with a little girl under a tree after you chose to let her ride on your back and go for a nice little trip outside?
>Yes, really. Why do you think there are a bunch of paintings to steal in Ingnam?
Did you even read past that single word, to the little excerpt I gave you? How many "valuable targets" and how much "danger" do you think Ingnam alone has? You don't think an elderly thief who prides himself with being the best around will only ever have ransacked his own tiny shitty town in bumfuck nowhere that, as you say, doesn't even have anything instead of having wandered a little, stolen from other towns, mansions, and caravans?
>>3798
>Which leaves me a little baffled that you apparently haven't.
I'm willing to accept that I'm just wrong. Or maybe it is regional, then.
>So, what, drop the whole picnic reference
The picnic's fine, I'm not saying to fuck your entire artistic endeavor. I just feel that this one aspect might need to be toned down.
>Did you even read past that single word, to the little excerpt I gave you? How many "valuable targets" and how much "danger" do you think Ingnam alone has?
Money and other valuables, but I doubt a whole lot of paintings, and it feels very off to mention them so specifically. I cite that random anon agreeing with me as staunch, irrefutable evidence.
>You don't think an elderly thief who prides himself with being the best around will only ever have ransacked his own tiny shitty town in bumfuck nowhere
That is a possibility, not a guarantee. I'm not saying that it's impossible that that background would indicate you've stolen paintings, just that you shouldn't assume that everyone who takes it has. It feels very odd to assert such a specific character detail when the player may have imagined any number of completely different backgrounds.
>>3799
>It feels very odd to assert such a specific character detail when the player may have imagined any number of completely different backgrounds.
What's the point of ever doing variations based on background, then, or even giving any flavour text when choosing one? I'll dial it back from the "fair share", but with that description and the fact that we're talking about an elder here, I think it's just ludicrous to assume that you've never even stolen a single one. And I think you and that anon might be overvaluing paintings a little bit. Sure, large, commissioned portraits or religious paintings always were costly, but smaller landscapes and still life were not. Here's an account on the distribution of art in the Netherlands during the mid-1600s by one John Evelyn, an English writer and traveller: "so furnished with pictures (especially landscapes and drolleries [...] as I was amazed. 'Tis an ordinary thing to find a common farmer lay out two or three thousand pounds in this commodity, their houses are full of them", and Peter Mundy, English Merchant, about the same time and country: "All in general strive to adorn their houses, [...] yea many times, blacksmiths, cobblers etc., will have some picture or other by their forge and in their stalls". Granted, the Dutch weren't quite the norm back then in that regard, hence those two's surprise, but it does go to show that paintings weren't just a thing for rich traders and nobles to enjoy. The town hall, the temple, the inn, the brothel, and some of the merchants—all should be rather likely to have at least one hanging somewhere, and may that be no larger than your monitor.
>>3802
>What's the point of ever doing variations based on background, then
Well I would generally advise being careful with those, yes. You're being ridiculous if you're trying to pretend you can't differentiate between vague and specific details. Stealing paintings is a specific act; being a thief is a vague status.
>I'll dial it back from the "fair share", but with that description and the fact that we're talking about an elder here, I think it's just ludicrous to assume that you've never even stolen a single one.
That's just incredibly stupid. Are you saying that every thief in the world (even in the present day) has stolen a painting in their lives? Now restrict that to thieves living in rural medieval villages. Now consider that you're not saying they've stolen just one, but their "fair share". It's built on a huge number of assumptions.
>during the mid-1600s
I do not even remotely get that as the time period for Ingnam. I would say roughly 400 years beforehand, give or take, but definitely nothing that modern.
>so furnished with pictures (especially landscapes and drolleries [...] as I was amazed.
So he was impressed by the fact that farmers had these, and you're using that as positive evidence? Huh?
>Granted, the Dutch weren't quite the norm back then in that regard,
Why are you bringing that up at all, then?

You have been consistently skewed in the wrong direction on this; I can think of multiple people agreeing with me, but can you think of a single person who's on your side in this?
>>3804
I do sometimes wonder if you're being illiterate on purpose. I'm flattered, but you don't have to do that just for me,
>their "fair share". It's built on a huge number of assumptions.
I said I would dial that one back, didn't I?
>I would say roughly 400 years beforehand, give or take
Ignoring anything added by mods, the schooling background mentions someone in town having a whole collection of books. Now, bound books, in contrast to simple paintings, were pretty expensive to make, so either that man is in truth the king himself, or we're talking at the very least the late 1400s.
>So he was impressed by the fact that farmers had these
He was impressed they had so many and would spend so much money on them. Can you read?
>Why are you bringing that up at all, then?
You can't read.
My point is that paintings were not nearly as rare a luxury as they're often made out to be, and that you could find them in different shapes, sizes, qualities, and quantities within the possession of nearly all walks of life. People have always loved to decorate their homes, it is one of the oldest arts in human history, and they have long been a wonderful target of theft and forgery. Nowadays, we have a lot of other, even easier crap to steal and sell, but thieves back then didn't have all that much to choose from when robbing the average citizen.
But yeah, I'm a big mean dummy for assuming that such a masterful thief like the PC might ever have the audacity to pocket a little painting and sell it somewhere for a quick and easy penny in his 50+ years of thieving life. What a horrendously out of character thing to assume. And while we're at it, how dare the PC tell Jojo that they broke into houses to steal stuff, how dare the paladin background assume that you actually want to murder all that is corrupt, how dare the game think that you've had sex if you've been a slut or whore, and how dare the PC go off on some cringey rambling about a topic that they surely have no clue about if they're an alchemist in that Helia mino scene.
>>3806
>Ignoring anything added by mods, the schooling background mentions someone in town having a whole collection of books.
I'd posit that we should focus more on the time period that's probably intended and then remove any inconsistencies from that perspective, given that I'm sure you'll agree it's unlikely that Fen really knew or cared about any of this. The 1400s would also sound reasonable enough to me, and I suppose we don't have enough of a picture of the overall world that it would be hard to pinpoint a reasonable time period, but I would argue that Ingnam is meant to be evocative of an extremely simple little hamlet. Tangentially, if you ever have any complaints or suggestions with regards to consistency there (especially since a lot of it is Revamp content), that would be very helpful.
>He was impressed they had so many and would spend so much money on them. Can you read?
Yes. I am reading how impressed he is by the ubiquity of paintings, and you haven't provided a baseline, so why am I meant to assume he's only impressed because the average household has 1.5x as many paintings or whatever? From what you've posted, there's no indication of whether a more reasonable amount would be one per household, or one per every three households, or even one per village. So why are you specifically bringing this up?
>You can't read.
>I'm deliberately using an example not indicative of the norm, but when you challenge me on this, I'll just say that because I already pointed it out myself, it's okay, and no further discussion of that is needed
Yeah okay. I guess I shouldn't ask for relevant evidence. I'm not saying that you don't have such evidence, as I'm sure you do. Rather, I was saying that the evidence you chose to present is bad.
>My point is that paintings were not nearly as rare a luxury as they're often made out to be...
I think it's a very reasonable point. I think it is perfectly fine to say that the player likely stole a painting at some point. I do not think it is good to write based on what the player is likely to have done.
>And while we're at it, how dare the PC tell Jojo that they broke into houses to steal stuff, how dare the paladin background assume that you actually want to murder all that is corrupt, how dare the game think that you've had sex if you've been a slut or whore, and how dare the PC go off on some cringey rambling about a topic that they surely have no clue about if they're an alchemist in that Helia mino scene.
But all those things are certain from the background. Are you being deliberately obtuse at this point? If your background says you fucked people for money, then you fucked people for money. If your background says you stole expensive things, you have not necessarily stolen paintings. You can say as many times as you want that it's likely the player stole paintings, but that doesn't matter at all if a player reads that and thinks that it's not in line with what they imagined. You are frequently very forceful with the kind of PC you imagine in a given scene, but that's not the goal of this kind of writing. You should be as inclusive of as many different kinds of characters as possible, rather than just the ones you like; whatever benefit you might see in forcing specific details, it's a disaster if it's out of character for a particular player. I cite the fact that you like to assume every single player character is able to identify birds as evidence that you don't value this enough.
Is this the official place we've migrated to by the way? I'm a bit late because i bet my horses on 8kun which was clearly a dumb idea.
>>3824
We're in some kind of limbo state where some anons want to stay here and some anons have moved there.
How come the discord is full of pseudonormies who don't even seem to be actual players of the game for the most part? Why do we have to share it with a huge amount of blogposting animeshitters who jerk each other off and post Instagram memes constantly?
>>3832
It's to contain them because otherwise they'd be leaking into our threads at a higher rate than they did before.
>>3833
It's unbelievable. There are fucking hundreds of them, some of whom have been in the channel for years, but they couldn't tell you who Amily is. Don't even get me started on the ones who use cute bunny boy avatars and type like children who are BLATANTLY underaged (13-16 would be my guess) trannies-to-be
>>3834
Post pictures.
>>3832
Shitscord is infested with trannies, furfags and oher garbage.
Only era games shitscord was somewhat ok, but it still got nuked twice by namefag drama.
>>3832
>the discord
It's not the discord, it's just discord. The CoC modding discord is for all mods overall, and hgg's can't even mention loli there.
All discord groups are terrible though. Even the hgg mod's private one
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>>3839
Reminder from LC dev that centering anon projects outside of the place it came from invites disaster.
>>3840
I do worry that the long lack of an active home was too much of a hit to the project, but writing, proofreading, and ideafaggotry have always happened in the thread, and things seem to be picking back up.
>>3820
>But all those things are certain from the background
Sure, but how would you know? By your own logic, having broken into houses doesn't follow from being a thief either. For sluts and whores, you could have just given blowjobs and handies your entire life, and who's to say you don't secretly hate the paladin code?
>you like to assume every single player character is able to identify birds
Yes, such incredible feats of the mind as "Sparrows, perhaps", "Likely an owl", or "Could be a crane or heron". How terrible to assume the PC is indeed not a toddler any more and has achieved a grasp on shapes, sounds, and words. I would give that point to you if I was being specific about what kind of owl/crane/whatever, but if that's what you're bemoaning, then I honestly don't know what you want from me. Just not give a name to anything? After all, how could the PC in their bottomless imbecility ever know it?
>>3834
>expecting fen cocksuckers to know about one of the more prudish waifus

They probably know about Helia, though.
>>3843
There was definitely a way more specific bird in the initial draft of one of the bath scenes, and I'm definitely too uncultured to be able to confidently identify a heron. Anyway, I think that there's a line between what's safe to assume and what's not, and I also think that stealing paintings is on the wrong side. I can only appeal to the court of public opinion for further evidence.
>>3845
Shouldn't paint stealing be a global flag at this point? Just for checks like these.
>>3847
I'll support that, as well as more painting stealing opportunities in the game.
>>3844
>muh fen and savin boogeymen
They hated and disowned CoC before they'd even finished it, to think they still seethe over people modding it is retarded
I'm talking serious a entry level "I played CoC once after seeing a shitpost thread on /v/ about it while looking for Mario memes" understanding of the game. Not "how do I remove vine?" but "Woah there's a city in the desert" or "Haha the dragon lady in the swamp is funny".

Why would you join a fucking discord channel for a game you play and care about that little? How do you even find it in the first place? These people are subhuman
>>3845
>a way more specific bird in the initial draft of one of the bath scenes
A shearwater behind an INT check, yes, and that mainly for the pun.
>>3849
>to think they still seethe over people modding it is retarded
They verifiably do, though. Or at least, Savin does. Fenoxo hasn't cared about CoC for many years now, including when he was still working on it. Savin on the other hand constantly and actively talks shit about mods and the people making it, and of course his bootlicker staff and followers eat it up like all the wet farts he produces.
>>3852
Wonder how it chafes his ass that everything people like about CoC2 was made by better authors. All while his waifu slutcat is ignored.
>>3852
proofs? In the cuck-in-chief's defence kitteh and whatever chink is making that other combat simulator would ruin the game if they were given free reign to but I'd love to see evidence that he's still angry about them even now

>>3853
The worst part is that his main contribution to the game is its lore which is an utter fucking unfollowable snoozefest which still fails to top CoC1's despite being a hundred times more intricate, aka filled with a hundred times more completely irrelevant exposition and tryhard DnDesque bullshit because Savin is even worse at writing dialogue and story than sex scenes. It's like he had the idea in his head for years and as soon as the game was out he couldn't wait to tell us all about the 500 different gods of polyamory and force upon us a ten page history of that tiny village to the west that you'll get to visit in a few years time and learn about how the local warlords used to tax the peasants too highly before, after a twelve year period of rising resentment and disagreement between the warlords and barons of other villages to the east(which all also have their own ten-page backstories), the peasantry finally decided tZZZZZ
>>3853
I'm sure his willing crowd of sycophants prevents even the slightest thought that he might not be god's gift to smut from entering his head.
>>3855
>>3854
Like seriously, whenever I hear praise for CoC2 it's usually aimed at A) the harpy broodmother, B) the breeding-obsessed dog girl or C) the ghost kitsune waifu.

Meanwhile he references Cait in every fucking dialogue, gives her special scenes and variants and puts her as the postergirl and nobody gives a single fuck.
>>3856
His forced OCs have only gotten worse over time
>Helia to Anno to Cait
>"I'll fuck who I want but only love you, come join me and stuff this minotaur's ass and we'll rob him afterwards" to "I like you, but I'm going to have sex with this random guy at the bar. See you later!" to "I love everyone, I have no personality, by the way here's a trigger warning that I'm going to fuck absolutely everyone, you silly snowflake :^)"
>>3856
>the ghost kitsune waifu
All of that fucking weirdo's stuff is borderline unreadable because I can already tell the pseud writer who made her has masturbated to the 2deep4u dream scenes that have no sex more than anyone else has masturbated to her actual sex scenes
>>3854
>proofs?
Please don't make me dig through that faggy Fenoxo discord again. I've already done it too much to dig up old CoC design documents. Kitteh is in their discord server, and every time he mentions his mod he gets shit on by Savin and everyone there. It's a good thing he's supremely autistic, because it doesn't even seem to bother him that everyone there hates his work, he continues on talking about it anyway.
>The worst part is that his main contribution to the game is its lore which is an utter fucking unfollowable snoozefest which still fails to top CoC1's despite being a hundred times more intricate
It's not just that. Probably what is the main and biggest writer for CoC2 is The Observer, who much like Savin has absolutely and truly genuinely no idea what the lore for CoC was.

I could unironically rant on for hours on end how Savin is fucked in the head and how CoC2 has absolutely ZERO consistency with CoC because they're too stupid to understand their own lore, but I'm afraid it would come out as nothing but a ranting tangent that goes on far too long and wastes too much of everyone's time, mine included.
>>3859
For what it's worth I'd be supremely interested to hear about it so you wouldn't be ranting at thin air
>>3860
Same.

>>3858
It's kind of pretentious, but it has some goooood shit.
>that scene where she pounces on you and fucks you right on the porch because she wants a kit so badly
Sand witch fag here, I've been boning up on the in-game stuff and I think I've decided in what direction to go in. I'm starting small with expanding a notable sand witch(the one you can fuck after you get entrance to the dungeon) into a full character.

Here's the rough draft of her description.
https://pastebin.com/5fhyFC4L

I added the tattoo myself because the dungeon is blatantly half assed and I want to expand on the sand witches in a logical way. They all get the circle at puberty and it fills the names of their children to help track bloodlines.
.>>3869
>They all get the circle at puberty and it fills the names of their children to help track bloodlines.
No offense but that's a pretty stupid idea. And don't they have dozens of children each so they'd end up with their entire backs covered in names, if they fit at all?
>>3877
>And don't they have dozens of children each so they'd end up with their entire backs covered in names, if they fit at all?
They're not quite at goblin levels, and it's a large circle. In my mind the magical brands send a warning if inbreeding is about to happen, given how they're basically a eugenic cult.
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Loving missionary with Sylvia when? Dolores pregnancy when?
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>>3879
What we need more of in a porn game are contraceptives and reminders that inbreeding creates genetic fuckups and retards. You're not the person who came up with STDs and tried to get abortion clinics added to TiTS by any chance are you?
>>3881
There's the meal option for the former currently in the game.
>>3869
>>3879
if you've got enough dicks and stamina you can fuck literally the entire section of the coven that's at half-occupancy in that one side room. Nothing comes of that, sure, but it is a thing that happens. I don't think inbreeding is a problem magic can't solve.
>>3898
I meant an actual separate sex scene where Sylvia guides you to the bedroom to take her properly with lots of degenerate foreplay like handholding, kissing and saying you love her .
It's different than fucking her on the table.
>>3883
I hope Mothman makes this happen, can't wait to have moth kids with her
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>>3881
I just noticed that the "moths only have 1-2 children tops" can easily be bypassed by based incest.
Is there male moths is its a female only race?
>>3889
>You're not the person who came up with STDs and tried to get abortion clinics added to TiTS by any chance are you?
Did someone really try to do that?
>>3941
Yes.
>>3919
>It's different than fucking her on the table.
But not really different from her other interactions, so I don't really understand what's new that you want. I'm tentative to write scenes with too much overlap (though I'll note that people are still free to write moth content if it fits).
>I hope Mothman makes this happen, can't wait to have moth kids with her
My position hasn't changed.
>>3940
It's not "tops", they just have a low average.
>Is there male moths is its a female only race?
The latter.
>>3943
Can you elaborate, that seems like a fun story.
>>3944
>The latter.
Then we must incest more moths ourselves.
This is not a drill. She has broken containment, and I can't find her author's handler anywhere.
https://mega.nz/#F!bKRAxKpQ!WrNiCibeU8zh-Y5_fGAMcw
This is a test build with all of Marielle's content. Some stuff has been tested more than other stuff, but given the huge amount of it all, there's guaranteed to be more errors hiding somewhere. There are a few other bug fixes and things, but no other major additions at present. Any feedback is appreciated, and I hope the wait hasn't been to agonizing.
>>3951
Honestly there's not much to actually say. An anon really wanted magical STDs and abortion clinics ended up causing a multiple day shitstorm in the Liliths Throne threads because either the anon himself was a sperg or some other sperg latched onto it and began shitposting for hours on end. The shitposting anon would get constantly banned because he wasn't able to reign in his autism.
When the mods decided to step in and ask in meta on how severe they should treat it, the guy himself popped in to post and they basically let everyone involved shitpost nonstop for two hours before coming back when everyone involved was out of steam. Here's the link, ctrl + f LT thread
https://archive.md/tms0p
>>3953
Fucking finally, it only took 2 years.
>>3958
So just like the harpy wing autism that we got some months ago? Interesting.
Thanks for the link.
>>3953
Added a version of the .swf where the encounter rate for the bog temple is boosted to max.
>>3962
Was going to just ask what that was, also, what needs to be tested?
>>3963
Everything, to some degree. The most recently added parts were the bath stuff and the lewd menu, so those have had the least eyes on them, but it's just generally helpful to have random characters go through content to see what strange things pop up.
Thread limit is 760 posts! Gonna need a new thread very soon.
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>>3964
Is this normal?
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>>3964
>>3966
Also this.
>>3966
>>3967
Fixed, thanks.
How do you remove the vines?
>>3969
Here's a hint: Change your skin texture.
The actual answer: Slimy cloth from goo girls in the lake
>>3965
I am skeptical about this claim
>>3972
I think what I thought was the setting to automatically lock the thread after 760 posts was just one to bumplock it and Julay doesn't actually have that functionality. I'll just manually lock the thread from now on. Somebody make the thread.

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